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Posted: 12 years ago
Part-5

At Night
Rey calls Swayam and Sharon to his place...
Swayam:Rey tumne hame itni raat ko kyun bulaya???Sab theek hai na????
Sharon:Yaaa
Rey:Guys Taani...
Swaron:Kya hua use??Vo theek hai na????
Rey:Guys vo theek hai par mujhe lagta hai ki Taani vohi hai...
Swayam:(With tears in his eyes)Nahi Rey...Kaash aisa hota...Aisa nahi ho sakta...Vo hame chodke jaa chuki...
Rey:Nahi...Ye vohi hai...Uski baatein,uski harkatein,uski smile,uske face bhi to kitna similar hai...Bas uski dressing style and hairstyle chodke sab...Sab mujhe uski yaad dilati hai...Kahi ye hamari...
Swayam:Bas karo Rey...
Sharon:Rey vo mar chuki hai...Aur vo kabhi wapas nahi aa sakti...U should move on...
Rey:Guys chahe tum mano ya na maano ye wohi hai...Kyunki agar vo mari hoti to main kabhi zinda nahi hota...Main zinda hoon,mere dil dhadak raha hai is biggest proof ki she is fine...And ye wohi hai...Guys tum chahe kuch bhi kaho m determined and know ye wohi hai...And I will get her back at any cost and see tumhe bhi ek din manana padega...Tum dono ye bahut jald manoge...Mera pyaar hai vo aur mera dil uske bare mein kabhi galat nahi hota...SO NOW M GONNA GET MY LOVE BACK...
Sharon:Shut up Rey...She is no more...Accet it n try to move on...
Saying so she leaves followed by Swayam...
From next day rehearsals start...They somehow managed to make her up for dancing partner of Rey but firstly she denied it but after many pleadings of gang n Shareyam she accepted...Many days pass away and everyone is really happy and amazed that Taani is an awesum dancer and also quick learner...Days flew away very quickly...It was that the fest was coming near and pressure was increasing on them...In these few days Taani became best friends with gang and also came very close to them...She use to play pranks with boys and do gossips and shopping with girls...She also came close to Swaron and shared a grt bond wid them...She also shared a very different connection with Rey...Rey felt contend with Taani's presence and felt the vacuum in his life vanished...But everything wasn't good...She was happy but gang also noticed the awkwardness and nervousness whenever Rey use to go close to Taani while rehearsals...Swayam felt awkward but he use to shoo away that thought...Also they notice Swaron and Taani's bond was different and they know eachother from years but nothing could be concluded...
One fine day after the rehearsals all were relaxing and chitchatting in rehearsal hall...Taani was having her usual masti and was in her bubbly self...Taani's phone start ringing...She see's the screen is flashing unknown number and she picks it up...
Taani:Hello...
Some1(disgusted tone):Hi baby...Mujhe pehchana?????
Taani starts sweating badly...Her voice gets chocked up and eyes start brimming with tears and she is on verge of crying...
Taani(stammering):Tu...Tum????
Everone looks at her...
Some1(scary tone):Tumhe kya laga main tumhara peecha itni aasani se chod dunga...Naaa...
Taani:Par kaise tum to jail...But she realizes everyone is there and is starting at her...
She tries to get up and go but Swayam glares at her which makes her rooted to her place...Rey snatches the phone and keeps it on loudspeaker...
Some1(disgusted tone):To tumse kisne kaha ki main jail se chut gaya darling????Tumhe kya laga main apna badla nahi lunga????Jjo tumne mere saath kiya uske baad to...Khair chodo...Mujhe ye pata chala ki tum Mumbai wapas aa gayi ho...
Taani was now hell scared...Tears start flowing from her eyes...Reyam were angry on that guy for hurting Taani...
Taani:Tu...tumse ki...kisne ka...kaha????Ai...aisa ku...kuch na...nahi...
Everyone gets shocked as Taani lied but they understand that if she reveals it may be risky so they keep mum...Rey was now boiling in anger...
Some1(disgusted tone):Awww...Sweetheart tumhe aaj bhi jhut bolna nahi aata...Jhut to maine kaha tha ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon aur tum,tumhari family aur tumhare frnz itne bevakoof nikle ki meri baat ka yakeen kar liya...Awww poor baby...Kya karein tum ab tak apni galti ki saza bhugat rahi ho...Tum akeli ho...Tumhare saath koi nahi...
