A TAAREY FF TILL MY LAST BREATH CHAP 27+NOTE PAGE 84 UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5:

The gang runs behind Annu to find her getting inside a car and leaving...
Vishaka: whose car is it???
Swayam: tansia's...
Gang were shocked and looked at Swayam
Vishaka: how do you know...
Swayam:(his nostrils were flaring)who else can it be...anni di,my foot...
and marched to college,leaving the rest in confusion. Then they followed Swayam...

REHEARSAL HALL:
When the gang came to the hall,Swayam was sitting on floor,staring at the ceiling...
Rey sat by his side..
Sharon: Swayam,give her some time,she will come to you...
Swayam didn't reply to this..
Rey kept his hand on his shoulder:'hey Swayam,cheer up...
Swayam: i don't know what to do,yaar. bohot helpless feel kar raha hoon,esa lag raha hain ki, i'm loosing my sister with every passing day...
Amar: esa kuch nahi hai Swayam...hum hain na tere saath...trust us...
Swayam nodded..
Bharath: waise bhi hame ndc keliye hi toh prepare karna hain na...
Vishaka: is it really needed to continue with this...
Neha: yes,because we should show Taani that we can win this without her help...
Everyone agreed to this and started their practise

After their practise except Sharon,Swayam,Rey every one left...
Rey: Swayam,chal bohot late ho gaya hain,Tanusha dar jayagi yaar...
Swayam looked at him and gave a weak smile
Swayam: ghar jaane ka bilkul maan nahi hain,vapis jaakar pir se jagad hoga uske saath...pata nahi use kaise...
Sharon: why don't you buy some gift for her...you can make her feel comfortable...
Swayam considered that...
Swayam: i think that is a good idea...
Tey: tune use se Taani ke bare mein kuch pucha..
Sharon and Swayam glared at him...
Swayam: uski naam bhi maath le mere saamne,mein us naam se nafrath kartha hoon...
Rey hung his head..
Swayam: us se abhi bhi pyaar karta hain na tu...
Rey did not reply..
Swayam: forget her rey,move on in your life...
Rey: even if i try i can't swayam...she was my love,my life...my everthing...i feel incomplete without her...
There was silence...
Sharon: well then bye...got to go...
Swayam: we are also leaving... i need to buy something for annu...

SWAYAM'S HOUSE:

Annu opens the door for him..Swayam comes in ,to find her talking on phone..
Annu: haan di...bhai aagaye..
Swayam waits for her to cut the call so that he can give her the gift...but she ignores him and goes to her room..
Annu: vaise aaj raat ka plan kya hain...hmmm...kya banaya hain dinner keliya...aapke haath ke khana khane ka bohot man kar raha hain...
Swayam is getting restless...but still he controls himself,because he cannot afford for another fight..
Annu: itna bhi jaaldi kya hain...kuch dare aur baath karte hain na,plz...but...(little angerily)ok,then bye..
She cuts the call and goes to her room.
Swayam: taani...
Annu stops and turns...
Annu:yes..
Swayam takes the gift outside and extends it towards her:ye tumhare liye...
Annu taking it: thank you...
and turns to her room
Swayam: par..khol ke toh dekho is mein kya hain...
Annu: ok...
She opens the wrapper to find a costly perfume inside it...she just smirks..
Annu(sarcastically): wow,mera favorite...thank you bhaiyaa,..
Swayam frowns at this:what happened,you don't like this...mene bohot pyar se ye tumhare liye leke aya tha...
Annu(mocking him): areee...aap ese kyun keh rahe ho...aap ka gift mujhe bohot pasand aya..your love can be seen in this...but just one little problem...
Swyam: what
Annu: i'm allergetic to jasmines

Swayam didn't know what to reply
Swayam: i'm really sorry...i didn't know that
Annu:(smiles at him) i didn't expect you to...
and goes to her room...
Swayam sat on the sofa ,he was ashamed of himself...

