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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story
very emotional
hope khushi recovers soon
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nice and emotional ff
loved it😊
feeling sad for arnav
hope he realises the truth soon
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waiting for the next update.
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dat was wonderful


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PART 3 Battling Desires!!

sorry for the late update! was out of station!! here goes part 3 and part 4 !! enjoy !! thanks to every single reader who commented and hit the like!! love the support!!

the next 2 parts are ready!! so if you can hit the like atleast near a 100 i shall update twice today😉 but if you don i shall def update later😆 may be on monday!!

arnav stood outside the Operation Theater clutching to her mangal sutra for dear life with his eyes closed and resting against the wall behind him!!

well his mind was far away from his reach and his heart had taken control of the moment making him forget everything but her!! as fear of history repeating in front of him of losing a loved one right before his eyes crept he shot open his blood shot eyes looking at the bare reality in front of him!!!anjali enteined her fingers into his as he held on tighter but not a word escaped from his lips!!

nk signalled akash and slowly got out informing anjali that he would pick up shyam from the airport!! anjali was too lost in arnav that she just nodded her head turning back to arnav!!!

shyam picked up his bags from the belt and walked his way out and just as he was about to call anjali having not cited a driver nk rushed to him

nk: jijaji !! i am here

shyam was suprised!! nk bhai!! but

nk took over one of the bags from shyam smiling : woh! actually jijaji everyone from home have gone for a satsang and nannav is away as usual!! so di sent me to pick you up!!

the good cover of shyam was in action: wah!! how lucky i am nk bhai!! and he got into his car strapping the seat belt across him!!

nk messaged akash and smirked as he got into the car thinking: i am sorry jijai but i have to do this for knowing the truth!!

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it was 3 hours since the surgery started and there was no sign of the doctors out yet!!

in few minutes a nurse walked out with a bill

just as arnav was to recieve it buaji held it throwing back a glare at him!! arnav had no energy to stare back and quietly leaned back!!

anjali noticed it but somehow chose to not think much into this!!

Buaji called hap[y ji along and walked down the stairs to the reception!!

payal 's eyes showed a hurt that was obvious as akash just assured her silently to be at place!!

he walked over to anjali: di my battery is dead and i need to make some calls to the office!! we ;eft suddenly and

anjali handed over the phone to akash: no problem akash!! here!!

akash: thanks di and walked away towards the reception counter!!

he saw buaji removing he rbangles and handing over to happy ji

buaji: happy! mortgage them!! and get as much as you can

happy ji walked away when

buaji called : happy !! avtually don mortgage!! sell them !! we might need for the future too!!


akash rushed and held buaji's hand" buaji you know this is not needed

buaji: plz forgive me damadji!! but i don want any of the raizada riches to be on my daughter!!i was quiet coz you and payaliya!! don worry i wont tell anything !! but at the same time i will not let anything happen again with my titaliya!! she will come back to me i know!! she will and buaji walked away wiping her tears leaving akash stunned

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shyam eneterd to find shantivan empty and quiet for a wonder

shyam: nk bhai if ladies of the house are not there def something is missing na!!

nk: yeah jijai!! but when ladies are not there its more fin too!! like see me and aksh bhai cooked today

shyam: now your gonna shock me with truths and revelations!! the cook in you and the fact that you don miss your di!!

nk: thats the plan??

shyam: plan

nk: i mean!! if we planned to cook and gonna make you eat also its a plan to kill na!!! and he saved himslef just in time!!

shyam walked to his room as his eyes searched for his khushi:!! come back soon khushiji he smiled as he walked into his room but stopped finding khushi and arnav's photo on the wall!! his eyes went with rage which was noticed By nk and he clutched his fists calming himself!

shyam freshened and walked down seeing the table laid before him

nk: welcome jijai!! nk's dinner spl!! you will know how good my di cooks today and winked at him

shyam smiled and sat down: you better be ready to answer her uh

nk smiled : so will you!!

suddenly the protective active cunning cover of a pathi woke up in shyam : i need to call rani saiba ever since i reached i dint and he took out the phone as nk nodded: yeah!! juliet waiting for romeo's call!!

