Maaneet ff....Ishq Hua....thread#2....Part 58....Pg 2

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Hey guys...thank you all for a thread 2...your love to this ff made it all...

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Part 57...

Maan and geet are flirting with other people in order to make each other jealous...maan seems to be furious at geet's attempts to make him jealous but geet who is also feeling jealous seems to be having fun irritating maan...maan cant take it any more and goes to geet who is happily talking to another boy...

Maan taps geet's shoulders and asks...

Maan: Geet...geet...

Geet: kya hai?...kyun tang karrahe hai aap?...aap dekh nahin sakte..main kisi se baat karrahi hoon...

Maan:usso ke bare me poochne ke liye aaya hoon...

Geet:achcha kya poochna hai?

Maan:yeh ladka kaun hai jisse tum itni hass hass ke baatein karrahi ho?

Geet:arey mujhe kaise pata ki yeh kaun hai?...wahi toh pata karne ki koshish karrahi hoon...

Maan:kya? tumhe pata nahin hai yeh kaun aur isse aise baatein kiye jarahi ho jaise ki tum kitne saalon se isse janti ho geet...

Geet:arrey janti nahin toh jan jaungi...isse kya farq parta hai...

Maan:farq parta hai...bina jane tum kisi se bhi baat karlogi...

Geet:arrey aise hi toh shaadi hoti hai...

Maan:kyaaa?...shaadi..?

Geet:haan shaadi...shaadi ke liye hi toh baat karrahi thi main...!

Maan:geet..mujhe pata tha ki tumhara dimag kharapai lekin itna kharap ha woh pata nahin tha...tum uss ladke se aaj hi mili ho aur tumdirectly usse shaadi ki baat karne lagi...????

Geet:arrey ka karne wali thi...abhi tak nahin ki...aur aap hi ne kaha tha ki shaadi kar leni chahiye...toh main toh apne boss ki hi toh sunnrahi hoon...

Maan:woh maine apne bare main kaha tha...tumhare bare main nahin...

Geet:haan toh aapko koi nahin mili...???

Maan:huh...bohot saari...lekin mujhe koi pasand nahin aayi...

Geet:achcha...koi pasand nahin aayi...mujhe toh lagta hai kisi ne aapko hi pasand nahin kiya hoga...

Maan:achcha...toh tumhe bara asand kiya hoga uss ladke ne...

Geet:karlega..ek second main abhi baat karti hoon...

Geet turns to see that the boy has already gone...geet gets angry on maan...all this while mihika and the rest of the gang watch all this...

Geet:dekha..aapke waje se yeh ladka bhi chala gaya..aap na...sach me...beech main aana zaroori tha??

Maan:geet..isme nahi meri na uss bechare ki galti hai..balki galti tumhari hai...tumhari shakal dekhkar toh koi bhi bhagjaega...

Geet:achcha..meri shakal?...apni shakal dekhi hai aapne...aaine main dekhenge toh aaina darr jaega...

Maan:kum se kum tumse toh achchi hai...

Geet:haan haan...isiliye toh unn churailon ke peeche bhagrahe the aap!

Maan: arey main toh sirf baat karraha tha...aur waise bhi tum mujhe kya bulati ho...bhooton ka sardar..toh bhoot ke liye bhootni dhundraha tha...(smiles)

Geet:hahaha...very funny...mujhe bhi koi miljaega aur woh bhi aapse pehle...phir dhundte rahiyega apni bhootni dulhan...

Maan:haan haan tum bhi dhundlena...dekhte hai...

They both look into each other's eyes...angry...and leave while mihika and the rest tap their foreheads to lament the failure of their plan...

Mihika: guys...i think humein na inke peeche aur time waste karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai...mere bhai ka na kuch nahin hosakta hai...yeh devdas banke reh jayenge aur geet paro...

Arjun:lekin kar kya sakte hai...

Neha:haan yaar...kahan geet ko jealous hona tha..aur maan sir khud jealous hoke chale gaye...aur upar se jhagda...ab jhagda suljhaye yah phir dil milaye...

