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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Pehle toh Welcome back!!! 🤗
Iss story ka kya ban-ne ga?
U still haven't mentioned 'His' name N end pe shock bhi de diya ...

Bechari Kria , uski life mein kinni complications hain..
Ek churail se jaan chutti thi toh ab yeh uske 'So-Called-Bhai-Bhabhi' uski kasar poori kar rahe hain 🤔...
Ek banda tha jisse usne apna sab kuch diya , Inna pyaar bhi kiya uski 10 months se koi khabar nai 😒...

Swayam hai jo usse thora honsla deta hai...
Iss bar inni khatarnak khabar suna k chala gaya!!! 'He' ki Death which might be possible ...

Uff!! Con-Fuse hoti ja rahi hun mai!!!
Upar se Kria ka 'To-Be Fiance' Nashai kahin ka , Itna drunk tha k khud ki hosh nai thi , Idiot!!! 😡...
Phir end the 'Reyaansh' ko introduce kar waya , Double Con-Fuse hoti ja rahi hun ...

Though i have alot se questions But i'm loving the story ❤️...
Baki updates ka pata nai but update this wala soonish!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Amzinggg di...
bt I hate sHIvam... updatee..sooon..
sorry fr short comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Finally ubupdated this...

vo thread open nhi ho rha...but mujhe story yaad hai..

Ahhh shivam is such a jerk...

n poor kriya...

but mere ko thoda confusion hai..

usne rwyaansh ko uake naam se kyu nhi pahchana...

use lga k shayd ek naam k do log hain...isliye...???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Here's the last part of the SS. Well, this wasn't that I had initially planned. I lost my old update and had written this two weeks back but was in a dilemma whether to post it or not. Finally posting it as I couldn't think what I had written earlier.

Part 3:


Kriya was sitting in front of the huge mirror in her room brushing her hairs. But all her concentration was on the small meeting with Reyansh. His features, his gestures, his eyes, the warmth that he possessed, basically everything of his were very much parallel to him. The only thing that was different was his name and his face. She felt as if it had been years she knew Reyansh. She felt as if he was someone close to her heart whom she failed to recognize. Her heart wanted to see him again. It felt good to be with him. Those few minutes that she spent with Reyansh calmed down her inner soul. She wished those few moments would rehash again and again. His eyes had the ability to capture her heart like his did. Reyansh was someone known yet unknown to her. Her piles of deliberations were broken by Tanisha.

"You still aren't lady. For Christ's sake, buck up your speed lady. The party has begun and everyone's waiting for you."

Before leaving Tanisha's eyes lay upon the pendant that was kept on the dressing table.

"Jesus! Are you seriously going to wear this old-fashioned pendant?" Tanisha asked taking that piece of jewelry in her hands.

"Tanisha give it back to me, it's my mothers. And yes I'm going to wear it now."

"You are going to yourself as well as ours too."

"I don't care. Give it back to me or I'm not attending the party. Choice is yours."

"Do you really think I'd listen to you? Nah baby! Right now you have one option and that is hurry up and heed downstairs."

"You mean b***h" Kriya said banging her wish on the table.

"Ouch, it hurts right." Tanisha said laughing at Kriya's condition while throwing the pendant in the bin. After Tanisha left, Kriya got up and took the pendant out the dustbin. Wiping it thoroughly she placed in her drawer. Putting on another piece of jewelry to embellish her neck, Kriya made her way to downstairs.

It was beautifully decorated down there. The lightings, the dance floor, the arrangements, everything was wonderful. Well it has to be perfect because Shivam Ghai is good at only one thing and that is organizing a party. How she wished even her life would've been so colorful like this party. The smile on everyone's faces was real but the girl who's actually supposed to be happy was faking around. She wished even her smile could be so genuine like the others.

"Ladies and Gentle men, here comes my sister, the birthday girl who's looking breathtakingly beautiful." Shivam announced.

