~Main Rang Sharbaton Ka~ *new chap 6 pg 48* pms later - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
lovely start...
banner was awesome...so cute...
sakshi was cool...
who is that guy???????our hero arjun right???????????
cont soon dr...
thanks for PM dude...
Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
hey guys! here comes chap2😃! i hope u ppl like it ! wrote it in a hurry! really scared about an updt after a long tym😲! *finger crossed*😕😕


PART 2

College got over as usual at 3 p.m. Saakshi hurried down the stairs pulling her best friend Shimone with her. She approached her bus when she saw him again engrossed in his phone. She smiled happily!😃

"yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!" she grinned inward.😆

She went aggressively and sat in the first seat again behind the driver😆. Shimone hit her head at Saakshi's crazy behaviour. She went and sat next to her by the window. Saakshi was acting all mad and crazy. She was continuously staring at him,this time directly without any hesitation😲😆. She has never behaved like this. He saw her after noticing that she was staring at him for like 5 mins. Their eyes locked for like 4 seconds,then he looked away normally. She was disappointed.😕

Then she started to talking to Shimone. They laughed,giggled and Saakshi teased Shimone with Shashank,shimone's boyfriend. Shimone and Shashank were like the cutest couple!😳😳

Saakshi looked at him to see that he was dozing off. "wth" she thought.🤣

Shimone laughed at her. Saakshi forgot about him in like 1 second and then started her bak-bak again. The driver wore ear-plugs.🤣🤣

Saakshi's stop came,she got down glancing at him before leaving. He was still sleeping.😆😆

"donkey" she cursed and got down bidding bye to her friends.🤣

As days passed, the intensity of the stares increased and the opposite sex too started co-operating.😳😳😳

"u don't even know his name for god's sake!!!" shimone screamed.😆

"saakshi u have to go talk to him" sumedha the love guru' advised.😲

"what??..are u mad?? No!" saakshi said.😲

"dude...omg! is it the same Saakshi who once went and proposed a guy in front of everyone!??" sumedha giggled.😆😆

"it was a dare" saakshi retorted.😕

"but still" sumedha said.😆

"what if he's a bad guy?" shimone said.

Saakshi shot her a glare😆. "kya yaar? Kuch bhi!?" saakshi said.😆

"u cant trust guys nowadays u know" sumedha teased her.👏

"shut up both of u!!!" saakshi screamed.😆

It was almost a month now😲. Yes the staring continued but he too was staring back at her now😳😲. Saakshi was overjoyed😛. She used to wait to go to college because she could see him😃. she got to know he's in Degree😃 and he obviously knew she was in 11thbecause of the numerous times she has screamed it out to attract his attention.😆

He listens to everything she says,thanks to her voice which comes out like there's a mike in her throat🤣. She used to wonder what kind of a guy he was. He used to sit in front,silent,straight-face,never smiled😕 and always slept🤣 to her disappointment.

"bata nahin raat ko kya karta hoga?" shimone teased Saakshi "ki itna sota hain"🤣

Saakshi shot her a glare.😆

Just as they were approaching someone's stop,Saakshi casually cracked a joke.😆

She looked at him the same moment. She couldn't believe what she saw😲😲! His lips parted,and then elongated,and curled up into a...holy...shit...a smile!!!!He smiled😲😲😲😲!!!!!!!! Omg🤪!!!! He smiled!!! Saakshi saw him smiling,like she saw the beginning of that cute curve on his uber sexy face☺️! Omg! She was in heaven. Usually its guys who mad behind all these things but Saakshi was crazy now.

Out of uncontrollable excitement she said "he smiled!!!!!" rather loudly making him turn around and look at her.😲😲😲


so hw was it??? guess my sense of humour is back so r the emos in the updates!😆

do LIKE nd COMMENT !

PS: i m listening to main rang sharbaton ka!😳

Edited by likithakmh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Yippie yuppie im first first yoohooo😆

Liki ji..this update seems sooo real...its as if i was witnessing all that before me*raise your collar from me please*😳😃😃

Miss Sakshi is really sooo crazy lol...😆 her way of staring and shouting to grab his attention...was too cute😃

Puttar fikhar not...it was a really lovely update...enjoyed reading it very much 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 🤗 🤗

Edited by PoohLover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
I loved it! That's all there is to say actually...
teach me how to write soo well!
Edited by Sakuu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: PoohLover

Yippie yuppie im first first yoohooo😆

Liki ji..this update seems sooo real...its as if i was witnessing all that before me*raise your collar from me please*😳😃😃

Miss Sakshi is really sooo crazy lol...😆 her way of staring and shouting to grab his attention...was too cute😃

Puttar fikhar not...it was a really lovely update...enjoyed reading it very much 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 🤗 🤗


awww thank u soooc much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃
omg thank god u like it!!!!!!!! i was friggin nervous!!!!!!!!😭😭😭
but omg!!!!!!!!! pooh i love u sweetie!!!!!!!!!!!! u made evrything arite!!!!
thank u sooo much!!!!!!
muahhh!! muahhh!!!!!
🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
awww really very very very sweet😉 kash mere college me koi aata ..😳...Arjun jaisaa to me tooo ..usske sath 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry Likitha ,I haven't read any lately what ever you wrote?i was in India for almost 3 mons ,where net is very slow.
Coming to this one reminded my college days and thank u for refreshing those memories.it is always my pleasure to read your stories.super way to go!👍🏼
Edited by Tulasi14 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
awesome update dear.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
Awwssuumm Update Liku! Hatss Off To You! Firstly I Luvv d Song! Listeningg to it right now!!! Lol! 🤣 The Harkatein Sakshi is Doing!! U knw What Liku...By Her Antics U Made Me Remind Of My First Crush..whn i was in 10th! I use to do the sme things!! Diittoo! To Grab His Attention n he used to jus smile back lyk Arjun!! luv u fr dat! U made me remind of sme sweet memories!!! Ufffho! Shimone n Sumedha ki Teasing! 😆 Nd Omg! Arjun Smiled! Yaaahuuu!! Thanxx fr pm! Continuee Soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

nice update gud wrk n thgth well

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