Mihika: kuch toh karna parega...

Geet and maan both are standing in corner angry at each other...while mihika goes and speaks to maan...

Mihika:bro..yeh kya kiya aapne?...aap kyun guss dikha rahe the?..guss toh geet ko karna tha...aapko nahin...

Maan:arrey yaar i know...lekin main kya karta...geet kitne has hass ke baatein karrahi thi uss ladke ke saath..mujhe ek pal ke liye laga woh usse shaadi hi karlegi...

Mihika: kya bro aap bhi...aisa kuch nahin hoga...

Maan:rehne de muhu...mood theek nahin hai...main apne kamre main jaraha hoon..

Mihika:par bro...!!!

Maan leaves ..

Mihika: yeh dekho...itnni choti si baat pe itna gussa..kyun??..mood toh kharap hoga..pehle pehle pyar ka jealousy hai yeh..itni asani se thode hi koi bhooljata hai...inko toh ek dusre se milna hi parega...

The ceremony finishes...while everybody wraps up he ceremony...geet searches for maan...unable to find him, geet asks mihika who is helping the rest...

Geet: mihika..tumne maan sir ko dekha?

Mihika: nahin main toh bhaiya ko nahin dekha...kyun??

Geet: ok...

Mihika: kyun?kuch kaam tha kya?

Geet: nahin...its ok...!...rehne do..mujhe kya...gussa karna hai toh karein...mujhe koi farq nahin parta hai...main bhi jarahi hoon sone...

Mihika:ab dekho mera kamaal...

All of them go off to sleep in their rooms...geet comes to her room...she sees mihika already asleep...she is about to go and change when she finds a note near the dressing table...she reads it and comes to know that it has been written by maan...in that maan asks her to come and meet him near the pool...geet first refuses to go but finally make sup her mind that she should once go and meet him but she would not speak to him...

On the other hand, maan receives a letter too citing the same thing...he also refuses at first but decides to go...he also decides not to speak to her unless she does...

all this while mihike watches all this through her blanket...she messages the entire gang to come down after geet and maan have gone to meet each other...after geet and maan leave the gang follows silently...

Geet is walking with a frown expression, talking to herself while maan is also talking to himself...

Geet:huh...hogayi apni galti realise...ab aarahe hai maafi mangne...

Maan:flirt karne ke pehle nahin socha ...ab usse sorry kehna hai...

They come near the pool walking very fast without realizing that they are about to clash with each other...they walk so fast that they bang against each other near the pool and fall right into the pool together...

All drenched, they first try to realize what happened when suddenly maan sees geet struggling with the water...he saves geet from getting drowned and holds her by her waist...they look into each other's eyes romantically and their background plated behind...they look lost into each other...while the rest of the gang feel elated seeing them together...

Mihika: kabhi kabhi kuch cheeze unexpected hoti hai...Love you God...!!!

While they exchange high-fives, maan and geet come back to reality...geet and maan try to come out of the water...geet struggles to come out of the water and maan observes that..he helps her...maan lifts geet and takes her in his arms and like a prince charming brings geet out of the pool...they look lost into each other...

The rest of the gang are all wrapped in blankets..looking funny..they enjoy the fun and see if their plan is successful or not...

Mihika:haye...mujhe nahin pata tha ki mera bhai itna romantic hai...i'm sure ab sab theek hojaega..!!!

Maan:geet tum theek toh ho na?

Geet:haan...main theek hoon...

Maan gets lost in geet when she is drying her hair...he comes back to reality...

Geet: aap dekhkar nahin chal sakte hai kya?...girgayi na main pani main??

Maan: oh hello...shayad tum bhool rahi ho ki main bhi pani main gira hoon...toh dekhkar tumhe bhi chalna chahiye tha...waise yeh tumhare purani aadat hai...

Geet:achcha meri aadat...raat ko kya blinkers pehenkar chal rahe the...

Seeing them fighting, mihika says...

Mihika: i spoke too soon...there they go again...

