FS:Counterfeit Murderer last part pg 24 (5/11)

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sri91

@sri91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

nice ending...
Such an unexpected twist...
Khushi's confidence abt arnav's arrival was good...
Dhruv played a wonderful name game...
Congrates...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Wouldn't have seen this coming

And so glad that I didn't

Or else that would ruin the mystery

So aki never died but shy

And person pretending to be aki shy was actually someone else

Some fraud person

Man khushi was in danger though

And Arnie was scared

Now that's was good naa

And what he said about staying with him

But then changed his mind

That was funny

But her answer even better

Hope your exams went well

So when Will you write the next one hopefully soon

Cheers for pm

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

loved the twist u gave to the story
loved it

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Awsommmiiieee i knew da 1 died isn't akash...i so expctd it wasn't akash dead body infct he turnd out 2 b killr isn't too shocking i somwht xpctd it...awsom kesha nxt mystry sooon!!!

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

oh after a long time...
nice ending

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

wow nice ending.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊

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drashtimeetu

@drashtimeetu

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Awsome update and ending
Loved it

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nisso

@nisso

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

thank you for posts! 😊

good work! 👏
i read the in one go. 🤗

Edited by nisso - 11 years ago

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sarada

@Saru...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

U updated so lately so there will be punishment..start another one soon 😡😉 wanring

keshu loved it..so it was dhruv..nevr expected this

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kaira101

@kaira101

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Loved the update
Awesome story
Wish it didn't end so soon
Hope ur exams went well
Thanx for the pm
If u write more stories please do pm me

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