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the doctor walked out to find the anxious faces of guptas and raizadas surrounding her

Dr:Mehra: we have removed most of the clots succesfully but many parts of the brain have been sverely injured!! regarding her progress and condition we can tell you only after 48 hrs!! till then lets keep praying for the best and he walked away!

buaji sank down beside a shattered garima as nani walked over to console them!!

payal burried her face into akash's chest!

anjali turned to look at arnav who stood expressionless!!!

arnav felt as if he was being pulled into darkness with the shine of hope going further away!!his mind finally took over and his heart and mind set in a battle!! he remmebered her tear stained eyes and innocent words before she was trying to die!!! he remmebered the letter she had wriitten for him with the stars!!

he remembered th shock in her face when he blurte dout about knowing the affair between her and shyam!!! he remembered how he had taunted her for being a charecterless woman!!

had all this been tru would such a girl dare to die!!! unless his words hurt her why would she want to suicide!! why will a girl like that write such an innocent letter of becoming a star!!!

the fear of his chances of having been wrong hit him harder as guilt from nowhere made its way!!!

but can arnav singh raizada be wrong?? if so has he beenn?? the very thought stirred an unknown fear pulling him more into darkness and he clutched anjali's fingers tighter without his knowledge as she looked at him suprised!!

anjali's mobile vibrated and aksh saw Shyamji name flashing!! he looked at anjali who was caressing a lost arnav and as payal looked at him he smirked lightly switching off the phone after the call got cut and slid it back into his pocket whispering to himself: i am sorry di!!!


PRECAP"


shyam: this apple juice tastes a bit sour

nk: woh!! they are bitter apples by nature jijaji!! the ones from the shorni area

shyam: oh okay!! but tastes good and gulped them down as nk stared at shyam with a smirk on his face and pain in his eyes

FOR THE NEXT PART PLZZZ SCROLL DOWN!!!!!! PART $ IS RIGHT BELOW

i know the update was short but the next will be long!! this is a kinda slow paced story dealing with desires from all ends and i wanna try keeping it near to real if not totally!!!! so do excuse me if it was disappointing!!


and signing off with this note
Those who play with the devil's toys
will be brought by degrees to wield his sword.
- R. Buckminster Fuller

coolbakes!! good day!!
Edited by coolbakes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4:-)
as i said double treat today!!! and if you want one more all you have to do assure this poor writer that you like the story and drop a comment!!😳

as i said its your choice.. a 100 likes and you will see the next update striaght away if not MONDAY😆


"for he is such a disagreeable man, that it would be quite a misfortune to be liked by him." JANE AUSTEN PRIDE AND PREJUDICE!!!
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anjali knew arnav loved khushi deeply but seeing his state she could do nothing but feel that there was more than just the fear of losing khushi in his eyes!! Buaji who was always on arnav's side had not even spoke to him!! not even a few consoling words...anjali was worried...was she missing out something.. is there more than what is meeting her eye!!! she kept caressing the hairs of arnav as he sat next to her!!!

Dr.Mehra walked in after a few minutes to once again check on khushi!!

a worried garima and buaji looked on and just as he walked out arnav sprang up: is she fine??

Dr.Mehra: she is stable Mr.Raizada! which itself is suprising to us!!

arnav felt a small wave of peace within him but Dr.Mehra din let it last long!!

Dr.Mehra: but about her conscious state we can not comment!!

Akash: what do you mean??

Dr.Mehra: well... the brain has several functions and how much things have been affected will be known when she opens her eyes!! and in such cases anything might happen!!!

arnav clenched his fists closing his eyes and slowly whispered: can i plz see her

buaji was about to when payal pulled her back with pleading eyes and buaji pushed down payal's hands rapidly giving back a cold stare!!

anjali noticed it but chose to ignore as she was still confused about what was happening!!

