Janmashtami TS:Will he or wont he?*complete* - Page 7

This janmashtami TS is just beautiful...
I love the way you portray each and every character and situation.,, it is as if iam watching it on tv...
Loved it

should have known she would take her promise back
well how can she not
oh ho bade plan the aapke arnie
but agle saal hisahi
that janamashtami SR can happen next year
man that was so cute
so he did all this for her
and that she is his radha and he her mohan
awww that was beautiful
cheers for pm

Lovely update dear
hope ur plan will be successful for next janmashtami Arnav..😆
thanx 4 d pm

g8 update
loved ur TS
wonderful story with nice song sequences

thnx 4 pm:-)

Beautiful td, lived how you have described Arnav's & khushi feelings thru these beautiful songs

arnav is simply adorable ❤️

he did all this for khushi,awww he loves her sooo much

i hope his plan will get successful on nxt janmastami 😛

loved d update smita as if i am seeing my ARSHI in each nd evry scene potrayed by u here..! ❤️

truly an awsum shot 👏

Wow Smita, all 3 chapters were more than awesome, simply superb! Purrrfect 😃 What should I say about you and your creativity, you got immense talent and the way you write these dialogues, amazing! God bless you my dear, you are awesome! What a lovely tribute and this Arnav was so cute, hey krishna bhagwan, please make sure Smita also get this kind of her own Arnavji soon, please! The way you wrote Khushi's concern, Aranv's love and all the teasing were fantastic! You made my day dear, I had a 32-all out smile on my face while reading it. I can actually see Arnav and Khushi portraying these scenes in front of me, such was the impact of this whole story. Fabulous work Smita, I am so glad that I read your stories 👏

Superb. You write beautiful stories . It is amazing how well you know these two. Thanks for the PM and I hope I get to read more of your beautiful Arshi stories. It is amazing writers like you who are keeping us fans going.

That was so lovely <3
Awesome OS👏

its truely very beautiful... <3