D3 (A new FF, as I imagined) COMPLETED(15/07 /14) - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 63

Next day R wake up, bt this time T was nt there. After getting ready, he was thinking about last night & talking to himself

R: Kya T mujhse naaraaz hai?

Self: Nahi nahi, naraaz kyon hogi? Use to khush hona chahie na?

R: Bt, I love her & dis time I am nt cnfsd abr my feelings .

Self: Bt kiya use yeh baat pata hai? How is she supposed to react jab wo ladka jisse wo pyar karti thi, rejected her & when she is sure dat dis boy wud never luv her back, he kissed her. Wo sab kuch bhulake apne frnds, career, bhai sab ko lekar jab busy hona start kya tune yeh sab kya? Kiya use react karneka time diya tha? Atehi'I was missing u, feeling lonely' ye sab bol diya, toh wo kiya karti?

R: Mujhe use baat karni hai.

He searched for her everywhere. He asked another student of event management

R: Excuse me, tumne Taani ko kahi dekha?

Student: Ya, wo apke frnds ko recv karne venue ki main gate peg aye hue hai.

R also goes there. All team members arrived. Swaron & Viha were teasing other team members

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 64

They all saw T coming.

Seeing her, team said : Dekh SW bahot hogaya hume tease karna. Ab chalo hum T aur R ko tease karte hai.

SW: Theek hai. Par meri behen hai, toh pehla haq to mera banta hai.

By dis time R also arrived. Both T & R lukd at one another, then T luk on the other side as she was feeling very uncomfortable.

SW: T tu theek hai na?

T: Ha bhai kyon?

Sh: Nahi, tumhe dek ke lagta hai kaal puri raat soyi nahi.

R(in his mind): Shit. Ab main kiya karu?

T: N...n..n..nahi. Aisa to kuch bhi nahi hai

Sw: to tu itna stammer kyon kar rahi hai?

Team: Tum he dekh ke lagta hai , tumhe kaafi stress hua hai.

R(in his mind): Stress. Ab main kya bolu?

SW: Luking at R: ek baat bol tune aisa kya kiya , jisse T ko itna stress ho gya?

R: Maine ...maine kiya kya? Yeh tu kya bol raha hai? Tu mujhe bilkul bhi trust nahi karta?

Team: Arey R, chill kar yaar. & SW tu bhi yeh Dbl meaning baatein mat bola kar.

Sw: Arey meri behen hai, toh main koi galat baat kyon bolunga. Maine to sirf itna pucha hai, ke R ne kuch zyada to kaam nahi karaya meri behen se jisse usko itna stress hua hai?

T: Bhai, aap log kya baat lekar baith gaye. Chalo main aap logo ka room dikha deti hu.

All left & R did'nt get a chance to talk to her.After they get into their rooms,

team: Arey yaar ab result kal announce hoga lekin hum logone to sab ki bahot saari performance miss kar diya.

T (enters): Aise kaise? Maine aap sab ki perfrmnce record kar liya hai. Yeh rahi CD. Aap sab inko dekhte raho. Mujhe kaam hai to aap sab se baad mein milti hu.

She kept the CDs & left. R was about to go after her bt team members stopped him. At dinner also R didn't get the chance to talk to T.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode- 65

Next day morning R was nervous about his performance bt all frnds suppoted him. He still didn't get the chance to talk to T. As usual R performed well.

After the performance all were busy talking to one another & T was busy chatting with Raghav & Aashi.

Evening time for results. All gather to get their results. All were holding each other's hand in below order

Vicky-Neha-Vishakha-Bharat-Amar-Rinni-Sharon-Swayam- Nil- Simmi - Aashi- Raghav- Taani- Rey

R (slowly in T's ears): Thnx mere sath rehne k liye/

T said nothing

R: Tum theek ho? Mujhse naraaz ho? T kaal raat...

T: Mujhe is baarein mein baat nahi karni hai

R didn't say anything bt was luking at her only.