All the eyes lay upon Kriya. Few of the eyes were ogling at her from top to bottom. It didn't matter her because it wasn't something new to her. But one person who caught her attention was him. She closed her eyes and again opened them making sure that she wasn't hallucinating. She actually wasn't visualizing him. Reyansh was standing there for real, sipping his drink while checking her out. Her heart started racing up on feeling his severe gaze up on her. She felt an adrenaline rush passing through her cheeks turning them crimson. She looked up at him and gave him a small smile. He responded back with a smile. Her heart felt contented on seeing him there. She felt now nothing can be erroneous.

Ajay came up to her and forwarded his hand to her. Faking a smile she accepted his offer and he led her to the dais. From the corner of her eyes she watched him. He shifted uncomfortably in his place when he saw her placing her hand in Ajay's while his eyes showing dissatisfaction. Kriya was surprised at this action of hers. Apart from him no one else would act in such manner. Curiosity was rising within her to know who he actually was.

Like it happens in every birthday party, it happened here too. The cake was cut and everyone handed her gifts. The last person to wish her was Reyansh.

"Happy birthday Kriya." He said while handing her a small box wrapped up in a gift wrap. Their hands touched each other. This minute interaction between their skins sent shivers down her spine. He smiled on seeing her reaction. Her eyes were shut for a tiny second.

Kriya keenly opened his present. It was the only present that she wanted to open. She didn't care about what others gifted her.

It was a beautiful bracelet with K' embossed on it. To her surprise it was identical to the one that she lost two years back, that he had gifted her.

"I'm sorry I forgot to introduce you guys. Kriya meet him, he is Reyansh Singhaniya the famous business tycoon who earned a lot in very short span of time. And Reyansh she's my beloved sister Kriya Ghai." Shivam interrupted them. Reyansh excused himself from there.

"Beloved? Seriously Shivam?" She said after Reyansh left.

"Right now you are. Actually you are more than that. How about I call you my golden chicken?"

"You are disgusting." Saying this Kriya left from there.

It was announced that everyone joins the dance floor. Without her consent, Kriya was forced to dance with Ajay. His hands on her waist made her feel disgusted at herself. She observed Reyansh from the corner of her eyes. His face clearly stated that he was trying to ebb the flames of anger that were rising within him on seeing her dance with him.

As the music changed, Ajay get a phone call and he excused himself relieving Kriya. Reyansh walked towards her and asked her for dance. Kriya gladly accepted his offer and they started swaying to the harmonious tune playing.

"You know I hate that guy, even then you were dancing with him." He said slowly yet irately.

"I had no other option...wait a second what did you say?" Kriya asked as she realized it was the same question that he asked her when she danced with Ajay.

"Nothing, ignore it."

Kriya wanted to persuade him further but as she felt his hands rubbing her waist trying to remove Ajay's touch, her heart skipped a beat. He was being possessive about her just like him. He pulled her closer to him and she leaned in further. While twirling her, he took her to a deserted corner with almost no lights. They were standing beside the window allowing the moon to light up their faces. On sensing him lean further towards her Kriya closed her eyes. He softly placed his lips on hers and nibbled them gently. Being gentle with her wasn't easy for him. As the time passed by he kissed with more zeal, making her groan in return. Their tongues were dancing in harmony satisfied with the presence of each other. He tried to convey feelings through the kiss which hit directly to her heart.

As they pulled away, he spoke "Come with me Kriya." Saying this he forwarded his hand which she accepted without a second thought. Both of them sneaked through the hall way to the back yard. And from there they escaped the Ghai mansion in the same way like he did two years back.

"Rey" She said stopping both of them near the gates. He turned to face her. He had a smile playing on his lips.

"You're my Rey?" She asked with tears of happiness flowing down her cheeks. He simply nodded a yes. She couldn't believe he was actually he. Meanwhile inside everyone was aware of the fact that Kriya was missing along with Reyansh.

