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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Meera 🤗
Thank you.

Edited my comments here 😊

Can i join the i am missing Swami queue 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: harhem



The credit goes to you
For making us spam in queue
I am ready for Mission "We want Swami back"
Let us join together for the next spamming attack



Ahem hArhem is always right,
You wrote with a lot of insight
If we start our spamming brigade
Bet I will be in that arcade

Author is on little break
Soon we can hear a News leak
She gave a Emerald Isles a second chance
May be she will start a New to dance.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: avcmyd



Ahem hArhem is always right,
You wrote with a lot of insight
If we start our spamming brigade
Bet I will be in that arcade

Author is on little break
Soon we can hear a News leak
She gave a Emerald Isles a second chance
May be she will start a New to dance.



AS did I say you are the best
The sorrow of ending I detest.
Having you in our brigade
Will strengthen my poetry's facade
Let author's break end with a new start
Giving a hope to us not to part


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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Awww I can't believe it's ended ... Amazingly written Meera will miss this Arnav and Khushi ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
I loved the last part..arnav khushi..their routine life..loved how arnav was able to identify the chapters written by khushi n that dialogue where khushi says that ashima should have won coz of those three chapters..haha!!( arnav ka total asar )
aman is missing his family..aww!😭
i hope arnav's mom is there in the epilogue..really missed her..btw what are the evil pair upto??
and i am extremely sad that its over..really yaar..i hope u come up with something else real soon..but even then i am going to miss swami soo much..😭😭
Will khushi never tease arnav by calling him swami..ab to even kuhu said it..😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
I am loving the poems truly!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Friday 😔
I miss coming here already!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
I am just so sad that this journey has come to an end, but nevertheless it was a beautiful story and I am glad I was one of those fortunate ones who had the opportunity to read it.

Thank you so much Meera Di for writing this lovely piece of fiction. Sheer brilliance!

I'll definitely miss the Arnav "Swami"Raizada and Khushi "Sengupta" Gupta who had become a small part of fiction of my daily life.

You deserve all the love and appreciation and much more! You rock!
Edited by arpritasharma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
I loved reading the last chapter; the life Arnav and Khushi are now leading was very well detailed and you did a good job! Again, you tempted us with food (what is this pav bhaji by Mumbai Central, must be fabulous if you have written about it!)

I also like how you brought back Ashima into the mix. This story was focused on Ashima, her Booker, and her new book, so it was nice that you mentioned it again, and I'm glad that both Arnav and Khushi have moved past all of it. If Arnav can guess two of the chapters Khushi wrote for Shadows, why couldn't be figure out the third?

As much as I have loved Swami in this story, your Aman is equally as charming...you could totally do a whole story based on him alone. Just love that he's so lonely without his wife and baby that he's taking any company her can get! Hope we get to see Aditi back in the epilogue!

Khushi does pose an interesting question: how does he really know that their little experiment isn't over? I guess his love for her is just that strong that he doesn't question it!

Very bittersweet reading this, definitely looking forward to the epilogue, but will definitely be missing my routine of reading your updates every Tuesday and Friday!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Simply one word for the story ... priceless. Came across your story yesterday. Completed the whole in a day...couldn't get away from it. You write amazingly beautiful. Would definitely love to read you more of your works. Good luck for future :)))

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