Ashlok FF:DESIRE CALLS...Chapt-24,pg-149 UPDATED!

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Ziva01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Awesome update...Mr. Beggar 😲 Shlok Agnihotri🤣...I can visualize Shlok expression 😆

Thxs for the pm

Plzzz do continue soon

Stay blessed rab rakha

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priyavin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Mr dirty beggar - Shlok Agnihotri

Nice update, please pm me when you update next

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LuvStrk-001

@LuvStrk-001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Amazing update dear!!!😊

Thanks for PM and Sharing!!!!

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Mr. Beggar!!!

That was really an amazing and fun filled update!!

And Shlok thought that he was much more scarier, A ghost indeed!!

Continue soon and thanks for the PM.

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik
i m first to comment...
very nice updet...
awee beggar shlok...😆
continue soon...dear...

Thank u!😃

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
wow Mr begger 🤣

😆Thank u!😛

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: sumana561
Handsome beggar 🤣 nice update.

Handsome yes!😳Thank you!

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TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: tamanna-azaan
nice one dear...
astha didnt see shlok suit...

She was blinded by the mud nd also lying comfortably above the suited body!So jst saw his face wid a glimpse of seconds..😳Thank you!

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: MalikaRose
amazing update dear
loved the dirty beggar 😆

beautifully written

continue soon

Cheers>

Thank u so much!🤗

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Sofia13
Superb Update😊
Continue sOon...n do pm me😳

Thank you!Nd ofcrs will pm!😉

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