Arshi OS: Forget Me Not ~ TY Note Page 48 - Page 32

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey!
I am back, sorry fo the long absence, it was something unexpected even for me.

Anyway, I am glad that you're working on writing other peices besides Making Khushi Mine 2. Always enjoy reading your work with its distinct style... and this piece was spectacular as always.

The starting scene was so romantic with him bringing her lovely roses and being awfully nervous about meeting Khushi.. at first I thought that it was simply Arnav was chasing after a lovely Khushi who kept brushing of his advances. Him getting jealous of roses was just too adorable.. but then came the surprise. It was quite shocking to know that her indifferent attitude was apparently due to her amnesia!

Though her attitude was well justified considering that she was a naive innocent girl charmed by a snob.I could totally imagine her following Arnav around like a puppy being completely enchanted by him.. but I get Arnav here too. He was simply a guy being sort of forced into a relationship, and knowing all too well about the 'club culture' its easy to understand why he foresaw Khushi's inability to cope with his life style..and then Khushi seemed to be acting like something she wasnt. Who knew that all she needed to really do is be herself and Arnav would be hers.

Poor guy, he fell in love at the wrong time. His longing and pain was just so sad. Getting the taste of his own medicine must have been really bitter.. and it was so ironic that he didnt want to let go of his engagement ring while he tried his best to get out of this relationship.Him wanting to break of the relationship is something I really respected because really he was doing both Khushi himself a favour. He would have hated being forced to marry someone and would have kept hurting her with his indifference and contempt.

By the end of it, I so knew Khushi had remembered everything! The ending scene was so cute and fit the title perfectly. It was nice to see both Khushi and Arnav on their way for a happily ever after with him working to make her forget the past and showing her the new him!

Hope you continue to write more one shots or short stories:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Arnav bringing flowers for his lady love regularly & waiting for a small acknowledgement from her but feeling dejected on seeing her acting otherwise but he putting up a calm & undisturbed face still adorning a smile in front of her brought out the turmoil that he was facing within. Whoa!!! Is the great ASR who always claims to not have a heart, cry that this young lady, Khushi has no heart 😲 ... interesting

Arnav suddenly feeling J over the roses & pacifying that he deserved to be ignored made me feel sad for him on one side but my mind kept wondering as to what he had done to face the ever sweet girl's cold behavior 😲

The portion where Arnav complains to his dad after seeing Khushi for the 1st time was awesomely written. For a minute I thought Ranjeet was genuinely impressed by the girl's traditional & soft nature & had chosen her for his son but then the predominant factor for insisting on the proposal being money put me down regarding Ranjeet 😔 Buddy u have beautifully focused on how in some of the Indian arranged marriage system, status & money are given utmost priority than the bride & the grooms wishes 👏

The contrast scenes before the accident where Arnav used to crib for having to meet her & he upset for her not so posh lifestyle; & Khushi head over heels in love with the chosen groom while after the accident the scene taking a complete change of Arnav in love with Khushi & he waiting expectantly for a small gesture of love from her side & trying his level best to remain patient & keep trying no matter how many times she refused to acknowledge him but Khushi considering his daily meeting for name sake parallelly pictured how fate had made a complete turn in two lives by a mere accident

Arnav meeting Khushi without fail daily at the dot of the time with flowers & refusing to travel so as to never miss the meet & he expectantly waiting for her approval & he not losing hope inspite of the apathy she's showing on him threw light on how a man with a different social setting who initially disliked a girl who wasn't in par with his posh life style later gradually fell in deep & boundless love & couldn't digest the fact of he being disliked & ignored by her & also how he tried his level best to win her heart with his daily meets

I loved Arnav's mom 🤗 rather than his dad since she looked more deeply into what a wonderful, innocent & lively woman Khushi was; also for the pains she took to help Khushi change herself as per Arnav's preferences & also for making Arnav realize & understand the lovely character that Khushi had & how she'll make the best wife for the short-tempered young man

Arnav frustrated by Khushi freaking at parties, he wondering if family is so very important & to add it up her dressing style irking him all the more & steam seeping through his ears on recollecting about her ambition of meeting Salman Khan; then he finally deciding to let go his dream project since he didn't want to ruin his life together with Khushi's & mustering courage all the while to break his engagement but Khushi's accident brought out how fate played its own game on this young man's life since at present Arnav's heart is bleeding on Shashi's decision of breaking off the engagement

Arnav sobbing in his car & reminiscing their past of how she forgot him after the accident & she not only ignoring him absolutely but also distancing herself after knowing that he was her fiance hurting him extremely & he unable to bear the taste of his own medicine; he realizing Khushi's worth of how she put up with his temper tantrums with a sweet smile though she didn't have to; & also recollecting how he fell in love with her & cursing him for over-looking the innocent angel & her love ; the man who hated her talks & considered it silly now longing & waiting for hours to hear her sweet innocent words & also worry itching his heart at the thought of being too late was fantastically narrated 👏

Arnav then gathering his courage & entering her mansion, Kaka shocked on witnessing the shattered state of the lover boy, Arnav asking her if she thought that he wouldn't turn up but her answer surprising him; he insisting her to keep the ring as a token of his memory but she refusing it repeatedly by saying that it didn't fit her right since the engagement, it suddenly dawning on him that Khushi does remember him & his rage over taking his senses & he confronting her of lying but she narrating to him as to how she was shocked the other day when she heard him tell his mother that he didn't want a WIP wife & so that's the reason for she concealing the truth of her regaining her memory associated with him was a wonderful scene bringing out Arnav's sharp mind of assimilating her lies, the truth returning the pain he made her undergo & he feeling broken

The scenes where Arnav pleads for second chance but she denying him & he repeatedly praying for one in different possible ways; finally he using his last luck by kissing her madly & that serving his luck & Khushi's small approval pushing his guilt aside & he kissing her passionately on her lips was so romantic & lovely ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ... hmmm ... Arnav's a smart chap 😉

When Arnav compliments Khushi for being a good kisser, she with mock anger denying marriage but he firmly telling her that he'll be marrying only her; he apologizing & finally asking her to forget the past but never ever to forget him was so sweet 🤗 ... loved the ending . Thanks for the mail

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was a pretty good story with a great plot :-) i liked the way he was trying to make her recall her memory ... all the time whn he used to come to her wth flowers .. tht was sweet ... n .. i liked the end most ... how khushi was carefully denying the fact tht she has nt forgot him .. **thumbs up ** .. liked the happy ending ..
Edited by AALUSLOLWA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one
waiting for more os
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Posted: 11 years ago


sorry for commenting late

Loved the OS

its beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful superb emotional OS... thanks for writing and sharing with us.
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was simply beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the way you had approached the story!!!!!!!!!!!
the slow but surely steady way in which Arnav fell in love with her!!!!!!!
Khushi acted her part of forgetting him well!!!!!!!!!
well all's well that ends well...
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Posted: 11 years ago
You write beautiful stories. Have been hooked to all of them. But this surely ranked as your best. Love it to bits.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...it was one beautiful os,,,,,lovd it...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this one
Cute and nice

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