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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: aarrsshhii
😊well written...hope ur hands r ok now...

Thanks :) And they're healed now!

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: sariarshi97
Do continue soon!!!

It should be up soon!

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: P4rveen12
Welcome back Hun, was so missing reading your loop closures!

Awesome and brilliant update, loved the way you have updated the part, fantastic idea.
The update was a fantastic read from start to finish,

Awww love the fact NK and Lavanya have been getting on so well,

There superb banter over who asked the other out on the date first is so cute,

So Lavanya has realised that NK is from the Raizada family, wonder how she will react.

Loved the update,

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Thanks for the PM xx

Saw your scrap! I'm alive! 😆

Posting the next part soon so you won't have to miss me or my loops anymore!

Thanks :)

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Congratulation for the new thread🥳
Superb update👏
Looking forward to read more one shots⭐️

Thanks :)

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Eccentrica
Love finding its way through revelations? Now that's going to be very very interesting.

Provided it doesn't break La's heart in between. And with the way you stopped I can't help but have that sinking feeling within me

Continue soon😊

Well...these are loop closures, so I'll close the loop, don't worry! ;)

Thanks, Lee!

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Sorry for the delay, apologies...

I loved it, but you know that...

I loved the feelings that she goes through on realising his identity, her sense of fear and heartbreak wondering why ? And her feeling of betrayal ...just when she has moved on and ready to give love and relationships another chance...I could feel her pain...situations like this often make us think the worse And we see what we want to...especially under the circumstances ! I can feel her insecurity over that issue...you wrote her feelings and her anguish, her dilemma so well.

I loved how NK has been portrayed here, not just a man who is funny but a real person with feelings and emotions ..I love how he asks La if that is all he and their relationship meant to her...its ironic how he kept away from using his family name to avoid special treatment but that name comes to cause him grief based on a misunderstanding.

Poor NK he has no clue...I love how he loves her...and how he tells off Arnav ...standing up for his love!

I loved that Arnav comes and talks to Lavanya, explaining and apologising ...and giving her the respect that was due...it was a necessary loop too...I loved how he clarified and cleared the way for NK...

I loved Khushi in this, so Khushiesque ...really ...I could just see her in her element and I loved that.I loved how she explains to La, how NK does love her and if he is like his brother he will hurt her too but lover her completely with all that he has.. I loved how she was so sensitive and attuned to the situation at hand and in her own way she handles it.

I loved the change in Arnav having found his soulmate..love how La notices how much he loves Khushi and how Khushi comes in and complains about him not caring about her, love is strange, it is not perfect sometimes but yet the power it holds over the people who are in love making them feel like it is the most special and wonderful feeling and how everyone has a different way of expressing it ...there is no right and wrong...and am so happy you gave La her love...waiting for the next loop...eagerly !

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

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Are we not a fan of happy endings? And the happiness is multifold when it involves loop closures as well.

True Lavanya's exit was not only abrupt but bcause of it there was an important point that was missed; Arnav's apology to her. That she received her due and also could find her own was very heartening.

A good one😊

Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago

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Amanram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

totally Loved this La and NK story - yes I wanted them to have got together in the show and I am glad you showed La being very affected by the break up with ASR which the show failed to do - Finally we have some action on closing the loops.

Take care of uni and hope to read as and when possible

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rimu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

thnx for d link...grt update

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

i am late i know loved the ending la over reacting and not give nk a chance to even know why he was just toss of by his girlfriend and had many door slammed in his face loved that he called asr and so cute when asr was making travel arrangement that khushi pinching him making him realized she was going along loved that khushi just stormed in and just took over asr on passport in was his wife loved arnav apologizing to la and loved how he cleared her misunderstanding so cute how nk said he would disown arnav and loved the end awesome ending

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago