Smitar's: Loving Khushi#4 link to #5 on Pg 1

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leena

@aleena.1884

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

both the chapters were adorable.
loved his optimism.
even im scared now. what'll she decide after 3 days.

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AdventureAwaits

@AdventureAwaits

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

very nice i like how the story is going

i like that he dont use seduction to keep her with him

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AFTER THEIR SECOND WEDDING

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TERI DEEWANI

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hot.cakes

@hot.cakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Aww loved it

Thanks for notification

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Awesome parts.. Now I am really feeling bad for Arnav.. How much he is trying to make things better..

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

arnav is not going to give her time to think in the next 3 days...

thanx for the update...pls continue soon 😃

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kirti98

@kirti98

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

thanks for the chotu updates.👏 i was expecting large ones.😭 next time don't disappoint me. for the sake of continuing story it would be nice if khusi goes back to Lakshmi nagar so that we can read more 😳 i dont want this story to end.😳

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

had tears while reading tis.
Marvellous updts.
Cant wait to read more.

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

what it mean kkg nt decided dear

marrige over means she staying with asr right

why to go bck dear

did i miss smwher

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Part 9(2C)
Awesome Smita...Khushi thought of not understanding what's inside his head...his promising her that she wont sleep all night...Haayyee...loved it...

Part 10
WOW...he took her for shopping...Oops...traipsing all over Delhi...and his resolve of waiting for her...beautifully written...

Rashmi...loved ur interpretation on 9(2A0 and 9(2B)...as always perfect...thanks for notification...