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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer
Hey guys,

I just thought that I will put up my thoughts on the new chapter of Lutt Jaawaa

(SPOILER ALERT! READ IT ONLY AFTER YOU READ THE CHAPTER)

When I first got the idea of writing LJ, this was the chapter which I was sure I will put in the story. In the movie, which this story is inspired from, Vidyut Jamwal fights against the goons to save the girl after they get down from the bus. That scene remained etched in my brain and when I planned this story I promised myself that there will be a fight scene just like that in my story too. And I did it.

In the movie, they travel in the bus but here I thought that Maan in the Jeep seemed much more perfect. After all that is how he travelled in HP and sometimes in Dilli too.

Geet entering into the fight was not something I planned but then I thought from her point of view, "If there were people who killed my family and threaten to kill my sister, what all I would do to save her?" And the answer I got was fight till my last breath! And that was what Geet did too.

Maan speaking in Punjabi style is something I loved from the show and I put it here. And Rajji fighting back was a last minute addition to give a comic touch to the story!

Well thats all I want to bak bak about this chapter! Aur bolungi toh bore ho jaaoge!

Take care and enjoy,
Kalpana

P.S. DFL ke baare mein bak bak mein kal karungi!😆

haiyye just loved that you put in geet fighting
made it more fun
and raji too
yup maan and jeeps have long connection
and him speaking punjabi waah kya baat hai
okay off to DFL and this time will be done by the time you wake up tomorrow

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: chavvi16

koi nahin
can wait
and as long as things shall mend soon
its smaller today so wont take me too long
and that am happy about for you
wait does that make sense hope it does

Yes! It does make sense! Atleast to me!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: chavvi16

haiyye just loved that you put in geet fighting
made it more fun
and raji too
yup maan and jeeps have long connection
and him speaking punjabi waah kya baat hai
okay off to DFL and this time will be done by the time you wake up tomorrow

And let me tell you that when I woke up and read it, went so happy! Still grinning!

But sorry for not replying your reviews these days! I am doing it slowly coz I am spending more time on writing and studying, so time for replying is very less for me. Sorry!😊

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

In tension dear! DFL is nearing end and I have to make sure I tie all the ends up! So it has got me a bit tensed!😊

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: Kalpana_Writer

In tension dear! DFL is nearing end and I have to make sure I tie all the ends up! So it has got me a bit tensed!😊

Hmmm... So DFL is ending I know you will tie all the ends perfectly. Will look forward to another similar awesome FF from you.

Edited by fffan123 - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: fffan123

Hmmm... So DFL is ending I know you will tie all the ends perfectly. Will look forward to another similar awesome FF from you.

Oye! Itni jaldi bhi DFL khatam nahi hoga! Lucknow mein jaana baaki hai, shaadi ki saari rasmein baaki hai, aur phir shaadi baaki hai baad mein epilogue bhi hoga! 15 - 20 chapters toh baaki hai!😃😉

But yes, jokes apart, my darling DFL is ending! After it ends I will take a break from writing for one or two weeks! After that, I will start planning DFL - A Deviation (Thats the working title) It will be the story of what would have happened if Geet had not lost her memory the night she met Maan! That story will not have separation and will be Rom - Com like Kahaani Zubaani! Full on comedy with a dash of romance!

While working on that, I will even write some one shots as many of my readers had asked many wishes which I was unable to put in DFL. So the ones I won't be able to put in Deviation I will write it as one shots! I am hoping that Deviation will end faster than DFL as it will have only 28 - 30 chapters! Once that is done, I will write Destined To Be Yours! This fic will be lot darker than DFL but not as dark as some fics I have read in IF! It will be lot longer than Deviation but smaller than DFL! It is also full of angst and will show Geet and Khushi in a bold, bindaas avatar coz of something which happened due to Maan and Arnav! The clash between the guys and the girls will be awesome to watch ... errr... read! That is all I would say! That's all is my working plan! Aage ka I have plans but only these ones are definite!😃

But I have atleast two more stories after Destined To Be Yours with Maneet and Arhi Combo! Plus I have a dream of writing a mystery - thriller - suspense with supernatural element story with these couples and I will write it defo one day using Rajasthan forts and cities as a backdrop for it! 😃 That is just a dream though. No plans ready yet!

