VirMan SS: Kuch Ankahee Mulaakatein UPDATED Page 11, 19/10

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow! Awesome start! Loved it! Their conversation was reli cute? Five yearsss!! OMG. Excited to read more of ur updates. Continue soon. Do pm meee

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I always love to read your writing, you have such intensity and depth in your writing, the sort of descriptions you write, always manage to sweep me away,

you know when Virat was going on about how he felt about his music and that he knew it was what he wanted to do with his life, it made me think of you, how you let your creativity speak for you, you let it embrace you, for some reason, Virat's words made me think of you.

I want to more, want to know more of the time during the wedding and if manvi took his after and went after her dream, and if they do get to meet again, even after 5 years, anything is possible,

I really want to read more .

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awesome start

loved the update

plz cont soon

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It's Sunayana :) Stella's my nickname

@Stella_8D

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

It's a lovely start! Beautifully written. I simply love it. It's as fab as your VMs! I really loved Virat's character and Maanvi's too! I could actually imagine everything happening and it only happens when I read something so uh... what should I say? Perfect, I guess. I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm hoping they meet soon :D Please do continue whenever you get time. I'll be waiting :) And thanks a lot for the PM!

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SNTG

@SNTG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome and a great story full of emotions...continue soonnn :))

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Amazing Start..!!! they spoke their heart out in their first meet which is nice and interesting n then 5 yrs gap...Excited for next.!!!PM Me when u update next..!😊

Edited by Syed695 - 12 years ago

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

nice start they both meet there friend marriage again
and after they not not meet but still she remember
his small detail after 5 years also update soon

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maham

@...Maham...

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Avi-Dij
heyy
great start.
loved there instant connection
cant wait till she meets him again!
update soon

Thank you so much! :)) Will update soon!

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maham

@...Maham...

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: prathe
wow..👏.loved it very much...suddenly 5 years gap super twist loved it...dialogues tho super hit...while reading i could see through my eyes like i am seeing it...do continue soon...will wait for your update eagerly...😊

Thank you! :-) Glad you liked the lines haha.. will update soon! :-)

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maham

@...Maham...

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shaanu0111
Wow!! An awesome start and I found that title is an apt one, after reading the whole update.
You depicted Virat's character very well. I'm so much loving the virat's character and his passion about music made me to fall for him😆
Virat-rohan scene was short and sweet one, they seems like bff😳
Manvi totally a typical character. We cannot say she's totally a type of bubbly girl nor a serious one. Seems like she changes herself depends on the situation.😃
I think in this span of 5 years she managed to achieve/ persue her dream.
That's why she is not able to forgot virat's words which inspired her so much.😳
Waiting for their next meeting.
Takecare!!😳

Thank you so much, glad you agree about the title. :-) @Virat's character: Hahaha yeah I liked writing about him, I'm glad you liked the depiction. 😃 @Maanvi: She is a bit of a blend of the original Maanvi and my own version here. You'll find out more about her in the next update. 😊

Thank you so much for commenting!