My heart doesn't beat without u (AR SS) 23.Nov - Complete - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Aayu-loveKaJen-


kyun ji kya confusion hai madam aap ko '...
bataiya aabhi clear kar dete hain


Yaar, Riddhima is married to Sid ya Armaan?
Flashback kaunsa tha, current situation kaunsa tha aur Dream kaunsa tha?? 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Fimmy

Amazing part!

Loved it...
Loved the way Armaan carried her and did the pheras...
Awesome!
Cont soon... ^_^

thank u soo much dear... ur all guyies comment really motivate me to write further...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sakshilksg

awesome part...

Armaan aur Riddhima ki shaadi ho gaye...wow..
now no sid, no sadness, no pain and no accuse on Armaan.
cont soon.


thank u dear/...
yes no sid ...par pain.. hmmm dekhna padega
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Prizi

Awesum part di... Luvd wen armaan rememberd their moment before roka...

thank u priyu
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

tthank u soo much dear...
.. ur all guyies comment really motivate me to write further...

and by the way nyc way to comment i really liking it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sweetgirl555

Nice part
Thanks for pm
Cont soon


tthank u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37



RECAP


Armaan shhh mein yahin hun basket hamesha tumhare saath tumhare passs... Hamesha aab koi humein aalag nahi kar sakta.. Koi nahi ... Bhagwan bhi nahi maut(ridhima hold more tightly onto armaan) bhi nahi...
Aab ye armaan sirf ridhima ka hai... Aab koi ridhima ke armaan ko haath nahi laga sakta.. Pata hai kyun...
Ridhima- kyun (innocently)..





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Ridhima- kyun (innocently)..
Armaan smile at this innocent angel sitting in front of him...
Armaan- kyun ki aab ridhima ke armaan ke pass uski basket jo hai... Hamesha ke liya **tracing his thumb on her mang on sindoor**
ridhima feel so and look at armaan's eyes very hopefully...
And understanding the unsaid question in ridhima's eyes armaan smile and answere to her...

Armaan- hamesha hamesha ke liya... Aur aab ye armaan
aapni Mrs. Basket armaan malik ko kabhi aalg nahi hone dega..

Ridhima register every thing armaan said in her mind and heart...
Armaan know why she waa silent.. She was not feeling this new world and new sense of belonging...

Armaan- toh Mrs. Basket armaan malik.. Aapko aapna naya naam kaisa laga...



armaan- bolo basket kaisa laga tumhe aapna naya naam... Mujhe toh tumhara naam aaj aacha laga hai.. Pehle toh boring sa naam tha tumhara... Aj tumhara naam bahut sundar lag raha hai mujhe...

Ridhima- I Love u armaan i Love u alot... Mein tum se bahut bahut bahut pyaar karti hun... Aagar aaj tum nahi aate toh aaj tumhari ridhima is duniya se hi khaffa ho jati...

Armaan- mein kaisa na aata basket...

Ridhima- phir se bolo...
Armaan- kya
ridhima- armaan plz...
Armaan- basket...
Ridhima- phir
Armaan- basket...

And they hug each other tightly...
Armaan- ek baat puchun basket...
Ridhima just nodded...
Armaan- meri basket itni kamjor kaise padh gai ki itna bada kadam uthane ko taiyar thi...
Ridhima- tumhari basket hamesha se hi kamjor thi armaan... Vo strong toh thi but sirf tumhara saath pa kar... Jab tum aapni basket ke saath rahte the to usse kissi ki darne ki jarurat hi nahi thi... Usse pata tha uska armaan saab ka saamna karke aapni basket ko bacha lega .. usse kuch nahi hone dega...
Is liya vo strong thi... But jab basket ka armaan chala gaya toh vo toot gai usse koi bhi sambhalne wala samjhene wala sikhane wala.. Sahara dene wala nahi tha toh kaise vo strong rahti... Usski takat hi jab chali gai thi usse dur...

Armaan- i m sry basket aaj meri wajah se tum...
I m really sorry basket... Iske liya bhagwan mujhe jo bhi saja de mein hameaha has kar sehan kar lunga...

Ridhima- saaja toh tumhe mil gai hai...
Armaan- milgai hai...matlab

*****ridhima didn't want armaan to feel guilty so to lighten the atmosphere she say*****

Ridhima- ye ki aab tumhe mujhe din raat jhelna padega mujhe bhi aur mera nakhro ko bhi...mera saare tatrums ko bhi

Armaan- oye hoye... Issi saga ke liya toh mein har janam mein galtiyan karta rahunga..basket...

Ridhima blush harder... And hid herself on his chest... And armaan dig his face in ridhima's nape... And both of them smilling their million dollar smiles... And keept on hugging each other...

after sometime armaan move apart and ask
armaan - basket tum change karlo ... bahut heavy ho raha hoga... tum change kar aao... phir thodi dar aram kar lena... okay...

ridhima - hmm...
armaan - kya hua basket...
ridhima - armaan i Luv u ... i want u tonight... plz armaan make me urs for forever...
armaan - basket...
ridhima - plz armaan...



Song from babul movie


Armaan -
(Bebasi Dard Ka Aalam
Tum Mujhe Dedo Aapne Ghum) X2
Armaan asked ridhima while wiping her tears lovingly while cupping her face in his palms.. ridhima head was hang down...

