*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Make Me Love - Page 35

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Posted: 11 years ago
awww
amazing dear
finally asr vl try smhow
bt w8 how she vl create feeling fr him
w8 fr next prt dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant chapter
Loved it
Khushi did her best to not to accept nk
Arnav is not ready to accept khushi
I'm worried here what will happen now? ????????
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Posted: 11 years ago
zehra!!!👏⭐️👏⭐️

with above emoticons u mist have guessed how much i liked this update. i loved it. 🤗
Finally, a hug in the end!!! oh we will not be much behind at having "AHEM" * "AHEM".
but first, lets talk about this update.

well, to tell u truthfully, i don't know whose side i should take coz both are right in their stand. i understand Khushi's condition, as she feels secure and protected with him around and well, she loves him. moreover she is right in her stand that she cannot make herself fall in love deliberately for someone else when she already is! & Arnav, perhaps he has always loved her as a family but has never seen her as some special for himself... & their Age Difference is also a hurdle right now (though not in near future of course).😕

seriously, i have never been in such a fix to side with the characters situation than i am now. and i am curious to know the unrevealed past between Arnav and Khushi. is it relevant or not?? only u can tell--- the karta & dharta of MML😉 and then finally the appearance of the the title of the story, and the way u gave it a complete meaning with regards to the story.

them i liked this NK- he is a sensible guy. Arnav, i loved his role in this update-- he shouted, got irritated, became furious-- all these for the 1st time with his darling Khushi and then again, he after doing all he above can't see HER in pain and no tears in her eyes... & hugs her!!! oh, how i loved this Arnav.❤️⭐️

so, again, demanding/requesting for a quicker update...😆


Edited by celinawalter - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally title has made an appearance
"Make me care, make me like spending time, make me feel, make me feel something, make me feel anything, make me like someone, make me love, make me love someone like I love you"

khushi has put her heart n soul by sayng d abv lines 2 arnav
super updt

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Posted: 11 years ago
The more I read this story the more i fall in love with your writing lazyloo

Lamhe has always been one of my fav movie and this FF reminds me so much of that...and the way you r developing this story my sincere salute to you for that...it is not easy to write something unconventional...

Love doesnt understand any barriers so does not heart..Khushi has fallen in love with Arnav...so how will she give NK a chance...loving the way she agreed with Arnav but went ahead with her plan...go girl..

Loved the last few sentence...what powerful lines..."Make me care, make me like spending time, make me feel, make me feel something, make me feel anything, make me like someone, make me love, make me love someone like I love you"indeed Arnav make her love someone the way she loves you...jo dil mein basa ho use kaise nikalegi...

Waiting eagerly to know what is happening in Arnav's mind as well..he is fiercely possessive about Khushi as well and the way he hugged the crying Khushi it does show he cares and he cares a lot..now why is he hanging back..it it just because of the age difference and the social pressure but is there something else as well...


Edited by Aparamegha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME...LOVED IT...
THAT LAST " MAKE ME..." PART ...WOWW...
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ...!!!
Thanks 4 d PM .
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part...
khushi met nk wid as per arnav's request...
nk complained arnav...
khushi get rid of nk...
want to know arnav's past...
arnav hugging shattered khushi...
update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dis story getting intresting dear...

would love to read what you bring next...
I wanna know arnav pov too on khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Seriously this khushi has arnav all around her little finger.poor guy can't do anything...apart from d age gap he literally brought her up...waiting for his pov
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Posted: 11 years ago
great one! :)

khushi's obstinacy and arnav's helplessness is so beautifully portrayed by you! im falling more and more in love with this story at the same time my curiousity is at its peak! what happens next only you know that. im not even in a position to guess. :P :)

but i really want arshi to be together at the end, howsoever unjustified i sound right now ! i have been reading few depressing stories for a while where arshi separate, physicallly, and that has been giving me sleepless nights! really, not kindding :P :P

i have read your story 'hold my hand' and pls dont put us in a vague position where we have to decide what is the end coz i always end up thinking the worst!! 😆
and i guess you wont like me to have another sleepless night? :P

i have many interpretation of the story's title "Make Me Love" like as per this update, it means khushi's request to make her forget arnav and love someone else as they can never be together and the story ends when that happens? and dare you do that! 😡 so start changing the ending if that is what you have thought!! 😆😳

and want to know what made YOU to name the story this?? what's your interpretation? and ofcourse other people's point of view too, if any? 😊

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