Maan: tum bhi na geet..tumko toh bahana chahiye ladne ka...

Geet: aap hi se seekha hai...

Maan: oh really...agar itni problem hai mujhse toh kyun bulaya mujhe yahan??

Geet:huh...maine...??...maine aapko nahin bulaya...aapne bulaya hai muje yahan pe...

Maan: par maine...ek second ..ek second...hum lad kyun rahe hai in the first place...jisne bhi bulaya ho, hum har baat pe kyun jhagda karrahe hai...humein ho kya gaya hai...tabse lade hi jarahe hai...

Geet gives it a thought...

Geet: haan...baat toh aapki sahi hai...hum jhagda kyun karrahe hai...???...bilkul bachcho ki tarah...

Maan: i am sorry geet...mujhe jhagda nahin karna chahiye tha...

Geet:no sir...i am sorry...meri galti hai...main hi hamesha rai ka pahaad banadeti hoon...

Maan:kaha na meri galti hai...

Geet: arrey meri hai...

This leads to a sweet bickering between the two...and they ultimately end up laughing at their kiddish fights...the gang sees this and becomes elsted...in the process mihika hugs arjun which makes him lost in dreams...the entire gang celebrates maan and geet's patch up...maan and geet on the other hand sit beside the pool side and talk till late hours of the night...while the gang goes back to sleep...

Maan and geet return to their rooms and while going off to sleep think about each other...The next morning everyone is at the breakfast table...all are settled when maan and geet come to the table together...the gang decides to pull their legs...both are sneezing as they both were wet all night...they both have a cold which gives the gang a good way to tease them...

Mihika: Good morning dear brother...aiiyye aiyye ...bethiye...

Maan finds it strange and so does geet...

Neha: arrey geet tum kyun khadi ho...tum bhi betho..

Geet:ho kya gaya aaj tujhe yaar...itne manners!!

Neha: thank you...

Suddenly maan and geet sneeze together repeatedly...for a moment they look at each other feeling strange...the whole gang smile at them...

Mihika: arrey waah...kya coincidence hai...sneezing buddies...

All laugh exceot geet and maan who feel awkward...

Maan: mihika...chup chap khana khaegi...

Mihika: areey maine toh aise hi kehdiya...itne chid kyun rahe hai aap?

They again sneeze...the whole group looks at them...

Neha: u r right mihika...itna coincidence...my God...kys timing compatibility hai dono ki,,,'

Geet: kuch zyada nahin bolrahi tu...

Neha: arrey main kaha zyada bolrahi hoon...main toh bas aise hi...

Mihika: waise geet...kal raat ko tum kahan thi...main dhundrahi thi tumhe...

Maan coughs as if food has got stuck...

Maan:tujhe kya?...kahi bhi jaye yeh...

Mihika: arey aap itna kyun bhadak rahe hai...maine geet se poocha hai aapse nahin...

Geet: woh main...woh main...woh...(looks at maan)

Maan: arey rehne de na...gayi hogi night walk ke liye...

Mihika: night walk???...kahin tum neend main toh nahin chalrahi thi na??

Maan: kyun pareshan karrahi hai usse?...rehne de na...gayi hogi kisi kaam se...ur tu itni raat ko jagi kyun thi...??

Mihika: main uthi thi beech main...dekha toh raat ke ek baje the...isiliye mujhe thodi tensionhorahi thi...isiliye poochliya...bas...

Geet:uff ho...kyun ladrahe hai aap dono...woh main thoda pani peene gayi thi neeche...phir socha thoda tehel loon...(in her mind)...yeh maan sir bhi na...aise complicated time pe bulate hai ki hamesha main hi phas jati hoon...

Maan: (in his mind)...yeh geet bhi na aise time pe bulaya ki...ek minute...geet ne kaha ki usne nahin bulaya aur maine toh bulaya hi nahin tha...oh...now i understand...yeh sab kuch mihika aur poore gang ki mili bhagat hai...isiliye geet aur meri tang khichai karahi hai...waise bhi usne yeh sab meri madat karne ke liye kiya hai...love you little sister...