NEXT DAY:
COLLEGE:

As Rey entered the college, he found everyone staring at him...he smiled at them but they just stared at him...
One student came to him : you guys are really practising hard,aren't you...ndc trophy is ours...
Rey: of course,why this doubt now...
Student: don't let her win...prove her wrong...
Rey: what are you talking about...
St:nothin
He then goes away...Rey goes to rehearsal hall to find all his friends were fuming in anger...
Rey: what happened...
no one said anything...
Rey: what is it...someone tell me,please...
Nil came and gave him his phone: read it...
Rey reads it:

NDC RESULTS:
D3 TEAM LOOSES THE NDC TROPHY...

shocked...don't be. better be prepared LOUINS to face something like this...because your D3 team is going to face their worst defeat...
you may be thinking that it is some joke...well,i'm sorry but the reality is always harsh...
D3 can never dream to win this NDC without one person...and it is none other than your ex GS MISS TAANI...
If she left the NDC then it means that D3 would even stand a chance to win this how much ever hard you prepare...
So be prepared all of YOU-LOUINS,D3-everyone because its payback time...fate will make you to pay for every hardship that YOU gave to taani...

your WELLWISHER...
ALL THE BEST D3...

Rey looked a his friends..all of them angry beyond limit..he knew that he should carefully handle this matter..
Vicky: it is her work...i'm sure...
Vishaka: i agree, it can't be anyone else...
Rey: guys,don't you think you taking this rather seriouly...come on guys,it is just some rubbish...take it easy,..
Simmi: take it easy,rey...just 1 day left and something like this...
Rinni: what if we loose..
Rey: this is exactly what this person wants...whoever it is wants us to be distracted...its a trap guys...
Swayam: he is right...we should take this as a challenge and prove her wrong...come on guys...
saying this he extends his hand and everyone keeps their hand on it and shouts'DIL,DOSTI,DANCE'...

After final rehearsal everyone left as they needed some rest,because tomorrow is the Ndc finals..
Rey and Swayam were checking wheather they kept all the props..
Swayam: how can she stoop so low...
Rey: it is not taani,swayam
Swayam(looks at him in disbelief): what rubbish,everyone knows it is her work...
Rey: i know her swayam,i understand her...she will never do this...
Swayam(horrified): rey,you are unbelievable,tum usse abhi bhi pyaar karte ho...
Rey: Swayam we are through this topic...i don't want to discuss on this again...all i know is that it is not taani,she will never do this...
saying this rey left from there before swayam can say anything against his LOVE...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
oMG wat a update , i
love it rey's trust 4r taani
was so nice👏 and moreover
tanusha's attitude was too
good. now am desperatly waiting
4r next mysterious update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
awesome updt
interesting
loved to see rey still trust taani
curious to read further
updt soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awesome update
love to see reys trust for taani
story is getting interesting
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
I like Annu reply to Swayam lol
How can he just forget everything Taani has done for him...
Aww I love that Rey still has that much trust in his Taani
Yahh he still love her...
Lovely update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome update!!
I just wish swayam to feel guilty for his this attitude towards Tani :/
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
I think I'll have to read the entire story again in order to understand it.
I'm confused between who all these people are: Taani, annu, Tansia, Tanusha and others. Are they all different or the same & what the hell is their relation. I wish there was a character sketch with pictures of each, which would be more helpful.

I like how it's a suspense, but this confusion irritates/annoys me the most.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
i loved dat rey still loves taani n trust her
annu reply 2 swayam was nic
write abt taani wat is she dng ??
updt sn
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
I know all of you are confused...i don't know why is it everything i do confuses others...so presenting...
taani


this is taani...her original name is TANSIA...people close to her call her ANNI...rey's love...but she is not swayam's original sister or cousin sister or not at all related to swayam...why she came here...what does she want...who is she...will be explained in the story...

tannusha
this is TANNUSHA...for swayam she is taani...his original sister...people close to her call her ANNU...Taani came to swayam pretending to be TANNUSHA...why did she do it...why Tannushe agreed to this...
for all this stay tuned...
Edited by anjanankuttu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Thanks for clearing the confusion😊

update soon.!
excited!

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