swayam-sharon-aashi ff (updated page -4) - Page 3

Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

hey hat was cute but kya yaar aise short updates likhkoge toh kaise chalega😛

please update soon n do PM me😃

haye thnk u yaar :) ...haan kardoongi mai pm ... par tym lagega ...yahaka net bohuth slow hai :( ...par il do it soon :) ...
mai tumhare update padhe hai its also vrrry gd :)

Originally posted by: --MiNi--

Jaldiii Continue karo pleass!!!

i loved the part :DDD

yaya etna pls mat karo yaar mai pegal jawoongi ;) ...i love swaron fans ... dey so ..talented ...

Originally posted by: gehna12

Please continue and PM me. Its an interesting OS please continue pleassseee

yes maam :) lol ...no seriously thnks fr posting :) ...

swayam was hell tensed ...(his thoughts were going wild ): mere wajah se sab hoo raha hai kya jaroorath thi muje Aashi se ese ...jho bhi hai muje pata hona chaheye tha ki Sharon hurt hoge ...maine Sharon ko let down kiya hai ...i don deserve her ...par kya karoon mai ...i cant stop loving u Sharon ... agar tumhe kuch hua tho .. il destroy d world n destroy myself ...
Aashi notices him lost n doesnt knw wat to do . ...(puzzled n paniced she asks him) : swayam ! swayam ! ...abh kya soch typed rahe hoo ...
(cut by swayam ): kya soch TYPES raha hoon ! ...tum muje mere zindhagi .. cheenne mai atke padhi ho aur tum ey bol rahe hoo kya soch types raha hoon ..mai sharon ke bagir nahe g pawonga...tumhe mai kabhi maaf ...
cut by sharon
(sharon says weakly coughin ) : sway- ahe ahe - am...
swayam gets down places her head on his lap : bohuth dardh hoo raha hai na sharon ... mai tumhe kuch nahe hone dunga...mai doctar ko call karta hoon ...ambulance ko capl karta hoo...mai nahe hoone donga kuch bhi tumhe ...sharon where is ua inhaler ?? haan mere paas ek ..ek ...spare hai ...
(givin it to her controllin his tears while aashi is shocked isnt able to move)
sharon : ko-i u-se nahe hai swayam mere halath bohuth karaab hai ...
sharon: ...bohuth- aheahe -hurt kiya na maine tumhe isliye god muje apne paas bula rahe hai ...jab takkk -aheahe- mai hoon tabh tak ..tum mere saaat raho kisi ko bulane ki jaroorath nahe hai ..tum chaheye muje ...
Swayam : shut up sharon shut up ...tum ...hw dare u ...(breaking down ...sobbing ...nt able to control his tears) mere samne mere jaan punch rahe hoon tum ...hw can u ...nahe mai kisi se bhi ladh sakta hoon tumhare liye bagwaan se bhi ...mai hamesha hoon tumhare paas tumhare saath hamesha nahe jaane doonga tumhe ...no way ...
sharon ( findin it difficult to breath ) : sssh swayam aajeeb baaath hai naa jab mere saas muje ...aaahh wapas mile hai tho mere saas jaa rahe hai ...
swayam : nahe Sharon pls mujje chodhke mat jawo mai jee nahe pawonga ...
(aashi now agains her senses n runs to call fr help )
sharon : agar god muje nahe lee jayege tho promise karo muje ki kabho mujse dur nahe jowoge ...mai marke bhi tumse pyaar karte ..
(cut by swaym ) : dant dunga mai tumhe agar phirse esa kaha tho ! ...(cryin vry badly ) mere life jaa rahe hai mai kuch nahe karpa raha hoon ( screams ) SHARON MERE HAI ..MAI APKO USSE NAHE LE JANE DUNGA !
( gang arrives all r with teary eyes lukin at d two souls...one is cravin fr love ...other is cravin fr others life )
simmi : sharon ...swaym ...deko doctor aah gaya hai sharon ko le jaana hoga abhi ...Swayam abhi jaldhi
Rey : haan
swayam: tu chup rahe ray ! ...
( n picks sharon up and goes the room ) ...
all worreid ...
Aashi : ey maine kya kar types deya ...muje kabhi maaf nahe karenge mai ess layak nahe hoon ...
swyam : mai Sharon ko tumhe maaf karne bhi nahe dunga ...
(pacin frm left to right ...sees doctor entering )
swayam : boley nah .. doctor pls tell me kya hua ...sharon sharon teek tho hai nah
vicky n nil : swayam chill ...teek hai wo chill ...
doctor : wo unke gar walo bula dejey ...unke bachne ke chances sirf 10% hai ...lekin ham pure koshish kar rehai han...(swayam on his knees crying very badly ...)
doctor : ey swaym kaun hai ...maine apne career mai pehele baar ek patient to sleepin dose mai bhi kisi naam lethe huye deka hai ...
vicky to nil : hame nahe pata tha ki ey dono etna pyaar karte the ek doosre se n ham yaha aashi aur swyam ko ...chi ...hampe tu hai !
swyam :ha mai hee hoon swaym ...mai dek sakta hoon na sharon ko ...
doctor : haan uke paas thoda tym hai ...so its better ke app unse mil he le ...
(swayam fumes with anger catches doc's collar):appse nahe hota tho eska ey matlab mahe hai ki aap kuch bhi bole mai teek karoonga mere sharon ko ...
( enters the rom cups sharon's face n says while she was takin his name continuosly ) : m here sharon m here abh tumhe kuch nahe hoga ...
nurse: aap unke face ko chodeya enka oxygen mask utar jayega ...
( swyam leaves her face and suddenly her breathin becomez breathin become unstable )
doc: app uko pakadhe raheye un par accha asar ho sakta hai ...abhi enhai oxygen ki xaroorath nahe hai ... .. ...enhe wo dusra ...
cut by swayam : rit doc sharon ka medecine mai hoon ...( n kissis he lips by removing her oxygen mask )
: ( hez broken wen he receives no response n he sees the line straight )
doc : shez no ..
(suddenly noriced the lines gettin zig zaag n sharon responding to the kiss soo passtionatey )
sharon : i love u swayam
swayam : m so happpy sharon abhi tumhe kahe nahe jane dunga ...tumhe ek tresuure ki tarah treat karonga
shaeon : tumahre saare wishes poore karoonge mai abhe maine death face kiya hai ...abhi tumse kabhi dur nahe honge mai never swyam u r my breath swyam (n their lips mould to one again )
docs n nurses: unbeleivable
gang : touchwood swaron ...

awesome os...😳 pls continue...

this was amazing...

res t Done

that was awesome ya.. 👏

Aww it was a sweet one.

wao yar its supar dupar cool...

plzz update soon