Maan smiles at mihika who notices and understands that maan knows that it was her who called them both...

Mihika: oh ok...well aaj shopping karne jana sabko...

Avantika's mom:yaad rahe... shaam ko Mata Rani ki puja hai...usse pehle vapas aana hai...taiyyariyan karni hai aur khud taiyyar hona hai...

Everyone says ok...and all get ready to go for shopping...!!!

Edited by swthrtdevisha - 11 years ago
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yipee!!! u updated 😃
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luvd d update!!!

maan kaha to geet ko jealous krne nikala tha aur yaha to wo hi jealousy se laal-peela ho gya😛

mihu ne kya plan bnaya dono ko poolside milane ka
n den their crash was perfect😳

SNEEZING BUDDIES😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
omg!!! just after writing it i too sneezed😲

good luck to mihu n gang...after all they r trying to get MAANEET TOGETHER!!!!😉😉😉😉


N PLZ NW UPDATE REGULARLY...PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!
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congrats for the new thread
awesome update
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happy to seee the update mera sare porana writer ko update karte i am sooo happy its a lucky day yaar
awsummm update 👏
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wen v gonna get next update????

WAITING!!!
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Part 58...

All of them go for shopping...and reach the market for shopping...they all have a gala time shopping around...they enter a shop to buy some wedding outfits...geet looks around to buy something good for herself to wear at the wedding...maan who is looking at geet selecting clothes for herself sees that she is confused...he decides to help her...she picks up a nice pink coloured dupatta and tries it on by looking at herself through the mirror...maan stands at a distace behind her and geet's eyes fall on maan when he says through hand expressions that it does not look good on her ...she picks up another one but maan too says that its not nice...she picks up another outfit but maan says that its not nice again...she gets confused and does not what to buy...she gives up when maan slowly comes from behind and places a nice golden red embelished dupatta on her head just like a bride and points to her to look at the mirror..she looks and gives a wide smile..maan smiles too...they both smile at each other...

Maan: ab lagrahi ho na tum geet bakshi...sabse special...sabse alag...

Geet: sach main sir?

Maan: haan...bilkul...yeh bohot achcha lagraha hai tumhare upar...

Geet:thank you sir...ab main yehi kharidungi...

Maan: ur welcome...dost hote kisliye hai...

Geet selects her dress but decides to buy something for maan as he had given her such a lovely gift...she selects a nice sherwani for him...wich would suit maan very well...she decieds to buy it for maan...all of them are busy buying their stuff for the wedding while geet goes to the billing counter to get the gift wrapped for maan ann to pay the billl..on the other hand maan who is helping mihika and the others buy gifts for the wedding, he spots a beautiful red bridal attire which makes him feel that this is the right bridal outfit for his bride...he imagines geet wearing it and looking ethereal as his bride...he smiles to which mihika says...

Mihika:kya hua bro??..smile kyun karrahe ho?

Maan:nothing...just like that...

Mihika:achcha...haathon main shaadi ka outfit..aur chehre par ek badi si smile...iska matlab toh yeh hai ki aap geet ke liye yeh oufit..

Maan:arrey..aisa kuch nahin hai..main toh bas aise hi dekhraha tha...

Mihika:achcha...dekhraha tha...kyun?..kya yeh outfit aap pehenne ke bare main sochrahe the?(laughs)

Maan: very funny mihika...kya bolrahi ho tum...tum bhi na geet ki tarah baatein karti ho...

Mihika:and thats what is nice about her...and isiliye u fell for her...right?

Maan:right...(smiles)

Mihika: toh ab yeh batao...yeh outfit ko dekhkar smile kyun karrahe the aap?

Maan:this outfit is so beautiful...main chahta hoon ki meri dulhan issi outfit ko pehne...aur main geet ko usme imagine karraha tha...

Mihika: how sweet...u kniw bro...maine yeh kabhi imagine nahin kiya tha aapko kisise pyar hosakta hai..aur agar hojayega toh bhi itna..sach main...kabhi nahin socha tha...