Dr.Mehra: i am sorry but

arnav: See!! i need to meet her!! plzzz

Dr.Mehra was about to refuse when chief Dr.Shergil walked in and was suprised seeing arnav at the door

on learning the situation he went in to check on khushi and looked at arnav with sympathy in his eyes" Mr.Raizada you have helped this hospital in so many ways!! giving back your wife the way you would like to see her would be the best repay we can do!!

arnav gave a faint smile

Dr.Shergil!! i am sure Mehra has given you the updates!! i wil tell you one thing!! more than all this 2 things can cure her! thats why we have miracles!!

arnav: anything!! from anywhere!! just do it

the doctor smiled patting arnav by his shoulder: GOD and Love!! i shall add her in my prayers as well

anjali nodded her head smiling a little at his words!

before he was about to leave he turned to Arnav: i wish i could do much more!! but for now!! only you can go and meet her!! she is in a separate ward so it should not be a problem but i cant let the others!! i hope you understand

akash: just let bhai!! we are fine!!

anjali nodded her head: we totally understand! thank you so much!!

arnav hugged the doctor thanking him for his timely help as the nurse took him aside for scrubbing before entering khushi's room

anjali walked to the mandir and buaji leashed out at payal: Money does everything!! he wants to see if she is dead is it

payal: buaji!! arnavjii loves

buaji stared back cold: do you know what love is payal!! TRUST BAROSA VISHWAS!! and after listening to him he has nothing to do with it!! but its not his fault!! the one who is inside na! she only does not know!otherwise will she chose a person like him!! thats why his words had led her to this state today!!and she broke down crying as payal stood hurt with no answers from her side!!

garima and nani stared in horror listening to buaji;s words!!

nani: madhumathiji!! what are you saying?? we thought khushi fell off the terrace

buaji leashed back: she is not a 4 yr old to jump off the terrace naniji!!

garima: didi!! whats are you talking!! be quiet na

buaji: that day becoz she was quiet of shyam only your daughter is inside!! next you want me also

mamiji felt the earth almost shaking beneath: HHBB what saying you!! he;s our damadwa and you

akash ran by and held a shocked nani as payal told them everything!!!

nani finally broke down clutching aksh: whats all this akash!! damadji chotey khushi!! i don understand anything!!!

mami who hardly spoke about khushi had tears staining her cheeks more and more as she uttered: khushi bitiya!! and she broke down in payal's arms


akash saw anjali at a distance: di pregnant hai!! we cant let her know anything now!! nk bhai and i will find out everything!! for now not to di or arnav bhai!! plzzz

buaji walked away taking her place by the chair!!!

anjali walked in to find nani mami and the others more tensed than when she had left!! she quietly took her place beside nani who withheld herself from looking at anjali least she broke down!!

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nk saw shyam coming down the stairs and as expected froze a minute looking into khushi's photo totally making nk feel like puking on his jijaji!!

nk " khushiji you gave him a chance so that he will be change!! but how wrong you are??

nk knew what was to come but nothing is better than getting it from the horses mouth!! he could no more tolearte the sight ahead and cleared his throat: jijai what are you seeing??

shyam stamerred at the unexpected throw of question: woh... nothing nk bhai!! this pic was not here before na

nk: hmm.. i framed it!! they look cute together na!! how much they love each other!!

shyam's face fell at the words of adore nk gave them and without thinking: hmm khushiji does but salesahib

he realized as nk gave him a confused look

shyam: i mean.. we know arnav na!! he's the grumpy but khushi is

nk: too sweet for nannav you mean jijaji

shyam: no no!! how would i say that!! lets eat na! i am very hungry!!

nk smirked as he laid the table and both inverted their plates!! nk served him and then a little himself and poured down the apple juice in 2 huge tumblers

shyam: cheers and he sipped into it to make a pouting expression

nk: what happened jijai

shyam: nothing! it tastes sour

nk: oh thats coz the variety of apples jijai

shyam smiled: yeah!! but they taste kinda like beer you know

nk : but jijai you told di and us u have never even tasted hard drinks

shyam knew nk was too sharp and was annoyed at his question: oh nk bhai!! i meant both sour! so good substitute for beer

nk nodded sipping into his sweet tasty apple juice while shyam sipped into the apple vodka ****tail lets aware of entering hell finally!!he was enjoying the drink and nk was kind enough to fill his glass every now and then slowly making him move to his land of ecstasy and when shyam din note he switched on the recorder he had placed in his pocket!!

