11/11//2013 - ARHI FF:MASTERCLASS THREAD10: Chapt89 pg114..note pg131

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Rekha

@Caskett

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

Awesome update!!
So..Payal claims to be telling the truth but Akash is far from believing it. More like he doesn't want to believe all of this to be true. Curious to know the whole story.
Our lovebirds are not yet back from the honeymoon bubble. The way Khushi's eyes track and analyze Arnav makes me feel like I am present right there. Lol Khushi was caught in the act, if I may say it that way. So neither of them want to leave the other...happens.
So Irani has decided about the property and something tells me Khushi will be getting it.
Update soon!😊

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Praniiii

@Praniiii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Thanks for pms...lovely update...continue soon

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MayaB5

@MayaB5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Firstly I must tell you that I love your writing and your way of telling this story is addictive.

I must admit that I was reading MC last year but lost track of the story. I spent yesterday and today reading it again from the start and you have me completely hooked.

I love Arnav and Khushi but it Payal and Akash's story that I can't wait to see unfold.

I also hope this new employee is not going to cause any problems?

Please don't keep us waiting too long? Looking forward to next update.😛

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ishsar

@ishsar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Lovely update

I must must say you have progressed the story

Really well

Love your writing

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Naina you just killed me with that arnav khushi opening scene...

That was passion and chemistry at its best. 😳

I could literally visualize the entire scene in front of my eyes.

I am still shocked over payal's statement. I feel that she must be emotionally responsible for the death of her husband i for one don't think she has physically killed her husband. But i wonder how come no mention of this has been made by khushi to Arnav.

Poor Akash he must be really wired thinking how to solve this mystery.

I didn't know AR was hiring if i did i would have jumped at this chance and taken up this job in a jiffy...drooling over 3 hotties can life get better than that.😆

Waiting for the next update Naina i am sure it will bring quite a few fireworks for us. Jaldi jaldi karo!

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

unres'd on page 115 ----> here

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Lindi

@Lindi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Loved the update

Brilliant writing, looking forward to more

Lindi

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Nikita

@nikita_88

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

Oh such a mean cliffhanger! Been waiting to know the decision for a while now... Who gets the store?

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#839

Khushi is Khushi...good that you actually reminded us of her through that biscuit and tea incident!

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Sj236

@Sj236

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#840

Woww!! D update was great!!
And both of dem unwilling to leave each other was really cute and kinda sad too!!
Also finally u will b saying who gets d land! Eagerly waiting for dat! As far as I can think khushi will get that!
And d secretary's thoughts on how the company ceo's will b sum old man's wer really humourous!
Great update!
Please update soon :)