ArHi FF: The Same Coin#4

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prpk525

@prpk525

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

loved the update..

every bit of it...

definitely worth the wait...

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Res

~Edit~

Rosie, iss update me kya tha ? What really happened ? I don't quite understand.

You see my mind is stuck... its just a montage of words and images. And I am unable to register anything beyond all that. All I see and hear and understand goes something like this.

Basketball. Victory. Sweat. Shirtless Raizada. More shirtless Raizada. Lean muscled back. Wet (hair!, you guttermind!). Running. Sweaty shirtless running. Field. Adrenalin. Apology. Sexy. Kisser. Kiss. Some more kiss. Warm embrace. And some more kiss.

Bas this is all I know. Kya bolun ab ? 😳

PS - You nailed the game scene - the rush that comes with the match and the victory. For the players as well as the audience. And the scene after that, erm, lets just say I never did register Akash and... Sunehri.. was it? Ya.. don't know what happened other than the apology, the confession and the kiss. Sigh-blush-worthy scene, that one. ☺️

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

congrats on the new thread!

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Scrabella

@Scrabella

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

"Shhh. I know. We'll figure it all out. You and me. Together. I told you that day, and I'm telling you again, you don't have to do everything by yourself. Let me in. I need you with me and you're not allowed to run anymore, okay?"

OMG OMG Semanti! I'm floored. You've no idea what you do to us with your mere words. The way you said his words skated on her skin, well that's precisely how your incredible description of their overdue kiss did to me! I feel like I actually know these guys and go to school with them! I'm glad Arnav, despite being popular and holding a badass rep of sorts is clear on his do's ad dont's. Most guys in his shoes might really not want to say the together word to their girlfriends. It's amazing how the tables are a little turned. Khushi is skeptical and wants to plan a career as opposed to a marriage just yet.. And Arnav knows that he just wants her with him.

This is such talented writing. I can't thank you enough for sharing this with us, or at least me. And not hiding it in a private blog. Some of us really wish we could wait on updates and stalk forums but life takes over. I for once have never told you how I just love this FF! Well it's Sunday morning my part of the world and I'm gettin the looks from my kids and husband, who seems to think I'm reading a way too early dose of arnav-khushi po*n...

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

omg its a beautiful update...starting from the football match...awesome u have writen it too good...wow moment loved the way khushi told him all abt her dil ki baatain:)

loved there passionate kiss ...superb :)

nk...like really ninja ...hahaha

loved it to the core dear awesome update

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Res

Extremely sorry about the four day delay in un-Resing Sem. But life was (still is) making quite a slave woman out of me at the moment!

I read this chapter just now and the thing that stays with me other than the warmth that came from one very candid and yet toe-curling, innards melting conversation between our leads is your almost impeccable description of what goes on in the minds of a sportsman during a game. Yes, my judgment is slightly flawed given I am one of the most un-sporty (literally not figuratively I think;)) person ever. But I could literally feel like I was Arnav on the soccer field, with my frustrated cussing, the brain that runs at a mile an hour to search for the best strategy there is to win the battle that could swing either way in less than a blink of an eye.

And then you gave me Khushi in the stands and I breathed a sigh of relief. Now that is more me. I don't understand the games but even to my untrained eye (yes, I am liberally borrowing here), I cannot miss the peaking euphoria, the collective sighs and the tension that binds the stadium in its vice-like grip till the score board finally announces its winner and sometimes for hours thereafter!

Ah what a power packed update. It blew my mind. I almost feel like watching a soccer match now. At least on TV if nothing else.

Edited by meera30 - 12 years ago

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Congrats on the new thread!

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Aishwarya

@EmpressSarayu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

YAY! *Throws a party in space for Arnav and Khushi!*

This is why I love the two of them (in your story), they solve so many things just by talking. Its such liberating conversation to read!

NK is so funny, I wonder how their teachers are going to react now. HOw much more of their realtionship do we get to see? (So interesting, I'm trying to think of ways to time travel to when you finish the story and read it all at once) :D

Can't wait to read more!