Taarey FF:Pyaar Ishq Aur Mohobaat.#2(Moved to thread3)link Added index - Page 100

perfect
the way you portrayed taani and rey
there feeling there awkwardness there dilema
loved it
do cont soon

Omg this story is really gripping
Just read in one go there
U had me laughing crying like a baby n even at one point screaming profanities at my computer over that witch K
Feeling so sorry at beginning for poor taani I know Rey was one cheated but in his anger n deep for revenge he isn't thinking clearly he thinks she was involved in his humiliation but if he listened her words and situation all show her innocence even at beginning
How much did he see of the episode where that witch was hurting Taani didn't he hear her call that witch a s**t
I hope in future he rewinds the moments n realizes she was innocent
As for her bro can't believe he didn't stop that witch from hurting his own sister who he's known n been close to all her life disgusting the way he stood there ...BOTH times I know love is BLIND but surely not that much n what about blood is thicker than water ...I mean REALLY he isn't even trying to make it up to his sister to say sorry to get her back in his life
Loving the bond growing between Rey n Taani all close is starting to see it now
Gotta a feeling because of past now he's realized he wants her his possessiveness is gonna reach new heights I have feeling if her bro ever tries to come into picture again Reys first reaction would be she's mine now nothing to do with u
Wonder if he will ever find out that Taani disowned her bro The day truth was revealed????? Pity she told him she didn't want her share of business am I being wicked to wish she could have kept it so one day they both could use it together to get revenge on the witch
Have to admit don't shoot me but I do wish one day Rey n Taani forgive her bro n he leaves that witch as he was her puppet would be nice to see him leaving her for his sis sort of set the wrong right am I stupid to hope ??????
Anyways brilliantly written keeping us gripped
Can't wait to see what twists uve got planned
Tissues n dishes to break at the ready lol
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

Wow :)

OMG Amazing update <3

Amazing

awesome ishu
sry fr not commenting fr previous chapters
i ws busy...
sryyy
i m waiting fr d real rollr coaster to begin...

awsm updt
taani's entry was superb
taarey luking at eachother nic
rey getting irritate wen swayam drag him luvd it
waiting for nxt
updt sn

Aww Taani is so nervous
Rey staring at Taani so intensely was superb
I like that Swayam took him away lol
It only made him long more to see Taani
So sweet of Rey to send food for Taani
Wonderful update

Rey has finally started caring for taani
Rey sending food for taani was simply a wow moment
the way swayam irritated rey was kind of cute
taarey hav started feeling for each other
n d promo seems really interesting
rey is gonna tell that he cares for taani
yipeee

super update...waiting for ur next update...