#3 thread of Arshi FF:- My slave,My family

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TaujooMadiha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

OMG YOU MADE ME CRY 😭😭😭 I think thisw as the best chapter so far. Loved it and your language mistakes is becoming lesser as well. Good job 👏

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swtsam

@swtsam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

I knw arnav deserves a heell of punishment...but then m crying buckets. ..gosh continue soon. ..dying to read more. ...hope this separation will be soon over...
waiting. ..n plzzz pm me ur updates. ...

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Uzma Nayeem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

hey... i read ur this ff fr first time in one go... and i litrelly litrelly cried after reading this... the way u explain khushi's was jst mind blowing...
i felt connected to her somehow...
that poor soul suffered too much...
glad that arnav realise his mistake...
and that punishment suits him best...
how can he this after RAPING khushi, she will happily live with him... jst awsm story. loved it. plz update soon

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evydsena7777

@evydsena7777

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

o so painful
I hope she came back soon...

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Rami

@Rami92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

nice update
hop khushi conez baq to arnv

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KBS

@oKBSo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

that was a good update

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#587

Loved if. Emotional. Update soon

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Jasmeet

@CBrocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Really nice update!!!

Hated to see khushi leaving arnav alone..but I think she needs that time...to understand everything ...hopefully after the leap they are together:)

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#589

Feeling bad for them.
hope they will find happiness soon

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Ishita123

@Ishita123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#590

Thats an emotional part You made me Cry...You are beautifull writer the way you portraid Arnav's pain,grief for loosing his love clenched my heart also...