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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Superb 👏

Fantastic ending. Every doubt was solve and every fear was remove.

Poor NK he suffered just because not using Raizada name as his sur name. And he was soo in love with lavanyah that he was ready to disown arnav, lavanyah was lucky and she deserved that.

Khushi and arnav played a brilliant removing misunderstandings and saying sorry, the hardest thing ever ASR spoke, was necessary to offer lavanyah so that she could move on. Khushi acted as an understanding wife and mature woman.

Looking forward to read next story.⭐️

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Wow what a superb ending
Thanks for closing this loop it deserved the ending u have it
Finally asr apologized to her
PS:thanks for quoting :)

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Welcome come back Hun,

Wow this was a perfect end to this three part story, a beautiful loop closure.

The update was amazing and superb, a brilliant read from start to finish.

Awww poor Lavanya could not trust NK and decided to ignore him.

I'm so glad you bought Khushi and Arnav into the story and they came to help NK,

Love the fact Arnav actually apologised to Lavanya which was very long overdue.

Loved khushi's amazing advice to Lavanya about giving NK a chance, it was beautifully written.

Awww loved the happy ending for Lavanya and NK at the end, a beautiful finish.

Thanks for writing this awesome loop closure, it has been a pleasure to read.

Thanking you in advance for the PM.

P.S. Request from a reader you should give up uni and become a full time writer for the IF world, lol xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 12 years ago

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ipkknd786

@ipkknd786

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

res will get back to it on my day off...right now super duper late...all because of you hehehe

Edited:

Aaawww...*sigh* it was just totally perfect!!!! I am glad that Arnav apologized for the heart ache he caused Lav...never got to see that in the show...you def kept true to their character...he still hesitates to apologize but once he gets into it he does it well...and chamkili...what do I say about her...and NK I finally get to see *errr* I mean read...him yell at Nannav...I can just imagine the scene...I am so glad you wrote this...now I won't have nightmares about a lonely lav and NK roaming around...😆

Take care...and please keep writing...can the next one be a little steamy...*gutter mind demanding it*...😳

Edited by ipkknd786 - 12 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Awesome...I think Arnav did said sorry a little bit when he break his engagement with her...but I agree with you Arnav would have Had to say a full blown sorry in case they met again and khushi too

Edited by ranogill - 12 years ago

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prati_incept

@prati_incept

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

B E A U T I F U L!!!

Now this is what can be called a real closure to both Lav n Nk track..

very well done 👏 👏 👏

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ipkknd786

@ipkknd786

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: BlueMystique

Nandu? 😆 You gave a nickname to his nickname!

Thanks :)

Totally unintentional...😆 but glad you liked it!!!!

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

loved how this loop went but also we got one thing that was vital - Arnav apologising to Lavanya for using and misleading her

in the show at the beginning she was stuck up but she did turn into a lovely person and definitely deserved an apology

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

This would have been oh so perfect in the show , nicely done!!!

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hey you, I missed a few of your updates when I went on vacation including part 2 of this one. Nicely done showing how La was hurt because of the way he used her in his effort to distance himself from Kushi. Everyone was so focused on the main event and forgot that she was used and thrown away like a dirty rag. So no matter how much she loves Chamkili, she deserved a heart felt apology which he did so well in part 3. Poor NK had to suffer her wrath but I am sure she will more than make up for it.