Result was announced & all of dem won in their respective category. Bt the details dat from which time they wud start working under the estd choreographer wud be sent to clg

All of dem returned back with a happy mood

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Posted: 11 years ago
so nice update nd feeling sad for rey tat taani nt talking properly wid him
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updt
loved it
curious to read further
updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Poor rey...he is nrpt able to talk to Taani
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode- 66

All of dem arrived at their home & decided to meet at college next day.

At R's house, he was remembering all the incidents between him & T. As T denies to spoke to him about dis, he was really tensed.

R(to himself): Agar T mujhse baat karna, milna, band kar de , den how wud I manage? Kya who aisa kuch karegi?

Self: Ho sakta hai. Already wo tujhse is baarein mein baat karna avoid kiya hai, ho sakta hai , wo tujhe bhi avoid kare .

R(to himself): Main use khona nahi chahta. Insaan ka 1st love successful ho zaroori nahi. Par main dusre baar apne pyar ko kho nahi sakta. Aaj bhi mujhe afsos hai, agar main Kriya ko rok leta, to aaj bhi shayad wo mere sath hoti. Bt shayad destiny ko kuch aur manjoor tha. Bt I have come over it. I can't loose my love for the 2nd time.

Self: Tujhe yeh pehle realize karna chahiye tha. T ka yeh behavior normal hai.

R: Bt I love her & dis time I will not let her go. Main uske bina nahi rahe sakta. Mujhe use baat karni hai.

He tries to call T, bt she did'nt receive his call.

In the mean time, in Taayam's house,

T: Bhai, I am so happy k aap jeete. Abhi , aap ko 1 established choreographer k sath kaam karneka mauka milega. Toh u see apka career bhi set ho jayega.

Sw: T humari family mein, aaj sirf tu mera sath hai. To kiya tu hamesha mere hi sath degi?

T: Surely bhai. Aaj tak hamesha se to support karti ayi hu.

They both entered house . Bt a shock was waiting for them.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode- 67

Taayam's house

Both entered to find. Sw's dad/ T' Tauji - Mr Shekhawat is waiting over there.

Mr Shekhawat : Hi Taani beta, kaisi ho?

T lukd at Sw

T: Tauji aap yaha? Kuch bataya nahi.

Mr Shekhawat: Ha, tumhe surprise dene chala aya.

T lukd at SW. She thought of telling about the worshop to tauji, so dat he might feel proud of SW.

T: Tauji aapko pata hai, 2nd term ka result nikla tha, aapko bataneka mauka nahi mila, bhai ko 80% mila hai, saare subjects mein.

Mr Shekhawat: Chalo finally tumne padai k mamle mein serious to hue.

T: Tauji sirf itna hi nahi, bhai dance camp mein, all India basis mein Free Style dance category ka winner hue. & abhi abhi hum ek workshop se aa rahe hai, bhai waha pe bhi Freestyle category mein winner hua & u know...

Mr Shekhawat: W-H-A-T. Sw phir se dance. Main tumhe baataya tha na dance k bhoot ko apne dimaag se nikalo. U can invest ur time & energy in other sports activities , bt dance. Kyon apna time & mera paisa waste kar rahe ho?

T: Bt tauji aap mere baat to suniye.

Mr Shekhawat: Nahi T, tumhara bhai ek irresponsible idiot hai, jise bekar kaamo pe apna time waste karneke alawa kuch aur nahi aata.

T: Tauji plz. Agar main evnt mgmt pe ja sakti hu, to bhai bhi to dance ko apna career bana sakte hai.

Mr Shekhawat: W-H-A-T. Tum aur evnt mgmt & mujhe bataya nahi. Tumhare bhai se mujhe koi umeed nahi hai. Mujhe laga tum graduation k baad MBA karogi to u can join my business, lekin apne bhai k sath rahe kart um bhi bigar rahi ho & SW u r responsible for it. T ab main aur kuch nahi sununga. U pack ur bag & mere sath wapas chalo. Tum apne bhai k sath nahi rahogi as uska tumpe galat influence ho raha hai.