Taani was blank at what to answer... This was enough for Shareyam...
Rey:U bas***d ...jst shutup..Tu jo koi bhi hai galti se bhi iss number pe call mat karna warna u have to face the consequnces...
Swayam:Haan aur tu jo koi hai aur jaha bhi hai hum tujhe waha aake sat sat ke marenge...Samjha????
Some1:Ohhh...Tum ho kaun????
Sharon(Siren mode):Tumse matlab????Just remember Taani se dur rahi aur vo akeli nahi hai...Hum sab uske saath hai...Dont u dare to mess wid us...
With this Sharon snatches it from Rey n disconnects the call...Everyone turns around to Taani crying,sobbing wid blank face,without any expression,scared shivering standing there...In no time she fainted...But still she was shivering...
All rushes to her...Rey goes and keeps her head in his lap and taps her cheeks continuously...
Rey:Taani utho...R u ok???Plz Taanu...Utho na...Open ua eyes...Plz...
Swayam reached there with water bottle and felt odd looking at Taarey...But he again kept that thought aside...He sprinkled some water on Taani's face...She was murmerring...
Taani:Plz plz mujhe chodke mat jaiye...Plz...{Rey takes her hand in his to assure he was there}Plz plz mujhe chodke mat jaiye...Main firse akeli nahi panda chahti...While saying this her grip on Rey's hand becomes strong...
Sharon:Guys I think hame Taani ko uske ghar leke jaana chahiye...
Rey:Haan Sharon yahi sahi rahega...Chalo lets go...
Swayam:Par hame nahi pata ki vo kaha rehti hai...
Sharon:Yeah right...Infact v even don't know uski family mein kaun hai...Itne dino se hum Taani ko jaante hai par ye nahi jaante ki uski family mein kaun hai,uska ghar kaha hai aur vo yaha kisike saath rehti hai ya akeli?????
Gang:Yaaa...It's weird bt true...
Rey:Guys...I knw Taani kaha rehti hai...
Vicky:Tumhe kaise pata????
Everyone eyes him suspiciously...
Rey:Bhul gaye kya???Maine tum sabko bataya tha ki main use ek din ghar drop karne gaya tha...
Bharat:Haan be...To chal na...Tu kiske in...inv...in...
Amar:Invitation
Bharat:Haan be wohich ka intejaar kar raha hai...
Swayam:Haan guys chalo...
They all drove to Taani's house...
All girls and Swayam was in Sharon's car and All boys and Taani in Rey's car which Vicky was driving...They all drove to Taani's house...
Sharon:Rey bring Taani fast...
Rey:Haan...
Rey picks her up in his arms and takes her to the door...
Neha:Guys...Door to lock hai...
Nil:That means Taani akeli rehti hai...
Simmi:Ya n that too koi caretaker bhi nahi...Strange...
Swayam:Guys ye wakt in sab baton ka nahi...Sharon Taani ke bag mein uske ghar ki keys honge wo nikalo...
Sharon:Yeah...
Rey was staring at Taani intently...He was lost in his thoughts while Swayam was feeling awkward looking at Taarey...
Swayam(Bit irritated):Jaldi karo na Sharon...
Sharon:Haan do min ruko na...Haan mil gayi...
With this they opened the door of Taani's house completely unknown of the fact that something was stored in for them...Something which would change their lives completely...
They came in and switched on the lights of the living room...They went inside and saw that a room's light was on...They switched it on and kept Taani on bed...
Rey:Swayam tu jaldi se dr ko call kar...
Swayam:Haan...Abhi karta hoon...
Swayam calls dr and now they are waiting for dr...After 15 mins which seemed like hours dr arrived...
Doctor asked everyone to wait outside and checked Taani...
Dr came out after sometime...
Rey:Dr is everything alright????
Dr:Yes...She is fine...Just stress and fever ki wajah se vo behosh ho gayi thi...Make sure she eats proper food and take the meds which I have prescribed...And yaa unhe hosh 1 ghante ke baad ayega as maine unhe injection diya hai taaki vo rest kar sake...
Rey:Yes dr...I would surely take care of her...
Dr leaves...Now only D3 gang is there...
Sharon:Girls lets go in kitchen and make some food...
Simmi:Sharon r u alright????Tum aur khana???
Swayam:Sharon bahut accha khana bana sakti hai...Aakhir use Tannune jo sikhaya hai...
Hearing TANNU Shareyam face fells...And gang is confused...
Vicky:Dude ye Tannu hai kaun???
Rey to change the topic...
Rey:Guys ye baatein hoti rahegi...Girls tum jaake khana banao...