"I'll explain you everything later. We need to rush now." Rey said on hearing a few voices. Before Shivam's men could trace them, both of them sped away in his car. After a silent drive of three hours, they reached a hotel on the highway leading towards Mumbai. Rey had pre-planned everything. He had already booked a room for them.

Once they reached their room, Kriya hugged him with all her might and he responded back equally.

"Where were you all these days? Do you have any idea how worried I was?"

"After leaving Dehradun, I went to London. I wanted to do something big before I could get you back in my life. If I would've stayed back there in Dehradun, then I could never give you the happiness you truly deserved. I was just a small office employee then, who couldn't give you a comfortable life. But now I'm Reyansh Singhnaiya, the youngest business tycoon. I have everything through which I can satisfy your needs."

"But how did this transformation occur?"

"Few days later while I was walking on a street in London, I met Mr.Ravi Dixit. He was one of the reputed businessmen of London but at that moment he was highly tensed. I just offered him my help due to which he managed to grab a highly paid contract. Being satisfied with my work he employed me. Since he had no children, he made me the heir of his property and business. Later I got to know that, he was my mother's cousin. Six months ago I boarded a flight to Dehradun to meet you. But to the misfortune the plane met with an accident and unfortunately my face incurred a lot of burns. Undergoing a plastic surgery, I had to accustom this new look."

"I'm so happy to have you back Rey."

"Me too." He said hugging her.

Breaking the hug, he got down on his knees.

"Kriya, I wanted to say all those feeling that I couldn't two years back. You are my soul Kri, my life. Imagining my life without you was difficult. But now I know nothing can separate us. I love you Kri, I've always loved you. These two years were an interlude of our love but now no more. I promise I'd never leave you. Will you marry me?" Saying this Rey took out a diamond ring from his pocket.

Kriya jumped in happiness. "I will marry you Rey." As she said this, he slipped the ring in her finger. Pulling her onto his feet, she thrashed her lips on his, stumbling both of them. Due to this both of them fell on the bed with him atop her.

Her hands worked on the buttons of his shirt while hers untied the strings of her dress. The broke the kiss due to the suffocation but is lips weren't ready to part away from her skin. Her hands yanked away his shirt while his pulled off her dress. Within no time, they were off their clothes and garments. The atmosphere in the room was heated up.

Rey was busy nesting on her mounds when she pulled him up facing her.

"Why did you change your name?" She asked out of the blue. He expected this question but didn't think that she would ask now when they were in the middle of a radiated love making session.

"I didn't. Reyansh Singhaniya is my name."

"Then what's Rey?"

"That's my nickname. I always introduce myself as Rey when we were in college."

"Why didn't you tell me your full name?"

"You never asked me?"

Smacking his shoulder she pulled him into another fierce kiss while wrapping her legs around his waist pulling him closer to her. The rest of the night none of them slept. Small moans and groans echoed in the room.

So how's it?


Sorry if it was kind of lame or boring.


Do hit the like tab and reviews please.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
its simply awesome
loved it
really i'll never forget this story
coz of this story u got banned he he
jokes apart
its really awesome story
loved the story line
now do write more stories

Edited by crazysky - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
res
unres

Amazing !!!
Loved it totally 😳
Kria never knew rey's full name ... 😆
whole update was mind blowing 😊
n thanxx for giving me the first part 😃
Edited by Anjori_ArSha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
res
unres. .
An awesome ending to a superb concept. .
I really loved. .it. .
So my guess was r8 abt the surgery thing. .
I just feel lyk seeing rey's old luk n new one. .
Edited by sanju_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
so so sooo good...
perfect ending..!!
although i wasn't expecting at all dat u'll end it this soon..
juz in 3 parts!!
anyways, how short it is but i loved completely.. gr8 job..👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
beautiful story

luv it

thanks for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Amazing update !!!
Finally they met.

Beautiful ending.

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