Arshi OS: Forget Me Not ~ TY Note Page 48

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@flowers4u

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#301

heart breakingly beautiful ...loved it...

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@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Your most welcome dear and thanks for the note.

Can't wait for your other one shots, eagerly waiting xx

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#303

That was a great kickass OS.

I loved this Khushi...and i so agree with what everyone before me has said. I liked this khushi who decided to give Arnav a taste of his own medicine. She loved arnav to bits but still decided to let him go rather than hold on to him give his dislike for her.

I am actually glad that arnav didn't know of khushi's deception right till the end i am sure it was her charade which helped him realise what she has become for me.

As usual a great take and i am looking forward to reading such wonderful shots from you.

Now what about the next chapter of MKM2.

Thanks for the PM.

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Seethu

@Seethu

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

I'm not sure where to start with the praise !!! I'm first fascinated by your narration at the same time the gripping plot ...AWESOME !!!

I want to write more but not able to at this moment !!!

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celinawalter

@celinawalter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

waiting for 2-shots of ur work A... eagerly!!!

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

Though v eager to read ur another os, pleeez update MKM !!!

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tkymarar

@tkymarar

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

hatts of to you..
loved it

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#308

Hey,
firstly this is one of such os es that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. There had been such curiosity that had been building. With those little clues that kept coming that threw light on Khushi s' truth, the actual moment of truth, when it came , had been written incredibly. Add to that display of anger what with all that throwing the ring case and shutting the door and then moving like a predator.. Wow! =)
I started fangirling.
It was realistic in a painful way. Most women in such a situation wouldnt have the luxury for their love to be reciprocated. Same had happened with Khushi but the accident came as a boon. Her mind shutting out the heartaching past and when the memory came back, she thought to make that sacrifice. For his good and in turn maintain her self respect. But Gods had other plans and I felt some sadistic pleasure to see Arnav suffering.

But ofcourse, I fangirled again at the sweet concluding part. Kisses , my ever favourite 😆

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#309

Simply awesome . I loved the story.

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foesb

@foesb

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#310

Read it for the second time😃 I think you should start writing professionally, whether its Arhi or non-Arhi I'm sure everything you write will be a super hit! I wish I had at least a fraction of your talent!