Originally posted by: Arshix144
Thank you for yet another gripping and intriguing chapter Shy! This chapter intrigued me more than any other I must say. There are so many questions, Sakshi's little flashback that is hinting us towards the fact that she actually met Khushi. Khushi was obviously distraught and we are yet to discover why?!
There is definitely something about your writing and I only have Amu to thank for recommending this FIC to me. You make us feel what every character is feeling and that in itself is a massive achievement. I could so feel Arnav's pain I think curiosity is going to kill the cat( me)here. I am just so damn curious, I want to know just what made Khushi flee or rather disappear. It appears as though she was an emotional wreck at the time, did Arnav and Khushi have a fight?! Did someone blackmail her? ...Ok I am going to stop speculating here and let you do the unraveling ;-)
Your author's note delighted me quite a bit and I must tell you no matter what you chose to do it will be your prerogative, you are the author it is your baby and we would like you to tell the story exactly how you want to tell it. I am happy for things to unfold as they are without Khushi's flashbacks, would love to see her present self though! ( it will be more intriguing that way) then again sometimes flash backs bring in lots of clarity and answers for people who may get confused easily, it also helps us put things in perspective particularly in this case where I would love to know what happened to Khushi. I want to hear from her, just what is going through her mind???! Hmm looks like I sat on the fence there ;) having said that I trust you to pick whichever option you deem necessary and I thank you for asking your readers to put in their two cents there as well!
Bring on the next chapter whenever you can, loved the update!
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