MaYur SS [Once In A Night ] LAST PART ON PG 49 - Page 12

Brilliant part and you are a brilliant writer..love your writing.

Amazing part..well written..do continue soon

That was superb part

Superb part dear..well written.Do continue soon.

Beautiful update
loved it to the core
awesome

Very nice and amazing update...

lovely update

please do update A dark love.

Note;

Finally I'm here to post the last part as I've promised there would be 6 or 7 parts but I m ending it with the 8 parts.

When the concept came into my mind, I was nervous as whenever I've read a story about *one night* it ended on the part where the couple consummated their love or declared they are in love. But I didn't want the story t end at that point because being a reader I always felt it wasn't what I wanted"I wanted something else.

So, I started this story, the concept seemed too simple but it was a difficult task for me to write a simple scenes which showed the innocence of my characters, and trust me I tried my best.

I didn't know I can write the 8 parts of story but it was your encouragement and your patience to read this story that motivated me every time.

At the end of this story, I'll wait for ur precious comments about this story.

Do tell me did you like the ending or not?

TC.

Maria(do remember me in ur prayers)