ArHi FF:8:The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 103

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Posted: 11 years ago
First things first... I hope you and your family are fine... Take care and take your time... We will always be here whenever you can manage to return...

And then updates...

Woww... So much has transpired since my last visit...

Where do I start? Everything is turning out so beautifully...

The preparation of breakfast and Lord Arnav's eagerness to devour it... The hot denial for visit to the village...

But what surprised me most was the chapter on The General... The sightings of the little girl... The love of the General for Lightning... It touched me to the core... you are showing the General in a completely different light... i am really eager to see what is in store for us when all four, lady Anjali, General Shyam, Lord Arnav and his Lady khushi gather together again...

I absolutely loved the stolen kisses near the library... The carrying of Khushi to Arnav's rrom was wow... The way he promised that he will never let her go is the most romantic thing I have ever read... And the "Hmm?" part was super cute...

And the sword fight... Amazing... Its really nice to see Lord Arnav break away a few bonds of his ego and take steps towards his wife...

I am loving the way you are narrating this story Aquiline... Its beautiful, romantic, intriguing and spell-binding...

P.P.S: Sorry for late comments... I would have written a longer comment... There are so many things I absolutely loved in the updates... I would have liked to mention them... But I am really stuck in the worst possible way in my life right now... So will try and gear-up soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Please continue soon...Waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
arnav has given up ...for the evr consuming desires, feeling of having her near...khushi must b very happy...
and the raw passion u seem to create in each update,...i love it...
arnav is till nt ready to perform the ritual...but he needs khushi always...tough guy...and their swordfightin n the kiss...was a beautiful...even my mind is fogged...
khushi is the true match for him,,,,may be the only match...
i lovin it more...
do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Where have u gone??
Waiting for the update...


Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry, I didn't know about the problems being faced by Lin nor about 150 pages thing...
& I am apologising here, as I have already used this space, I am so sorry Lin that because of me this 151st page was made...

& thank u so much a_soul for telling me about all this, I am really thankful to you...

Rabba ve...
Edited by shipra.aqua - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
plzzz update... cant wait any longer...
hope u are fine...



ups... what is this 150 pg thing? im really sorry as i have no idea what it is... sorry if ive done something wrong.. 😕
Edited by russelskhushi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

yeyyy.. he lost..she won..

but still the lordy.. not agreeing to go to village..

and interestingly he knows that she is thinking in 'that' direction..

waiting for more...
new thread?
Edited by prati_incept - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A QUIL ...I AM BACK
TRUST ME LADY MY VACATION WAS KILLING BECAUSE I WAS NOT

ABLE TO VISIT THE FANCY LAND CREATED BY YOU

MORE SO BECAUSE MY HOLIDAY WAS EXTENDING EVERY DAY

NOW FOR THE CHAPTER

LORD ARNAV IS REDUCED TO A ROAD SIDE ROMEO IN LOVE

HIDING HIS FEELINGS IN THE LIGHT

CONFESSING HIS LOVE IN THE DARK

WAITING IN AGONY ALL DAY

STEALING LOVING LOOKS ALL NIGHT

AVOIDING THE PRESENCE

LOATHING THE ABSENCE

CURIOUS TO HAVE HER NEXT TO HIM

CONFESSING WHEN WITH HER

THE TOUCH THE FEEL THE LOOKS HE STEALS

HE NEEDS HIS LADY ALWAYS BUT IS TOO EGO-IZED TO REVEAL

THE PAIN OF YEARNING IS KILLING

THE JOY OF CLOSENESS IS THRILLING

HE HATES TO LOVE BUT LOVES TO HATE

AHH THE CREATURE SO CONFUSED N COMPLICATED

LOVED LOVED LOVED THE DREAMY ENCOUNTER

LOVED LADY ANJALI'S QUERIES

LOVED HIS DETERMINED ANSWERS


I AM OFF TO READ THE NEXT


BACK FOR 199

SHE IS BOLD N BEAUTIFUL

HE IS YOUNG N RESTLESS

SHE IS EVER QUESTIONING

HE IS NEVER SPELLING IT OUT

HER WORDS ARE DAGGERS

HIS SWORD IS HIS RESPONSE

HE SAYS IT ALL IN ACTION

SHE WANTS TO HEAR HIM WORD IT

SHE IS AN ''IDIOT'' FOR SURE

HE IS A ''FOOL'' INDEED

BOTH LOVE THEIR EGO'S MORE THAN THE OTHER

BOTH TAKE STANDS BUT THE STANDS CRUMPLE LIKE A PACK OF CARDS

BOTH TRY TO HOLD THE SAND IN THEIR FISTS BUT IT IS SLIPPING AWAY

LORD ARNAV NEEDS TO PRACTICE MORE TO PERFECTION

LADY LOVE NEEDS TO PRACTICE MORE TO ACCEPT THE IMPERFECTION PERFECTLY

THE HEAT IS ON 24/7

LETS SEE IF THE MOTH BURNS FIRST OR THE CANDLE IS REDUCED TO FLOWING WAX


TU HI BATAA MERE MAULA MAULAA MAULAAA




THIS IS RAM KI LEELA N LEELA KA RAM 😃

THANKS





KKKA




Edited by KKKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
please continue soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting eagerly for the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Where oh where did our storyteller go? Where oh where can she be?

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