Maan:maine bhi kabhi nahin socha tha ki mujhe pyar hoga...aur woh bhi geet se...usne meri zindagi poori tareeke se badal di...ab bas intezaar hai uss pal ka jab main usse apne dil ki baat kahunga aur usse apni dulhan banake leke aaunga...

Mihika: aisa hi hoga bhai...dont worry...toh bhai yeh outfit khareed lo na..aapko phir kabhi nahin milega...

Maan:really?...should i?

Mihika: ofcourse bro...buy it...

Just when maan and mihika are talking about the outfit and geet, geet comes there to indulge into the conversation...maan keeps the outfit in a huff on the table...

Geet:hey mihika..kya hua?...kya baatein horahi hai...

Mihika: kuch nahin..bas aise hi...

Geet's eyes fall on the beautiful outfit kept in front of her...her eyes glow brightly seeing the beautiful bridal attire...

Geet:wow...yeh shaadi ka jora kitna khoobsoorat hai...hai na mihika?

Mihika gives a slight look to maan who signals her not to tell anything to geet about how this outfit came to the table...

Mihika:haan...waqai main...bohot pretty hai...

Geet:yeh shaadi ka jora toh kisi bhi dulhan par bohot khoobsoorat lagega...kya yeh jora hum avantika ma'am ke liye khareed le?

Mihika:uppp..par unhone apna shaadi ka jora already select karliya hai...woh shaadi ka jora toh husband ke ghar se aata hai..isiliye aditya ke gharwaon ne alreafy shagun pe shaadi ka jora bhejdiya...

Geet:oh...haan main toh bhool hi gayi thi...par pata hai yeh outfit chorkar jane ka dil nahin karraha hai..kaash main isse khareed paati...i wish main apne shaadi main isse pehen paati...u know what main hamesha se yeh dream dekhti thi ki main aise hi shaadika jora pehenkar shaadi karoon...kyunki har dulhan ke liye uske shaadi ka jora bohot special hota hai...

Mihika looks at maan who is looking at geet when she is talking about her marriage...

Mihika: i know...it is really beautiful...aur tum par toh yeh bohot khoobsoorat dikhega...hai na bro?

Maan: upp..haan...bohot khoobsoorat lagegi geet...

Geet: par sir yeh bohot expensive hai aurr upar se meri shaadi ko abhi bohot time hai...abhi main shaadi nahin karne wali aur waise bhi shaadi karne ke liye ek achche ladke ka milna bhi toh bohot zaroori hai...

Mihika: (murmurs)...woh toh tumhare saamne hi khada hai...dekhlo...

Geet: haan?...kuch kaha tumne?

Mihika: upp...nahin...kuch nahin...waise tumhe abhi tak koi mila nahin?

Maan gives a look at mihika...

Geet: nahin..koi nahin mila...(looks at maan)...koi mile toh sahi...

Both maan and geet exchange looks...

Seeing geet loving the attire, maan decides to buy it...only for his geet...

Maan: (in his mind)...geet yeh shaadi ka jora sirf tumhare liye banaya gaya hai...isiliye main apni geet ko isme hi dulhan bante huye dekhna chahta hoon...aur main janta hoon..isme tum meri dulhan bankar aaogi...

Maan, without anyone's knowledge decides to buy the bridal attire for geet..he somewhere knows in his heart that one day geet would become his bride and wear this attire on her wedding day ...

Maan buys it and keeps it for geet to give it to her at the right time...on the other hand geet also tries to hide the gift she bought for maan...

Just when maan buys the attir, mihika comes there...

Mihika: toh finally aapne ye jora khareed hi liya...matlab apne shaadi ki shopping bhi aapne kar hi li!(smiles)

Maan:shut up mihika...very funny...woh kya hai na main apne geet ki har farmaish poori karna chahta hoon..aur woh apne shaadi main yehi jora pehenkar meri dulhan banegi...