Sharon:Yaa yaa ofc...
Saying so all leaves...Boys go n sit in Taani's room...There they see a corner which was still dark...
Vicky:Oye guys look at that corner vo aisa andhere mein kyun hai????
Nil:Pata nahi...Chal dekhte hai...
Bharat:Haan be chal...
Swayam:Guys...Ye galat hai...Hum pehli baar uske ghar aaye hai and aise eavesdropping is nt good...
Rey:Swayam tu sahi keh raha hai par Taani to hamari frnd hai to aisa kya secret hai jo isne sabse chupaya hai???Lets c na...Aur waise bhi jab vo jag jayegi hum use bata denge...
Amar:Ale waah...Pehli baal Ley ne Twayam ka nahi hamala suppolt kiya...
Swayam:Guys no...
Itne mein girls also come there with soup,rice and dal...
Sharon:Guys kyun lad rahe ho???Manners kaha hai tumhare???
Nil:Jo nahi hai vohi mangte rehti hai ye girls...
Saying this boys starts laughing and girls glare at them...
Amar:Ale actually hum vo utt colnel mein kya hai vo dekhne wale the pal ye Twayam hame dekhne nahi de laha...
All:What??????
Bharat:Abe bol raha hai ki vo uss kone mein kya hai hame dekhna hai aur ye Swayam dekhna nahi de raha...
Simmi:But guys Swayam has a point...
Sharon:Haan guys...Ye galat hai...Hum pehli baar uske ghar aaye hai and aise eavesdropping is nt good...
All boys look at Sharon in shock and their mouth is curved into perfect O...
Sharon:What???Aise kya look de rahe ho????
Nil:Kya chemistry hai dude???
Vicky:Yaaa...Yahi baat hamse Swayam ne kahi
Bharat:Aur ab tune...
V+N+A+B:Chemistry...
Sharon blushed a deep shade of red while Swayam smiled looking at his siren ...
But here someone was getting impatient...Aur kaun hoga...Ofc Rey...
Rey:Its ohkkk guys v cn have a look...Go ahead boys...M wid u...
Listening this girls are shocked coz of Rey's weird behavior...Boys have a wide grin on their faces while Swaron knew the reason so they glared at Rey...
Boys went ahead and were gonna switch on the switch...Here Reys heartbeats started rising dhak dhak dhak dhak...And as they were bout to on the switch they heard a moan and evryone's attention diverted to the sound...It was none other than Taani...
Taani:Ummm...Slowly slowly she opened her eyes...
Boys were startled and in that by mistakely the switch got on but no one observed as everyone was looking at Taani...
Taani opened her eyes and the thing she saw was everyone was there...She was shocked...her eyes opened widely...She tried to sit straight but Sharon came infront and made her comfortable...
She was shocked to see everyone there...
Taani:A...aap s..sab ya...yaha???Kai...kaise????
Rey:Aapki wajahse madam...And winked at Taani...
Taani was shocked to see Rey's behavior...Swaron glared at him...But Rey somehow felt its her...His life his love his gf...
Rey:Accha ab chalo have ua food and take ua meds fast...
Saying so he brings the plate which consisted soup,dal and rice...He took a spoon of soup and made its way to her to have it...But Taani and gang was shocked and Sharon was fuming in anger while Swayam was feeling uncomfortable...Taani saw the soup and made faces on which Rey smiled and his doubt was getting more stronger...He felt positivity all around...
Sharon snatched the plate from Rey's hand and glared at him...
Sharon:Have it Taani don't make faces...U should have it...Now who can say no to Siren Sharon????She had it then Taani also had her meds...
Sharon gave Dal n rice to everyone and everyone was amazed by Sharon's cooking skills...
Everyone was now sitting in her room and chit-chatting suddenly Taani's eyes fell on the wall and she gets shocked...She is confused what to do...She see's everyone including Shareyam are here...Tears welled up in her eyes...She is thinking of what can b done...Suddenly Rinni looks at Taani and is shocked to see Taani...She looks in the direction Taani is looking and is shocked...
Rinni(loudly):OMG...!!!!!!!
Hearing Rinni everyone looks at Rinni who is sitting next to Taani and see's Taani having tears in her eyes...
Taani comes out of her trance but it was too late...
...All follow the gaze and are shocked...Their eyes popped out and mout has perfect O...The wall has a edit of Swaron,Taarey,her parents and daadi...