Khamoshiyan Bhi Do - ridhima hold his hands on her cheek and armaan try to make herr look at him
Tanhaiyan Bhi Do - ridhima look in his eyes as he was already looking at him
Bechainiyan Bhi De Do De Do Naaa - opening his arms wide to invite her in his arms


(Bebasi Dard Ka Aalam
Tum Mujhe Dedo Aapne Ghum) X2
ridhima hug armaan tightly and was sobbing on his chest... armaan detangle her from him and again wipe her tears away...

Khamoshiyan Bhi Do - ridhima and armaan looking in each others eyes
Tanhaiyan Bhi Do - picking ridhima in his arms and putting her in bed
Bechainiyan Bhi De Do De Do Naaa - armaan sit near her head and stork her hairs


(Bheeghi Phalkon Se Churaa Lungaa Nami
Rehanay Dunga Naa, Kahin Koi Kami)X2
armaan kissed her tears away .. from both her eyes... but controlling his own tears very hard

Tumko Daaman Naa Bhigone Dungaa - then putting blanket on her...
Ab Kabhi Tumko Naa Rone Dungaa - stoking her hairs lovinly sitting their
Uljane Ghum Ki Perchaiyee HOOO - armaan himself felt teary so stand up to go to window but ridhima stoped him by holding his wrist...

De Do Mujhe Apni Tanhaiyee - armaan didn't trun and his tear slid down his cheek..
Gumnamiyan Bhi Do - then suddenly turn around and sit near her feet and bow his head down
Naakamiyan Bhi Do - extended his hand as begging from her to give all her grief to him now
Viraniyan Bhi De Do, De Do Naa - ridhima hold his hand and kissed him but armaan hang his head down and tears flowing continously and put his face in her laps...


(Teri Hothon Mein Saaja Dungaa Hasee
Teri Raahon Mein, Bhicha Dungaa Khushi) X2
Armaan then look up and said as if wanting her to see her furture in them now...
and put his finger at the end of her lips and streach them upwards.. making her smile through tears... armaan went near her

Tum Mujhe Apna Maanti Ho Agar - but ridhima lower her head and armaan looking at her
Yu Khafaa Hoke, Naa Jhukaaoo Nazar - puting his hand on her cheen and asking her to see up
Mushkile Apni Majburi - looking in her eyes to see through them and understand her troble
Ho De Do Mujhe Sari Benuri
Pareshaniyan Bhi Do - kissing her forehead after looking deep in her eyes...
Hairaniyan Bhi Do - kissing her both closed eyes
Nhigebaniyan Bhi De Do, De Do Naa - kissing her nose making her smile a little and smile himself seeing her

Bebasi Dard Ka Aalam - making her lay down on bed again...
Tum Mujhe De Do Apne Ghum - puting comforter on her properly
Khamoshiyan Bhi Do - and making her confortable in his arms laying near her.
Tanhaiyan Bhi Do - kissing her forhear
Bechaniyan Bhi De Do, De Do Naaa - pulling her closed to her and asking her to sleep

Hmmm De Do Naa.. - closing his eyes and praying to god to soon lesseer the pain...





ridhima - armaan plz... i love u !!!!!
and armaan lose his control but after conforming from ridhima if she was sure about it...
armaan - basket tum comfortable to ho na... u know i just belong to u but u know we can wait till u r comfortable...
ridhima - i more then comfortable armaan ... i just want to be in ur arms for like eternity and i want to finish myself in ur arms... make me ur armaan...

armaan - as my basket wants.. i m at ur service... Luv u basket...
basket - luv u too armaan.. i luv u very very much

then they both spend a blissfull ... lovly .. romantic and heavenly night...
loving each other to the core as their heart desired them to ... their was a no stoppage to the love they expressing to each other as they are together after a whole year... seeing. loving. feeling eachother after a year so they were not getting over each other...

they both gone to a blissfull sleep in each others arm.. sleeping peacefully after a whole year... they don't know when they both drifted to sleep loving each other... in each other arms. and ridhima almost upon armaan's chest... sleeping listening to his heartbeet taking her name...












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Edited by Aayu-loveKaJen- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
superb.. excellent.. mind blowing update aayuuu...👏
thnk uuu for updating...
love uu...

yeayy.. i'm 1st..😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: --Orchids--

superb.. excellent.. mind blowing update aayuuu...👏
thnk uuu for updating...
love uu...

yeayy.. i'm 1st..😆😆



di aapne update maanga tha kaise nahi deti aakir...
u c mein subha karne wali thi update ... as i promised to do it in 2 day..


par baat karte karte na post limit aa raha tha... so kar nahi paai ... ab try kiya toh ho gaya,,,,,,, hehehee ...
So here u got that...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
mujhe aab pms bhi nahin milte sob sob i am so sorry for not commenting kya katun thodi sii busy hun boori tarah se fansi hun but anyhow i loved this concept you know i dont like sadma track so i always wanted kii koi iss track par likhe and thanks kii ayu aapnein likha and what amarvellous updates and parts till now jaise aapnein emotions and parts dikhaye hain abhie i so feels dmg and armaan and riddhima and this part is just so beautiful i loved this part beyond words especially when he says aab tumhe mujhse koi aalag nahin kar sakta true armaan riddhima do dil hain par ek jaan hain do update soon ayu and sorry for not replying ayu

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