ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn -Thread 6 - COMPLETED

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

My heart went out 4 Khushi seeing her in pain... 😭

D way she cried her heart out like a child thnkng tht He luvs sum1 else made me nostalgic... 😭

I appreciate Payal's role here... D way she cleared Arnav's paty here n told Khushi tht He ws in luv wid her d day he set his eyes on her was beautiful... 👏

Sumtyms v r so engrossed wid thngs in front of us tht v fail 2 notice thngs arnd us... True tht..

Khushi ws jumping wid Joy wen she cm 2 knw tht Shez his LADY LOVE... 😃

Arnav's impatience made me go Awww... 😳

D way he sensed her sniffs n repeatedly ask her d reason behind it showed tht he really cares 4 her n everythng related 2 her... 😃

WE part was beyond AWESOME... d way dey read each other thots were brilliantly written... 👍🏼

Car ride ws d part I enjoyed most... 😉

Finally, Mr. Raizada is getting a taste of his own medicine... 😆

Khushi acting all bold n unaffected of dere closeness is affecting him... 😆

Khushi acting all touchy-2 wid him... I'm so luvng dis... ☺️

D KISS ws beautiful... ☺️

Waiting 4 more fireworks btwn dem... 😉

Di, mk Arnav confess soon... Plzzzwa...

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dikshita

@dikshitamehta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

it was an amazing update, as always 👏

part 1

arnav, in conversation with khushi, was quickly able to make out that she was crying

this shows his love for khushi & how much he care for

he understands her so well😊

so finally khushi came 2 know dat arnav was in love wid her for past 8 yrs.

part 2

khushi's teasing session has started.😉

nd arnav is too confused wid wat is gng...😕😕 the sudden change in khushi's behviour

thnx for d pm nd d lovely update😊

will be w8ing for d next part

Edited by dikshitamehta - 12 years ago

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Chetna

@chetna19

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

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Zakasss update...😉

I loved whole conversation of payal n d khushi...loved arnav restlessness how he know something is bothering her... nd here khushi thinking how can he loved someone else...asking here self so many questions in terms of she nd he in front of payal...ns arnav just want to know she is okk or nt...

Finally payal disclosed d whole truth..nd recollected each nd every movement..

First part is brillent...dii mujhe laga abhi or thoda tym lagega khushi ko ye sab pta chalne me but u did this fast A thanks u...this chapter is awesome...perfect actually...now khushi know everything ..in this chapter u write beautifully khushi thoughts dialogue everything..WOW...

In second part khushi thinking she ws nt there when arnav needed her most...her chiz ek tym hota hain..jab joh hona hota hain wahi hota hain...time par kisi ka bhi jorr nahi han...joh time chala gya uska hum kuch bhi nhi kr sakte ...lakin joh aane wala hain usme hum apna 100 percent de hi sakte hain...or khushi toh usii raste prr hain ...she ws wanting her old arnav back...now this almost happen...

I loved when arnav teased her those parts such a cute parts...now here khushi taking revenge to arnav ..bechara...use kuch bhi nhi pta hain...

Now aaksh nd payal also here ...ab kya hoga aage I m eagerly waiting for next update...dii they r leaving with arnav nd khushi...???...or wt about arnav khushi bet,...eagerly waiting...khushi please made new new tradition these r awesome...

Superb update diii ...u r d BEST...Love u ❤️

Edited by chetna19 - 11 years ago

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dharsh

@dharsh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

mine 😳

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blame my books for late un-res-ing di 🥱 LOL

" He really means alot to me. I dont think I can live without him. I got used to him and his everything" awww...

atlast...even she came to know about his feelings

and she being over flirtacious LOL

overall, an awesome update...now waiting for next chapter :P :*

keep smiling :) take care di :)

dharshini :)

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Wat d??? Di, u updated b4 tym...I missed my place... 😭

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divya

@divyashree449

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Loved it. Finally Khushi came to know that Arnav loves her.
It was unexpected. In first part felt bad for khushi.
But as story continued felt happy that payal revealed the truth to her.Beautifully written.
So Khushi is in teasing mode. Nice. The cute little moment in the car was really beautiful.
Totally the Update was Awesome. Enjoyed fully.
Cant wait for the next update. I am addicted to your story. You are an awesome writer.
Thank you for this wonderful and Amazing update.
Update Soon...

Edited by divyashree449 - 12 years ago

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124555

@124555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

loved the first part
now waiting for the next

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

hey... waiting fr part 2...

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khareshelley

@khareshelley

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#209

part 1..
payal told her truth which khushi didn't know/ nor even realize back bcz she was in love w\ith NK..
payal and akash are truy friends.helping them in every possible way... finally she can join dots join what he is saying to her in Car..
arnav is irritated as why she is taking this long to come backk...
waiting for next...!!!!!!!!!