Virman Collab FF: Games of the Heart ~ Updated Chapter 1

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Tejeswy

@kushal90

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

W-O-W...

I'm superrr duperrr exciteddd..!! 😉

Update sooon nd do pm me..!! 🤗 😃

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@neetnia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

yaar.. it seems like a suspense thriller + romantic story !!!!!!!!! like zanzer
mujhe pasand hai esthark ka stories.. ooommggg im so exiteddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thank uuu sooo much 4 dis kind f a storyyy
but yaar virat ko dida mature banado.. plzz.. like strict professional.. :p sorry main mere pov batharahi di.. tu gooo ahead...
thank u sooo much..

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hey Zainab, just got your PM
Nice concept and the story seems interesting from the prologue...
Nice to meet your partner Ayesha as well...
Hope to read the 1st chapter soon...
Thanks for the PM
...😊

P.S.: You didn't reply to my last PM yet..😕

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roshreb

@roshreb

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

interesting prologue & CS..thanks for the PM

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Hello, Ayesha. Welcome to ehmmbh forum. We'll love you, my dear. Coming to the story of my awesome writers, I loved the title chosen for this fan fiction. I loved the prologue to the core of my heart. This is something really different. Really suspenseful and mysterious. But I have a request. Can u add 'hot' here "If your looking for a romantic, suspenseful story, then you have picked the right place!" please? Jk. 😆 It seems really very interesting even to read the prologue and the character sketch! I don't know which part of roles will VirIka be playing here... So that Karan Singh is a villain, eh? I am looking forward to read more of this amazing ff. And you guys are really creative. 😊 Add me to your pm list. And, han, my Viru will be looking so hot in his new avtar given by u guys 😳 Sorry if I bored u guys wid my comment. Making people bored has now become my profession. Lol. And, and, and... Miss Zainab, r u now happy? Lol. Update soon. Bye! Loads of love! Take care both of u.

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Superrrb concept girls!

Prologue sounds damn exciting. Am really looking forward to read further!

Thanx for the pm Ayesha! Do continue soon!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

awesome prologue interesting concept can't wait to read more thanks for the pm

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deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

nice intro and cs...plz pm me or scrap me wen u continue this one...
😊

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

I really regret commenting late
im so sorry for that
im in loveee with the prologue
i just really cnt wait to read it
plz plz plz plz plz update quickly
And do pm me plz
will be eagerly waiting for updates 😉