Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#881

who is dat person which is drenched in blood😲

and astha is at shlok home oh ho

and anjali has an idea data astha will bring shlok on the right track hmmm interesting

do update soon

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tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#882

awsum update..
shlok dream is confusing..
omg astha is scolding shlok..
waiting for next part..

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#883

Loved the update thank you

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Hally

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Posted: 11 years ago

#884

Poor Shlok man
But why stop it there
Wah a way to end a chapter
Now u makin me wait again 😆
Update soon

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saranyagulam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#885

mmm nice update yaar...u r portrait more about the feeling...I can imagine the scene... pls can u write more about the story... coz I feel like its inch by inch moving... sorry if I hurt u...

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saranyagulam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#886

mmm nice update yaar... u r portrait abt the feeling very well and I can imagine the scene very well... but pls can u write more abt the story...coz I feel like its inch by inch moving...sorry if I hurt u...

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desikahani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#887

Happy New Year!! thank you for the lovely gift of an update for us all :) - absolutely loved it (and all of your other work!).

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#888

awesome update
loved it
astha scolding shlok is nice
shlok dream is scary
but the unknown mask girl is astha right
did anything happen to her
but now she is fine ... All confusion
continue soon
thanks for the pm