Arshi FF- // Love and Us// Thread#2 (Removed)

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rishaithra

@rishaithra

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

to say exactly for this i should repeat what u said words cant express this fantastic creation of urs long way to go

i still cant digest this ends here but would be waiting for more of ur creations😊

fantastic👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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852464

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Loved it!!!👏

Superb Job,dear...read last two parts together... the only word I can say is Amazing story...👏

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madhuiyer

@madhuiyer

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Hey I came across ur story 2 days back and read it in one go. It was just awesome. U r such an awesome writer. And the ending was absolutely wonderful. Congratulations to u on the completion on your story.

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cherrybloom1

@cherrybloom1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

RES!

unres!!!

Okay, today i have absolutely nothing to say.

I wont even say I'm in awe.

i wont even say i'm shocked.

Today, its much more than that and words will never be able to describe that.

I am not going to say much about the most awaited epilogue.

All I know is, that each relation that u have described till date have been absolutely heart warming...khushi-aakash, arnav-khushi and as a matter of fact even sheetal-arnav. but today the relation you have described, for me, is the most lovable and cherised relationships out of all... a father and daughter relationship.

How, even after being with a mother all day, when a daughter will see her father, all she would want, is him. she would want him to hold her, kiss her, love her, play with her and most of all pamper her to no end. and isnt that what all our fathers do to us? arent daughters called their fathers princess?

and that was the most perfect relationship, u have showed. how his daughter's one cry made him want to tear the world apart, how seeing him all she wanted to do was jump into his lap and get cuddled by him, how he argued with Khushi because according to him, he was definately not spoiling her only giving into her wishes.

how the little baby girl wanted to go out for a drive with her daddy, but not without her mother. her calling out to her mother, asking her to join the father-daughter duo.

well, honestly this is all i can say about today's epilogue because i am too touched to put it all in words.

YOU, god have i told you what an amazing writer you are?

you really made me believe that arnav and khushi DO exist. it was that real to me.

I am so happy, i came across this story, i would really regret missing such a story.

i am absolutely loved it.

I WANT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!😭

its over, i want to read more pleaseee?

this, i dont even know!!!

do u plan a sequel maybe? no, i dont think so!😭

im going to miss this story so much, i guess i have to work with my useless imagination only now, make my own story from here!!!!!

I MISS YOU, LOVE AND US!!!!!❤️

Edited by cherrybloom1 - 11 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

awe i am going to miss it a lot...loved the epilogue...u r an awesome writer dear

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Jus wow... too good... sad that its ending... start a new story please..

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

awesome ending
they are happy together and have a daughter
i am happy with today updt
their love is strong
after facing difficulties theare still with each other
thnx for pm

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Wow great end and an amazing epilogue
And you are an amazing writer I really enjoy reading this story of
Your so i really hope you are going to do other ff or ss
Story I will read them
Thanks for the pm