Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 10)

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Dhan Te Nan...
10th thread...* i hope u remembr this song of shahid kapoor's film ''Kameenay''..*
10th thread...great Vats...
This season of MKM is more awesome than MKM-1...*in case of thread numbers*
Congratulations...

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

This is one of the most awaiting update I think at least from my side, Arnav decided let go his past and decided what life actually store for and what make him happy and peaceful

love the gap and difference between start and end of the update where he woke up with nightmare and where he got assurance from someone whom he adored a lot ,he wants her with him assured him she is always with him no matter what happened

Finally he got over from his past, his insecurities, his dark life toward the one ray of hope, happiness and khushi of course he is ready to give chance actually ready make khushi only him, don't know what will he do but definitely waiting to know how arnav now make khushi his

Who is childish here more, Khushi or Sumer its true while getting old person become more like a child, Sumer scared from operation like a child get scared from injection needle :) but he had phobia and his laddo like a drama queen she assumed her bade papa got one more attack laddo ji your bade papa not that weak he is just father of arnav singh raizda

How arnav got angry at his dad, like he is his dad not his son

i love the update vats

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hi50

@hi50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Congrats for the new thread!!🤗

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hi50

@hi50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Superb update as always...😊

I was dying to know Arnav's POV from your last update.. Thanks for clearing it here and so beautifully 👏... I guess you are trying to portray Arnav's emotional need here i.e. he wants Khushi to be with him by any means..

As per the physical attraction, is that strong enough at this point?

Is he at all thinking of a future marriage at this point?

I really like Sumar-Khushi scenes and their boding... I must say extremely cute.. I wish to see such scenes on and on (but so far the tie-scene was best in my opinion as Arnav's jealously is added there 😉)... I wish someday serial makers can show such things in future IPPKND with Barun-Sanaya if that ever happens (Yes, I know the answer... NEVER 😭)..

So Arnav is thinking that there will be no problem from Khushi's side and she can be manipulated easily..

Why I feel that that's going to be the HARDEST part as the poor girl is suffering from some inferiority complex and she will try everything to be apart from him??

Also, just wondering whether the situation (i.e. Arnav's feeling) would have been the same if Sumar have never ever brought up Arnav-Khushi marriage talk??

I remember that you already mentioned that it actually erased all brother-sisterly feeling from them.. 😊

Edited by hi50 - 12 years ago

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romaisaaa

@romaisaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Congrats on new thread. ... desperately waiting for next update. ...just finished reading mkm1...and since I love re-reading good stories so it must be the 20th time I m reading rather re-reading this story...totally in love with both the ffs...both the stories are very close to my heart...so keep it up buddy...good luck and all the very best:)

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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

congrats on the new thread

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ashw99

@ashw99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Congo anon...
waiting for both the updates MKM and FYS.
thanks.

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sonia jangotra

@abraxos

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

thank god arnav you are adamant on securing khushi to yourself. khushi is such a child sometimes. but sometimes she behaves maturely. i hope sumer gets ready for surgery. please i don't want sumer to die.

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sphobic

@sphobic

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

first of all writer ji ,i m really very very very very sorry for the late comment .

was dead busy with the uni stuffs,sorry,kaan pakad ke sorry

now starting with the update ,it was just awesome.

its futile to tell you what an amazing writer you are,so i will not go there, i m not worthy of praising you.

sooo...again that nightmare...god knows when his past demons will leave him.

in your this ff arnav is totally different ,i cant say where he differs but yes,he is very very very different here.

i sooo likeed the convo between arnav and khushi on sumer's by pass surgery,and here i m with arnav he has got his family after so many years and he can't take any chances there.

here arnav is like a lost child who wants to feel wanted by someone,he feels like a person who is deprived from love,affection,care for so many years .

so i m not surprised here to see arnav all possessive for khushi,as she is giving the things for which he was craving for years,and he is in no mood to let go of khushi.

khushi for him is like a ray of sunshine in his dull life, she understands him more than anyone,she doesn't leave him when he says her to leave alone in his anger, she always makes him feel wanted ,always gives him strength directly or indirectly and i will not be surprised to see him manipulative and tenacious in coming updates in order keep khushi with him.

i just loved the father-son convo,hope that sumer agrees for the surgery and be healthy.

She sighed. 'Arnavji if it is any help, then I want to let you know that you are not alone. I am with you' she said.

As she turned to leave in the absence of a reply, she felt a grip on her wrist, restraining her. It was Arnavji. 'You are?' he asked.

His hold was tight and his eyes were ablaze with an emotion she could not decipher, his voice laced with vulnerability she has never heard in his words. She squinted in dislike. Arnavji defeated and out was something that did not sit well with her so she furiously nodded her assent and assured 'Always'.

Always, he repeated in his mind, liking the sound of it.

i just loved the above lines, this is the reason he will not give up on khushi,and i think he will do anything to make sure she keeps her promise ,by hook or by crook,as long has it doesn't hurts khushi.

i hope that this long comment will compensate for the late comment😆😆

Love!!!