ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 5 - COMPLETED - Page 9

Originally posted by: lalarukh

😳deeps its an awesome update yar...i loved it to the core...🤗

u r giving us such a sweet and pleasureable moments of the two together that ...heart is full of sweetness right now...:)

I am glad your dil went HMMM..🤣

i am loving this couple more than anything in this world...

how cute and understanding they both r becoming towards each other...

there was a constant smile on my face while reading it and still my smile muscles r not back to there serious position...lolzzz

read soo many stories but never read such a master piece where husband and wife THE MOMENTS r written so beautifully...:)

the way khushi asked kaka abt his day ...and then her excitement in telling him how she got approval from arnav singh raizada... u put us in constant awe state...i swear :)

never knew that treat can be that treat full...hahahahaha...wow really treat means that...loved it...loved the way arnav tries to stop her in saying these words...:)

loved the way u mentioned his thank u to kaka in sense of saying sorry...wow

yaaar u have made me crazy...i mean can someone drink mango shake that sexily...ufff deeps...i am rewinding and playing those lines again and again in my mind...u have written it soo beautifully that after loosening his tie...i want him to drink mango shake daily...hyeee deeps...ok ok controlling...lol

LOL I personally wanna make that drink and I wanna see him drink that in person..Hayeee Sobti, where r u man?

poor khushi obviously after that shaking mango shake she had to run to washroom...hehehehehe...arnav bay is confused at his wife acts...:)...my sympathy with khushi :)

she said she wants to pee and he saying y u have to hold it till last min...🤣🤣

ur comedy was at its best when they discuss akash and payal doings...hahahaha...just simply hilarious out of this world...it was pure friend to friend talks i swear...that easily they discussing it...wow..awe arnav is having her mehndi wali photo on mb..so sweet yar...

well akash and payal were also seemed quite busy...hahaha...really that my shona shona baby was like aweee

hahaha arnav and his santa banta jokess...hehehe

that last whole scene btw arnav and khushi was superbly written...loved the pool side...the ambiance ...u always create magic there with ur writing...:)..really wt was there between them ...not saying word just heart to heart talks...Whats happening between us Arnav?...

I have no clue. Let the moment be clueless...hyeee

see i am laughing like an idiot throughout the update...ur each and every line cause aweeess,so sweet,wow,uffs and hyeees deeps :)

i wish when ever KISS WILL BE GOING TO HAPPEN...IT WOULD BE FROM KHUSHI ...SHE HAS GONE CRAZY LIKE US ...U MAKE ALL OF US OGLING ON HIS LIPS ...😳😳..LOLZZZ

We will see who kisses first...😳😉

my goodness deeps...i simply loved it...

and u know love u even more❤️

PS: I think you are right..my body temp shot up imagining him drinking that. Gutter mind full ON...Thanks to you...🤣

Originally posted by: chetna19

ha ha ha..pooji..we will see...😈

Originally posted by: deepthiya