ARIYA FF--PYarrr ya ANchaha RIshta (check thread 2 for further parts.. - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1

etf in office..all working..





shree wants a coffee remembers riya coffee and thinks





may be riya comes back..






shree: kaassh ri hoti toh meri coffee kitne pyar se banati..




miss u ri





he smells the aroma of coffe and looks up to see riya




standing there smiling..





shree: riya tu,...





nahi nahi mein pakka sapna dekh raha hoon..





chotu: haan shree mein bhi ri yahan se..?





shree: pinch me chotu..




and chotu pinched..(ouch)



ab bheem ka pinch... shree ke liye toh punch ke barabar





tha.. and finally he had believe tht it was riya...




they hugged for tight as if they wont leave her ever..




listening to noises arjun and rathod too came out..





for the first time arjun goes to her...




arjun: kaise ho riya??




riya: apki wajahse hi thik ho sir..





arjun: I promise mein tumhe kabhi kuch nahi hone dunga..






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Posted: 11 years ago
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shree: par ri tujhe hosh kab aya aur hume call kyon nahi




kiya..




riya: guys mein 4 days pehle hi thik hue hooon





story 6 months before..whn riya gulps the virus..





It was an unfortunate day for etf... 21st October...





when their most beloved member was in the verge of




dying..





Riya has gulped down the x-zorra virus to save the country





for this effect bt now her life is in danger...





Arjun: riyaaa(he shouted)




And he gathered her in his arms to take her to the





hospital..




Riya: sir meine apna akri mission pura kar diya..





Arjun: shut up kuch nahi hoga tumhe mein ho na..





Riya: arjun sir... meine kehti thee na ke main samajti





hoon.. nahi samajti thi aur koi nahi samajta apka dard..






Sir mein..





Doc: please hume jaldise inhe operate karke blood





transplant karna. Hai..



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Posted: 11 years ago
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All were waiting eagerly outside the ot to know that their





riya is safe..





Arjun for the very first time realized that he indeed care





for riya.. if she wnt be there he wnt be able to survive




peacefully..





Finally aftr 3 hours doc came..





Arjun: riya thik hai na..??





Doc: aap logo ke liye ek achchi khabar hai aur ek buri..





Rathod: doc boleye riya thik toh hai na?





Doc: riya ke jaaan toh bacha li hai humne par wooh coma





mein chali gai..





she is alive bt she not better than dead..





Arjun grabbed the doc's collar..





Arjun: dnt u dare say that about riya..





riya ko hosh zaror ayega..she will come back..




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Posted: 11 years ago
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PRESENT:

Arjun and riya were still looking at each othr..


Bt suddenly a case comes so all go to the spot..



Arjun: riya tum yahi rukke paper work karo..



Riya: sir im fine..




Arjun: riya 4 din hue hai hospital se aye hue.. thoda rest




karlo thn come to field..




Rathod: haa riya tumhe stress nahi lena chahiye..



All moved out.. bt arjun turned and said..




Arjun: medicine time ka khyal rakhna riya..




Riya: jee sir..




All comeback after 4 hours..




and riya makes coffee for them., and tea for arjun..





Shree: thanks ri bohot zarorat thi coffee ki.




Riya: rathod sir apki coffee shakar zyada nahi dali hai..




Rathod: thanks riya.. rawte cabin mein hai..




Ria went to his cabin..




Riya: sir apki chai..




Arjun: thanks riya par aaj toh chai wala bandh hai phir



yeh?




Riya: wwooh meine banai hai..




apko thakan ho rahe hogi na?




Arjun sipped it..and was really good..




even better than the chai wala..





Arjun: thanks riya bohot achchi hai..




Finally rathod called the day off..




Arjun: rathod riya ko ghar drop kar dena usee akele mat




jane dena..




Rathod: riya chalo tumhe ghar drop kar deta hoon..



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Posted: 11 years ago
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hope its satisfying my readers..




agar achcha nahi laga toh bhi batana zaror..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Awesome update
Thanks for pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
rishta pyaar wala raho tho hi accha hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
hi i am sucheta
and coming to update ,bohut aacha laga
pls do continue

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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

As always superb start dr.

Loved Choree's expression whn thy saw Riya infront of thm.

FB was horrifying.

Waaaooo coz of that bacteria incident Arjun realised wht he felt for Riya.

Awww Arjun was so concerned for Riya.

Waiting for nxt part.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Awesome start dear.
So choree missing riya and specially her coffee.
So riya comes etf.
Loved shree reaction.
Choree convo and pinch wala part was amazing.
Loved arjun concern for riya.
Continue soon.
And thanx for pm.

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