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Posted: 12 years ago
Thoughts on Chapter 21:-

Quite a few things happened in this episode. Rishabh has nagging doubt on what the relationship between Arnav and Khushi is, didn't take time to voice out what he is feeling. Loved that you have included Khushi's POV here. Khushi is also trying to figure out what Arnav means to her and where they stand in respect to each other. Khushi has decided not to bother Arnav but is it only because Arnav is stressed out or she herself is looking for Arnav's well being unconsciously. She has started including Arnav in to her family circle from long time but now he has started to occupy a far higher space. Wonder when she will understand that her feelings for him have started to run deep.


So, Sumer wants to get Arnav married before he says yes for the operation and I guess he is totally justified in his thinking. He understands Arnav and the vacuum in Arnav's life better than anybody and what part his bitter divorce played in scarring Arnav's impressionable mind. He is taking full responsibility of his mistakes and is doing whatever he can do make up to those mistakes and trying to secure a good life partner for his son in case he doesn't make through the operation. But will Arnav agree for Marriage? Will Sumer be able to convince Arnav ? Will Arnav spell out that he is okay with marriage with Khushi ? I hope nothing serious happens to Sumer and Arnav doesn't do anything that he goes on to regret later. Wonderful job. Update soon.
Edited by psarada - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG...I wonder how Arnav is going to react to his Father's request? And how will Khushi react to that piece of news? Can't wait to know more. Looking forward to the next update. Thanks for the notification email.
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Posted: 12 years ago
An interesting Arnavless update that focused mostly on Arnav...really liked how you did that!

So Khushi is finally thinking about her relationship with Arnav. As of now, she doesn't consider him her brother (thank god for that!), but he definitely holds a special place in her heart...I really like how you described Khushi's realization about their differences in this relationship that they share. I am looking forward to finding out when realization will dawn that she actually has feelings for Arnav. She seems pretty dense as Risabh is flirting with her left and right and she doesn't seem to be affected by it whatsoever, so who knows how she will face her own feelings for Arnav.

I don't know how I feel about Sumer's decision. I think it should be a general fact that forcing someone to marry is never a good idea (or emotional blackmail at the highest degree in this case), even if Arnav gets to pick his own bride. I feel like if Sumer said this to him when Arnav first came back to India, it would have driven him out immediately. But I think Arnav has matured a little bit, and has felt the significance of a family and loved ones being around with whom one can share their life...so I feel like he will be more receptive to the idea. I doubt he will agree to it immediately but it will be interesting to see his reaction and also if he decides to go along with the plan, how he will go about in finding a wife (or making Khushi marry him)!

Story is really getting interesting now, looking forward to reading more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thats was a nice chapter
update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh I felt the update so short..I just wanted to read on and on and on...😕
Never mind.

About update.. I liked brother- sister conversation. It is prominent that Sumer wants to correct his old wrong deeds and genuinely wants to see Arnav settled. And sort of blackmailing for his son's own good and still letting all choices open for him is his true fatherly concern. He convinces to his sister too.

Rishabh is sweetheart I must say...I would have fallen in love with him if there were no Arnav 😲 Sorry dude. Bad luck 😛
But I feel pity about the guy. He is really in love with Khushi.


Khushi's musings were more than right. I liked how she analysed Arnav's character and their relationship. But
it is the still waters that run deep. And Arnav is the other name for ocean.


It says all,doesn't it ? 😊



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Posted: 12 years ago
Rishabh is a very good friend to Khushi and I won't blame him for his restlessness on Khushi calling Arnav as Arnavji, jealousy is common in love, isn't it? 😉
Khushi always pushes only Rishabh and never Arnav but it's good that she decided she won't pressurise Rishabh any further and she won't discuss this with Arnav too. There are many issues going on already and they've found a new balance after Sumer got hospitalised, I don't want them to disturb the delicate balance by any other thing specially discussing Rishabh, who we all know would blow Arnav's mind.
Sumer is on the right path, his worries and concerns are right but with his Laddoo out of the list, I wonder how would Arnav react to it.😛
I'm worrying if this emotional blackmailing to get Arnav married would make him snap in a bad way.😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really love the nave arnav
and arnav singh raizadha signifies his name
sweet update
whats arnav thinking?
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is an adorable bundle of maturity, naivety, impishness and intuitiveness. She has a heart of gold! You have created a character you cant help but fall in love with.

This update is preparing the ground for things to come in the future - so many loose threads...

Hope you wont keep us hanging for too long!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful Update !
Was touched by Sumer's concern for his son. Sumer has a lot to make up for as far as Arnav is concerned. Arnav, his pride, his only son who grew up almost in a loveless environment. Who was let down by his own mother. Yet who grew up to be such an upright and worthy man. But at the same time a man who stayed away from any display of emotions.
And Sumer would really love it if Arnav were to marry Khushi, but he doesn't want to push it and rightly so. If only he knew that Khushi has already made a place for herself in Arnav's heart !
About Rishabh. He is getting irritated possibly by Khushi's open reverence of Arnav. Its making him feel insecure. The reason why he wanted to satisfy himself that Khushi's feelings towards Arnav are brotherly. But one good thing has come out of his goading with Khushi.
It prompted Khushi to think of Arnavji, her relation with him. Khushi does not realise it, but she is in love with Arnavji. That is the reason, the thought of calling him Bhaiyya or considering him as her elder brother never even crossed her mind once her equation with him had improved. And as a matter of fact, she even talked her way out of Rishabh's persistent questioning.
How will Arnav react to Sumer's suggestion to get married ? True he has never really analysed the extent of his feelings for Khushi, although he knows he wants her in his life and cannot allow her to go away. Will this situation make him seize the opportunity to keep khushi with him by making her his bride?
And Khushi? Will talk of Arnav's marriage fill her heart with a sense of loss ? Will she then realise her feelings for him ?
Or will Arnav and Khushi be bound by a marriage of convenience after which will start their journey of the discovery of love together ?
Really impatient to see what turn the story will take .
Pl do update a bit faster this time.

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