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arnav walked in and opened the door to find a nurse beside khushi!!
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the minute sister saw him she walked out leaving him alone with khushi!!

he saw her at a distance lying cold with her eyes closed all sides monitors attached and the oxygen mask covering her angelic face!!

he remembered how he always found her when he enters his room...

there were times he found her dancing with lavanya

there were times he saw her with a bluetooth on her ears imitating him talking business

there were even time when she and lakshmiji were watching kamlesh kabarji on his tv!!

he had never walked into her when she was actually still in one place!! even when she was asleep the minute he walked in she used to jump from the bed pulling in some argument or the other!!

how many times he had wished she could shut up!!

tears fell from the corner of his eyes as his legs failed to support him!!

he din like it a second to see her like this!! A part of him longed for her to sprang up from the bed and scream at him!! fight with him or slap him but he just wanted her up!!!

he sat beside her observing her face!!

stains of tears were deep enough to be seen!! the mascara on her lids were all around!! the dark circles he had failed to notice all these days was all around her eyes making themselves more visible to him!!

the fringe that she always blew back proudly everytime she challenged him was neatly strapped under the huge bandage covering her head!!

the cheeks and nose he had always seen turn red when his words were thrown at her were red even now but not coz blush but cause the bruises !!

hearing the monitors beep and her breathing shallow made him feel a tinge in heart and it pained to see hem suffer!!! yes he was angry with her and he wanted her to face hell but when she actually was he din want to see anymore of it!!he wished he could take all the pain from her!!

as his eyes went deep red with tears making their exit form the corner of his eyes he sat beside her and slowly raised his hand !! and as if tremors had struck him he couldnt gain the courage to touch her... finally he let his hands rest on her cheeks and the minute they brushed her skin he felt the pain go down his spine...

he remembered her screaming: you wanted to marry lavanyaji na! thats why you used me!! i will die myself you just be happy!!

he remembered her words in his letter: i leave behind these stras for you! the one that shines the nrightest na in the sky remember thats me

her words came flashing in front of him: arnavjii!! the next scene is your fav!! i will die!! what else!!

but there she lay still in front of him showing him a world of nothingness surrounded by darkness with a shade of uncertainty and letting him embrace loneliness for playing with her vulnerabilities...

he burried his head beside hers and finally after the hours of anxiety taking a toll on him he let out the tears within him flow as he whispered: TALK TO ME DAMMIT!! PLZ DONT DO THIS!! Talk to me Khushiii



"I cannot fix on the hour, or the spot, or the look or the words, which laid the foundation. It is too long ago. I was in the middle before I knew that I had begun."
? , JANE AUSTEN PRIDE AND PREJUDICE!!!

Precap;

shyam sprang over holding arnav by his caller: its coz of you My khushijii is in this state na!! see what she got for loving a man like you !! but i wont leave you ARNAV SINGH RAIZADAAA and he pushed arnav against the wall


so how was the update guys!! i hope to see a better response with the story passing by!!thanks to the sweet people who commented and to those who hit the thank you!! silent readers show some sign yar so that i know ppl are liking the story and i shall continue writing!!
Edited by coolbakes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fantastic update n very excited for d nxt one
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Awesome muah Loved it 👏
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wow amazing updates loved them thank you for pm.
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wow double treat
both were gud
so nk and akash trying to find truth
i wish they found out fast
and arnav too realize it

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