Mihika:waah!...kya dialogue mara hai brother...yeh sunkar koi bhi ladki aap par flat hojaegi...geet bhi..agar geet ko pata chala ki aapne yeh outfit khareed liya hai toh...

Maan:no way..usse agar tujhse kuch bhi pata chala na toh main..

Mihika: ok baba..usse kuch pata nahin chalega...main toh mazak karrahi thi...aur waise bhi ek na ek din toh usse pata chal hi jayega...gete ko pata bhi nahin hai ki uske dulhe ne uske liye uska jora bhi khareed liya...

Maan and mihika exchange smiles...geet sees maan laughing and smiles too.

Geet:yakeen nahin hota...jiss maan sir se main itni nafrat karti thi aaj wahi mujhe itne achche lagne lage hai...yeh kya horaha hai mujhe...aajkal maan sir ki har baat mujhe achchi lagti hai...

They both each other special gifts without each other's knowledge...they all finally finish shopping and leave for the venue...once they are back to the wedding venue they see decorations are on for the puja...they all carry the bags and come back...seeing maan carrying so many things, geet asks...

Geet:sir..aap itna saara samaan...itne saare shopping bags..?

Maan: yeh shopping bags saare meri pyaari behen ke hai...uska bas chale toh poori dukaan khareed le!

Geet smiles..

Geet:achcha...woh itni shopping karti hai...??

Maan:shoppping aur mihika dono ek dusre ke bagair reh nahin sakte hai...ek dusre kitna pyaar karte hai...unka pyaar dekhne ke liye na tumhe mihika ka kaamra aur khaas kar ke uska wardrobe dekhna chahiye...

Mihika: mujhe pata hai aap mere barein main baat karrahe hai...(whispers in maan's ears...agar zyada bola na toh yeh jo shaadi ka jora hai na woh main geet ko dedungi rakhne ke liye...phir usse explain karna ki aap kitna shopping karte hai...

Maan:ok ok...zyada bol mat...nahin udaunga tera mazak..fine!

Geet: arey sir...ladki hai...shopping toh karegi na..

Mihika:right..!!..bro..aap nahin samjhenge...!

Maan:haan...waqai main...main tum ladkiyon ko nahin samajh paunga...!!!

They all go their rooms to keep the bags and get ready...just when geet freshens u and comes down, she sees DM and Antara have come.She becomes super happy and hugs them...they inform them that it was maan who sent the driver and the car on time to receive them...geet gets impressed with maan and expresses thanks to him...all get settled in the room...and all start getting ready for the puja..all the elders are busy preparing for thee puja and the girls also help them...the boys also volunteer to help...after all the decor is over, they go to get ready...

All of them are extremely well dressed for the puja...geet is dressed in a nice anarkali suit whereas maan wear a nice kurta-pyjama..maan admires geet..they all sit for the Jagran to start...the puja begins...geet very obediently prays to God and seeing her maan realises that how innocent and sweet she is...he realises that he has made the correct choice choosing geet as his life partner...

Geet:(in her mind)...Mata Rani...aap toh sabko sahi raasta dikhate hai na...mujhe bhi dikhaiyye...aajkal mere dil main maan sir ke liye jo horaha hai woh kya hai...dosti yah dosti se badkar kuch hai Ma...raasta dikhao Ma...!

Maan: (in his mind)...Ma mujhe aashirwaad do aur himmat do ki main geet se apni dil ki baat keh paun...main usse bohot pyar karta hoon...aur main hameha geet ko khush dekhna chahta hoon..woh jo bhi mangrahi hai usse dedo Ma...!

All of them are engrossed in the Puja...aditya and avantika seek Ma's blessings and pray or a happy married life...once the puja is over, both geet and maan coincidentally go to bow down their heads in front of Ma and seek her blessings...while they bow down, a miracle happens when the flowers kept at Ma's feet falls on their heads together which signifies that both are made for each other...their questions and prayers are answered...they both get up and find the flower in their hands together...they look at each other and experience a dramatic moment...they are lost into each other trying to realise what could this mean...they look at Ma and realise that Ma has answered their prayers...geet gives the flower to maan who gives it back to geet but she gives it back to him again...maan comes up with a solution to divide the flower into two halves...both keep Ma's blessings with them...

