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I am very sorry to hear that this is coming to an end. It was thru this story that I discovered you and loved the story. You as the author are in control and have the best idea when a story is concluding.
These were some very interesting issues in a relationship you raised...past and present coming together.
I have one point to make...the Arnav before memory loss to me was your best creation...he was larger than life, in your face, ruthless, sometimes cruel and so real...
After the accident, the Arnav who is rediscovering himself was more muted ...different person and I was hoping you were going to show them merge to become one person.
But alas, if the story is ending I guess the initial Arnav is long gone...and I am sure from Khushi's perspective that is a good thing tht now she has a man that almost looks like he got recreated from her dreams.
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