Originally posted by: 12041989
I just came across to your FF "trapped" last night and I must say you made me speechless and sleepless I just lost all my words to express how I felt after reading your fan fic but now I gain some courage to write some words and praise your awesome effort.
First of all you are a fabulous writer and have great command on story line, you describe Khushi's character as amazing as you can like a girl who was purely a daddy's girl become so much mature when she fall in love with a gentle as well as complex man. I was truly mesmerized to read that the babbly girl actually knows the true meanings of love' as to give up. how she suppress her feelings towards him the whole time before he himself come to know about her love for him by her father.
I am very much eager to know about the reason why she kept silent when her father accused Arnav and how come she agrees for this marriage.
Now come to Arnav' I can very much understand his behavior towards relations and love his bitter fast never allows him to get out from the so called safety cage' and fall in love or make any sort of emotional relation, but still love have all the power to drive out the feelings and emotions from any heart made by stone.
I just love this FF and I must say this is first very long feedback I every write for any story.
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