Geet tries to realise that whetehr Ma has shown her that maan is more than a friend for her...she ponders over her thoughts..she suddenly realises to give the gift which she bought for maan...she gets it and comes back...she goes to maan and says...

Geet:sir...

Maan:haan geet bolo...?

Geet:sir apni aankhen band kijiye...

Maan:kyun?

Geet:kyunki mujhe aapko ek unche pahaad pe lejakardhakka deke phekna hai...

Maan:very funny..geet tum bhi na...

Geet:arrey aap sawaal itna karte hai ki aise ulte jawaab dena parta hai...chaliye...aapni aankhen band kijiye...!!!

Maan: ok geet...as you say...!

Maan closes his eyes...for some time geet looks at him lovingly...then comes back to reality...geet slowly places the gift on maan's hands and asks him to open his eyes...maan opens his eyes and sees the dashing sherwani on his hand...

Maan: geet...yeh kya?

Geet: sabji hai...aapke liye!...taaki aapko khana banane main asaani ho...dikhayi nahi deta...sherwani hai...

Maan:sherwani?...woh bhi mere liye?

Geet: nahin...apne dulhe ke liye layi thi...aapko dikhana chahti thi ki mera dullha isme kaise lagega...

These words echo in both geet and maan's ears and geet realises what she said in a huff...

Geet: mera matlab hai ki aap swaal bohot karte hai...zahir si baat hai aapko diya hai toh aapke liye hi hoga na...

Maan: par geet...achanak se...mere liye...kyun??

Geet: phir se sawaal sir aapko na businessman nahin quiz master hona chahiye tha...kitne sawaal karte hai aap...

Maan: very funny geet...bolo na...yeh gift kisliye?

Geet: kyun?...main aapke liye gift nahin lasakti kya?...dost hoon aapki...itna toh haq banta hai na mera...

Maan: of course geet...lekin iski koi zaroorat nahin thi...

Geet: ab yeh filmy baatein rehne dijiye...aap par suit nahin karta hai...

Maan: kahin tum mujhe yeh gift isliye toh nahin derahi ho ki maine tumhe gift diya...??

Geet: nahin...woh wajah nahin hai...main aapko yeh gift isliye derahi hoon kyunki iski wajah sirf dosti hai..aur kuch nahin...ab isse pehle ki aapka quiz competition phir se shuru hojaye main chahti hoon ki aap shaadi main yehi pehne...

Maan: kya?...apni shaadi main?

Geet: nahin...iss shaadi main..!...badi jaldi hai aapko shaadi karne ke liye...

Maan: woh toh hai...par koi mile toh sahi...

Geet: kaun?

Maan: meri perfect girl...

Geet: miljayegi...dont worry...

They smile at each other...and are lost into each other for some time but soon come back to reality...

Geet: try karlijiyega...aur peheniyega zaroor...mujhe bohot khushi hogi...aur kya pata aapko aapki perfect girl miljaye!!

Maan: really???

Geet: hmm...

Saying this, geet winks at maan and leaves.maan smiles and holds geet's gift close to his heart...

Maan: mujhe toh meri perfect girl milgayi geet...bas agar tum merilife main aajao toh meri life jo ab tak imperfect thi woh perfect banjayegi...aur main janta hoon aisa bohot jald hoga...!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
😃 😃 😃

superb update 👍🏼

Geet getting gift for maan
N
maan ne to Geet k liye Shaadi ka jora b le liya!!!

Ma ne b dono ko aashirwaad de diya

ab der kis baat ki?
Dono ki Shaadi same mandap pe hi kra do

😉 😆

Loved it... Vil b waitin for the next update
continue soon
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
superbbb
maan bought bridal wear for geet
geet bought shervani
hahahah phad pai le ja k dhak a dena hai
such main yeh deno master piece hai
hope jaldi say confession kar lai

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