Smitar's: Saving Khushi#1 Part 7 Pg 122 Link to # 2 on Pg 1

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

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Ok i love this story than all the other Khushi stories 😳

A simple kidnap story, without being overly dramatic and yet fool-proof. I only hope you keep them a bit apart for a few days at least. I did not expect Arnav to find Khushi within 3 updates 😈 Evil me, i know...

But the concept...Loved it!

Waiting for the next

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Varsha Dutt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

UNRES 😉

You are back 😃 I just read the three updates in one go...interesting...this time around Khushi is the one kidnapped...I love it...

Waiting to read more 😊

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Nice update di u very well written the turmoil going on in Arnav's mind.& Khushi is kidnapped thats why its Saving Khushi.Hope Arnav will find out her soon.

Rashmi di great interpretation.Hope u will change ur mind.😉

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Arshipriya16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Wow di kya update hai!!! maine abhi kaha ke hope he will find her soon,but here dekho to humare "dhadakebaaz" hero ne ekdam "phata poster nikala hero" jaisi entry markar Khushi ko find out bhi kar liya!!!! Waise di I think Arnav is that much reach that he had CCTV cameras in his parking or building so he can get a big proof from that,I think so otherwise u definitely have something in ur mind.& the photocopy was there too.So Mr.Shyam Manohar Jha get ready to trap & go to jail.
Overall awesome update.

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ayushma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Oh god! Poor Khushi.

I wonder how she is doing. Shyam is a huge pain! I hope Arnav's sharp mind finds Khushi quickly. Hopefully he finds out the reason for Khushi's quick stop at Laxminagar. Why did Happy ji not talk about Khushi stopping at the photocopy machine store?