was just thinking abt the entire story... the way it started.. progressed... n is now nearing its end...
i loved one thg abt hte bad arnav.. really liked.. in all his arrogance, ego, insistence in every wrong way to get khushi out of his life... he still was virtuous enuf.. nt to force her.. harm her in the worst possible way... he didnt touch her till she expressed tht she is ok with it.
i m nt saying tht the way he did tht.. didnt hhurt her... it clearly hurt her.. n did hv a deep impact on her... bt still.. i cudnt miss out on the simple thg.. tht he still chose nt to force her. he cud hv done tht rt away.. n hurt her beyond repair...
plus anjali's words abt her child effecting him.. seem to mk me feel positive .. tht even if does regain his memory... tht one incident shud probably hv more effect on him, than his baseless need to hv khushi out of his life..
it clearly gt him thinking.. mayb even wanting to mk amends.. dont knw hw far he got along thinking on her words... bt the fact tht it forced him to think... is gd enuf :)
love u anjali.. love u fr wht u said... u cud see ur child in ur bhabhi... u cud soo rtly put fwd tht u dont want tht kind of a future fr ur child.. u knew arnav was soo close to ur child.. n still u chose to say tht.. only u cud hv got him to think abt his actions in tht way :)
really really respect u fr tht :)
n i love ur work... i mean.. i hv read all ur stories nw... n i hv nt come across one tht feels dragged or completed in a hurry..
i always hv this calm feeling by the time i come to the end of ur stories...
like i said earlier.. they r such simple day to day thgs tht u mention.. sthg tht everyone can relate with their lives.. i love tht ...
n i love tht u dont ever .. ever.. let hte main focus of ur story drift.. u always r in control of the way it moves.. n the way it ends.. it seems soo fitting .. every single time :)
n honestly.. though i wud hv loved to read more into this story... how he finally gets her confident abt them.. hw they get informal finally... n hw their life procceeds beyond tht pt.. wud khushi b the usual chatter box again?? wud arnav ever b able to laugh n tease n play along.. or fight n then mk up.. with her ..
wud khushi ever fight with arnav.. insist upon him to agree with her.. fuss over thgs.. tk a little liberty with him.. tease him.. joke arnd with him.. or mayb joke abt him with the family :)
bt still... if u chose to end it.. i knw its hte best to it tht way :)
wud b waiting fr the last chapter.. n then.. fr ur next work...
pls pls pls let me knw :) :)
Edited by tanu3579 - 12 years ago
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