Smitar's: Loving Khushi#5 Part 20, 21 Pg 1 (4/9)

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Meera

@sweetlife

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

nice story.. n nice ending...
waiting for ur new story

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Cute6

@Cute6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

smita dii dis one was a masterpiece by you!!

i cant even express how much i loved this whole story!!

ur fabulous and i just loved this to fullest...

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Wow ! Wonderful as usual !

I am so happy for Arnav and Khushi.

Thank you for the wonderful story .

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Awesome update...👏

But i can't believe its end...😭

At last Girija Devi accomplished in her mission...

Love Arnav and khushi fone convo... She was blaming him for leaving her alone... It was really emotional...

The end was superb❤️... I don't have words to describe how much i love it...

thank you rulama and smita for giving us such wonderful FF...🤗

will miss this FF...😭

And now i m waiting for your next FF...

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Johnny Atkinson

@atjohnny79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

is it a sequel to this loving khushi?

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

awesome ending i am so glad she realized their happiness was no longer in their separation but in their being together as a couple. and she gets to decide for herself.

sad this AMAZING ff is over. congrats on a job excellently done!

defintely waiting for your next project. best of luck.

thanks for the pms.

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daljeet

@daljeet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Oh! One week separation from you. Can't wait for September 12th!!!!!!!!

I loved this line: "Bye. I will see you around. Just don't forget what I said." He bid farewell to Devi Maiyya.

I don't know what to say. I feel happy, yes. But if I be honest, I must say that I somehow was not satisfied with this one. I LOVED the beginning. It gave me high hopes. But then from some point, I felt the passion for it and the intensity of the story reducing. It did come up at some lines in some scenes; but then went down again to the same static stage.

I loved Finding Kushi more! I'm sorry to say this. But I think sincere reviews help a writer to develop more. Hope you would accept this comment.

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Monasha

@monasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Superb updates...

Finally they came together and became one...

thanks for the email...

And really looking forward for next story

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Awww... the story came to an end
>>but it was wonderful journey reading this Story
and now eagerly waiting for the next one

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sarozz

@sarozz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Mwaaahhh together at last...but so sad it had to end...waiting impatiently for the next story...pls don't make us wait for long...love u and ur work...

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