Smitar's: Loving Khushi#4 link to #5 on Pg 1 - Page 75

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved Chapter 17 and 18. Both quite emotional, but lovely.

Arnav and Khushi missing each other. Arnav hugging her pillow, and Khushi hugging herself so that they feel that the other is there, whilst they slept .. poor souls. That part was emotional 😭

Everyone called her. And what Girija Devi said was right. She shouldn't consider herself as an orphan.
Her family wanted to know of her well-being, and they were worried, and missed her to such am extent that they went to visit her personally - leaving a lovelorn Arnav behind.

The update was emotional, but I couldn't help but laugh at what Mami said.
Khussi Bitiyya phell (fell) in love with Shatrugnan Sinha. Now bhat (what) ijj the ujj (use) of expecting Shatrugnan Sinha to become Rishi Kapoor?"
Well in a way she's right. Arnav has always been like that. And why separated the lovebirds? But it was Khushi's decision to leave, and to go back or not, is solely her decision :)

Loved it Smita! :)
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Thanks for the email Rashmi!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an update!!!!
awesome continue soon
wondering what the family
and Deviji will do to bring
them together 👏😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely updates... I especially liked Mamiji's thoughts in the end... Hope Khushi can forgive & move on...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing updates
What a family
Khushi arnav dono tadap rahe hain
Sach hain iss pyaar ko kya naam doon
Fabulous
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome parts all 3 of them
Thanx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it .
loved mamis dialogue
plzz plzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...!
hope girija devi does something that arnav and khushi will be back together again...!

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Posted: 12 years ago
How sweet that she cant stay apart from him regardless of everything he has done
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res for chapter 15
--edited--

Apne and iss update ne rula diya yaar...u r just awesome...

Hawww this bhawani shankar tiwari sounds like hitler...and looks like a typical UP ka halwai/cook
Oh he too is hot tempered...poor khushi...aise hi naseeb mein likhey hain uske...but ab toh usko adat hai gussa sehne ki...

She wants to be like her Arnavji...missing him too much...chanting his name for inspiration..
Arnav and khushi's convo was so heart touching...
Arnav tears...his eagerness to know...that she is not being scolded over there...
You described all these so perfectly...
Khushi aur uski baatein...you'll be a widower...lolzzz

Last line padh ke...ankhoon mein ansu aa gaye...i know its fiction...but it feels so real...
But doori pyaar bhadhta hai...distance make heart grow fonder...aisa hi kuch kehtey hai naa...

For arnav and khushi...
Mohabbatoon mein jeene wale khushnaseeb hotey hain...
Mohabbatoon mein marne wale azeem hotey hain...
Ajeeb hai hamari dastaan Jaan-e-mann...
Fasloon pe rehtey hain...phir bhi KAREEB hain...
(Credit goes to movie: jaaneman)

P.S. sorry for any typos...writing it from mobile...
Edited by rocking meenu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum dear
so now in this ff
girija & tiwari r cupid
even u wann marry these two😆😆😆

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