Phew! Kitna dur ka maine plan kiya nahi? God knows which all plans I will be able to execute but I hope to execute all of them!

Take care

Kalpana

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Hello you all sweet sweet people,

I have a small announcement to make! DFL is going on hiatus for a while! Now before you all shout at me here are the reasons. Read it carefully or suffer through ignorance!

When I first planned DFL, only the basic outline was ready but the whole story was thought out including how the leads will get together. Around the time, I had a habit of writing my ideas in an old diary. There are many more ideas scribbled in it regarding DFL, ideas related to the next few chapters! So now I have to go through it, note down the scenes on the PC which will take time coz I have filled the diary with notes on other FFs too (which I plan to write after DFL ends) I have to literally read each page of a very fat diary to find those notes and this whole process of copying it to PC might take the whole day! Infact, I have even lessened my study time to work on it today!

Another important thing is a notebook which I keep with me when I travel. Whenever I travel I write the ideas in it. It has ten pages filled with scenes for next DFL chapters! So have to put it up on my PC too.

Then there are some ideas I wrote on a file on my PC too. The above notes will be added to these notes on PC.

Another important thing is that many scenes in DFL before the mega twist (Chapter 54 & 55) have importance in future scenes. For eg: The Devi Maiyya idol which K gifted A before Mega Twist was used in last chapter and will be used in future too. So i have to read the notes of those early chapters and add those points to my notes on my PC.

Then there are many songs which while listening to it in these two years I found perfect for some situations and I have noted them down too. I have to sort through them and see where I will be able to use them!

And last but not the least, remember those wishes you made. Well! I have read it only till Page 50 of the third thread. So I will have to read them fully and see what all I can add in the story! (Meanwhile I will try to reply them all too!😉)

Now after going through all the books, notes and wishes, I have to compile them, arrange them based on the rituals of the wedding, smooth the gaps between the scenes, write some scenes down as they lurk in my head but I have not written it down anywhere! And after doing all this, I will divide my points into chapters! And yes! This means once I am done with this exercise you will have exact estimate on how many chapters are left for DFL to end! And yes! This is what I meant when I said 'I have to tie the ends perfectly!'

Phew! How many things I have to go through to give DFL the perfect ending it deserves! Also this hiatus will be for 2 - 5 days! After that it will take me 2 - 3 days to write the next update and post it!So it will take me total 5 - 8 days to update unlike my regular three days update! Hence, my dear readers, DFL is going on Hiatus for a while!😉😆 But don't worry! I will keep you apprised of situation and give you estimate as usual at night!😉

Take care and be patient,

Kalpana

P.S. I will put Chapter 65 (B) tonight itself!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#329

we will get second part of 65 B
then why worry
then you take your time dear
ufff you gave me heart attack when you said haitus
but just gotta wait for week max that is fine and understandable
ek do ya four mahine ki baat hoti toh worried hoti
wow i loved what you are planning after DFL
the deviation
another story of combo but are girls will be much stronger there
cant wait for all these to happen

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: chavvi16
we will get second part of 65 B
then why worry
then you take your time dear
ufff you gave me heart attack when you said haitus
but just gotta wait for week max that is fine and understandable
ek do ya four mahine ki baat hoti toh worried hoti
wow i loved what you are planning after DFL
the deviation
another story of combo but are girls will be much stronger there
cant wait for all these to happen

Happy that you like my future plans! Eager to end DFL and start working on them!😃

I know I must have shocked you! But these few days I have updated so fast that this does seem like a hiatus for me!😆

Ab no more long breaks like in the ones I did due to net and my back! Kyunki due to exercise, my back problem has almost gone and we got new connection for net, so net problem is also no more! Only problem is light! Thats all!😃

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