A frustrated Sw entered his room & close the door.

T got angry too & shut herself in her room

Both R & Sh tries to cl T & Sw, bt none of dem recv their calls

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Posted: 11 years ago

Episode - 68

Nx day mrng, Taayam's house.

Sw & T came out of their rooms as dey have to attend college. Bt both were upset. They found Mr Shekhawat at the breakfast table.

Mr Shekhawat: Sw, kaal humari baat incomplete rahe gaya. Kiya tum dance ko apna career banana ke liye sure ho?

Sw: Ha papa

Mr Shekhawat: Tum itna irresponsible decision kaise le sakte ho? Kya T tum bhi evnt mgmt karogi MBA nahi.

T: Ha tauji

Mr Shekhawat: Sw tumne apne sath apne behenko bhi bigar diya. Agar tum apne pasand ka career banana chahte ho den apne dump e banao. Mere ghar mein tum jaise irresponsible person ka kohi jaga nahi.

Sw was about to leave bt T hold his hand

T: Tauji aap aisa nahi kar sakte.

Mr Shekhawat: Main aisa ki karunga & T beta tum apna saman pack karo & mere sath chalo.

T: Bas tauji ab auir nahi. Agar is ghar mein bhai ke liye koi jaga nahi hai, to main bhi yah ape nahi rahungi. May be 1 dancer ka father hone mein aap embarrass feel karoge bt I wud be proud to be known as sister of famous dancer SWAYAM

Mr Shekhawat: Taaaniii

T left wid Sw

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Episode - 69

After sometime Taayam were sitting on the stairs at the entrance of the college.

Sw: Emotional hoke ghar chodke to chali ayi mere sath . Ab kaha jayegi?

T: O hello. Jaana mujhe akela nahi, apko bhi jaana hai.

Sw: Hmmm. To ab?

T: Don't worry bhai, papa hai, kuch min baad gussa thanda ho jayega & hum ghar wapas chale jayenge.

Sw: How cud u b so optimistic?

T: Apko pata hai na bhai, humari family kuch zyada hi melodrama pasand karta hai. So just leave it.

Sw: Unhone to mujhe nikala tha, tu kyon chali ayi.

T: O mere bhai a, ab zyada senti mat ho. U kno hum cousins hote hue bhi humesha siblings ki tarah rahe. So bhai - behen ka kaam hi hota hai humesha ek dusre ko support karna. To ab chill maro.

Sw: Par ab kiya kare?

T: Dekho, aaj to waise bhi clg mein VP & AVP ne party rakhi hai ap sab ki jeet ki khushi mein & students ne use overnight party bana diya hai.To aaj raat ka khane ka & rehna ka to arrangement ho gaya. Ha soneka jaga nahi hai. Kaal ka kaal dekhlenge.

Sw started lughing hearing T's explanation.

Sw: Tu pagal ho gaya hai kiya? Itna casual kab se ho gayi? To madam ye bhi bata dijiye ki party mein kiya pehnenge? Kyon ki abhi hum jo pehne hai, iske alawa to aur koi kapda humare paas nahi hai.

T: Actually bhai, maine apki 80% pane ki khushi mein, mujhe laga tha sab milke party sharty karenge. To isiliye maine aap ki & mere liye 1 - 1 party wear Karidi thi & wo clg ki locker mein hi hai. Ghar le jaane ka time nahi mila. Aur phir hum sab workshop mein chale gaye, to aapko deneka bhi time nahi mila. Aacha hua aapne yaad dila di, to chalo party wear ka arrangement bhi ho gaya.

Sw: Hearing all these started laughing. : Tu kabse itna jugadu ho gay

T: Bhai, jab se evnt mgmt join kiya tab se. Always keep ur back up plans ready. Bt bhai abhi kisiko mat batana hum ghar se nikale ja chuke hai, warna sab khas kar Sh bhabhi tension mein aa jayenge.

Both laughed at it.

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