But 3 people were having wide smile and having tears...Tears of happiness in their eyes...They all looked at Taani who was now looking down unable to meet anyone's gaze...The silence was broken by the 2 persons who blurted out loudly in a sync making everyone go more confuse...
Sharon:Tannu...!
Swayam:Baccha...!
Now Swaron looked at Rey...He was just staring at the wall as if he achieved everything in his life...
Rey(in feeble stammering voice but everyone hears him):Ta...Taa...Taani...My fri...friend My pr...prince...princess My an...angel My gir...girl...girlfr...girlfriend My lo...love My li...life My Ta...Taani...My Taani...
Taani was crying by now while Rey was staring at Taani and had tears flowing down from his eyes...Swaron was there looking at Taani...While Taani was just crying looking down...

Precap:Some relations cleared...

Edited by --Mrunmayee-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Writer's Note
Hey guys m back again...I knw again after ages but cnt help guys...I have submissions,dance classes and some course going on...I hope u have liked d update...Thanku so much guys for supporting me...Thanks for ua lovely comments and likes...
PS-Its my request to unres ua comments in 3-5 days...
PPS-I have also added an edit...I hope u would like it...😳

So now hit like and comment...Bye See U All Soon...
Love
Mrunmayee
Edited by --Mrunmayee-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update dr so nice bt its totally confusing dr who was the person on the phone pls update soon dr😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear :)
Update soon dear ... :)
PM me ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow awesome update...i read ur story 2day...
bt lil bit confused...
who s dat person who calls taani???
pls pm me tooo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!!!
It was Awesome...
Update soon...
Pls...pls... PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update😛
Finally Shareyam knw d truth...
Bt who's d caller???
Excited 4 further updates
Continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg another bangon updte again
i won't say mre cz i hv no words
i lubd ol de parts
hw rey sure for her being taani
Rey winkd at taani
finally dey saw i mean ol cm to noe dt shes taani
but whoz dt prsn ? Still suspense
nd precap i got confused..sum rln cleared.. She is taani for sure but she won't lie again na..plz dun let dis happen
thnkx for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsm updat
jst lvd da edit
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx for pm


interesting update


love rey's concern for taani n sawyam akwardness


finally mystry going to reveal soon


update soon n do pm me
<3

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