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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maverickmartin

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#336699">MAKE WAY!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#336699">Poem coming through.</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"><font color="#336699">(Do not say it's not good even if you think so.😉😆😆)</font></font>




<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">'These eyes shall not
set upon thee,'
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">So Lord and Lady did
resolve
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">To neither glance,
nor look, nor see
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">Neither deigning to
absolve
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666"></font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">The days were lonely,
the nights forlorn
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">Each keeping their
word, unbroken
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">Not even looks of distaste,
or withering scorn
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">But longing came sneaking, unbidden</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666"></font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">The fire of the
candle did not stay
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">And alas, the game
continued
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">Till the fateful
night that turned Lord to Knave
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">To quench the thirst
that had ensued
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666"></font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">And thus the Comrades
and Readers, poor
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">Were left sighing and
shivering in delight
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">But they are brave,
and will endure
</font></p>
<p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">Till the Storyteller and
Chapter 200 are in sight!
</font></p><p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">
</font></p><p align="center"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#996666">
</font></p><p align="center"></p>



I didn't like it nope didn't like it... I loved it
shipra.aqua thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Where r you lin??
Waiting desperately for the update...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Next day to diwali, That is today... Its New year as per tithi.. 'Savantsari' calender..!
YEAR 2070...

I Wish all residers of Arhasia A Very Happy & Prosperous New Year!!

God Bless you...

Spread smile & keep smiling..

Love
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Soul
Edited by A_Soul - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the next update eagerly...please continue soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey u ok dear? wen r u gonna update?
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Posted: 11 years ago
A few things to say...

Chapter 197: Bitter Battles


First of all, for this chapter, Linnie, I must say you truly are a brilliant writer. It takes more than just imagination and a great knowledge of the language to write of things never witnessed by you or by the reader and yet make them believable. You wrote of Lightning and the General in battle, defending the other whilst fighting the enemy with such clarity, it was like watching in play-by-play mode through an Omniocular that Rowling so cleverly thought of. *giggles* Pardon the Potter-ing, Halloween's just passed. *winks*


~~~~~

By some strange incursion of the smoke around him, the General saw the enemy's pale face distort into a woman's.

A woman from his memory...the soldier's shocked expression mirroring into the faint expression of the imagined woman.

"No! Mother!" the General breathed out in a trance.


What? Why? Why does the shocked face of a dying man who has a sword run through him remind him of his mother? For a woman to die a death with the pain similar to being felled with a sword had to be a terrible death indeed. Was it part of the reason of Shyam being cursed? Or was it the consequence of it?


~~~~~

"Lightning!" cried out the General, and then he looked at the enemy on horseback, towering before him with the sword aiming for him again.

Growling in rage, the General sprang forward and sliced his sword across the enemy's chest, bringing the man crashing lifelessly to the ground.

Lightning was too much in shock and hurt to rise again, so the General knew he would have to fare this fight alone. The horse was in a vulnerable position, easy prey to be trampled upon and too wounded to defend itself.

So taking a firm stand right where his horse had fallen, with redoubled energy, the General fought those enemies approaching him and his horse, circling around Lightning in protection and finishing any enemy that dared to close in on them.


The General and Lightning. Each as willing to give their life to protect the other. I think Winston Churchill was onto something when he said, "There is something about the outside of a horse that is good for the inside of a man."

~~~~~

Home? Where is home? Isn't one's home where one's heart is?

His heart was in his cure.

A cure that he was in desperate need for.

However, a cure he knew he would no longer have.

He had struggled to keep his other side at bay, especially after Lightning's fall.

Every moment, he was on the verge of breaking out. And the unbearable pain...

His hands fisted absent-mindedly.


So, like Lord Arnav, intense emotions of sadness or distress bring out the curse's effect? But we have seen that the General's transformations were more frequent and he wasn't always distressed when that happened... Hmm, interesting.



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Posted: 11 years ago
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter... I have my hot chocolate and cookies and now I just need the storyteller...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok confession.. Now i'm officially stalking this thread for the next update.. Considering where chapter 199 ended, i think all stalkers and spammers should be pardoned!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Msfrootie

Ok confession.. Now i'm officially stalking this thread for the next update.. Considering where chapter 199 ended, i think all stalkers and spammers should be pardoned!!😊


Me too😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry, Linnie. I know you don't like spamming, but... ME THREE!! 😆😆

Guys, shouldn't we be wrapping this thread up? 200 on new thread!! C'mon, get the discussion up! Hum akela kya karega?

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