Thank you guys, ive tried to respond to the comments so far... thank you all for reading I'm busy for the next to days but I will pop in and out of this thread and try to update towards the end of the week (weekend.) I will keep editing this post to reply back to you an when i get comments/ questions.
@ Katelyn thank you very much for reading, always lovely to have your feedback. Yes.. I guess the story has taken a plunge into the deep end but then that is what was described In the intro- got to stay true to my words.
I like to think each of my ffs goes into the depths of the characters, this one will too fingers crossed, you will see much more to ASR.
Thank you once again.
@chavvi16 yey I did contemplate if it was too early but then I didn't want to loose the storyline..if I had given it time I think I would have made a mushy love story from end to finish.have to stick to the storyline.
@dolly477 thanks
@arnkhunostalgic hmm I think it needed too (glad you think so), I kind of feel this one is one of those that is very blunt towards the beginning and will take shape as we progress.
@russelskhushi does it.. ? I kind of prefer cliff hangers whilst this is a little of narration I guess in the pre-cap. Yes he isn't cheating on her. bit of credit for him there.
@ sushi08 im glad you like it...I wasn't expecting the compliment cute...but I hope it does turn out cute..i mean it will of course
@ @Katelyn will try to update soon
@Shafoo and Javeria3991 thank you
@ fanAR added you, please feel free to give it a read.
@ranogill wow twice..go that's lovely of you I guess you know where all my errors are, p.s I think arnav is in a bit of term oil over Laavanya, you will see his progression with that too.
@ jas0308 I think you are totally right, Arnav is using Khushi for his own needs..seen as Laavanya is left his life he is looking for someone to replace her I think, next best thing and most convenient I guess Is probably Khushi. - thank you for reading .
@ shubhi15 you are right I wouldn't say he loves her, anything but that I guess hes looking for someone to replace laavanya. Will try to update soon.
@ kushiarnav1 really liked you feedback, there is a sense of attraction from both sides, whilst Arnavs is towards Khushi as a woman I think Khushi's attraction is more towards her husband. Its intrigue of the relationship she has with him too, which will be highlighted as the story goes on. Ruling over people I guess is in his nature but ..how that changes remains to be seen.
@ Kritianya thanks
@ adhu11 haha..never had this many excited readers over the precap.. lol I don't usually have very much mature content in my ffs, when I do like to present it in a more stuble way as not to offend anyone ...however this concept requires this type of basis for it to progress..although I thought the precap was pretty rubbish to be honest..lol -okay jokes apart thank you for reading.
@saarah96 thank you for reading, he certainly is, as inhumane as it may sound he is doing just that but then if he was perfect to begin with the journey would not be one worth reading.
Ghum Hai Kisikey Pyaar Meiin
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