Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 10)

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1001

OHHH...i want to read moreee

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aayt

@aayt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1002

after summer's demand in return his surgery that was expected

bua did wonderful job by informing him in advance that went well during samer's meeting

blast I was expected from him cum but not that bad he was composed n calm visibly with his dad buy time

to sleep over that but oh boy that raizada volcano was ready to erupt he was like mad bull burning in rage

khushi seems to be care less what was happening around had no idea n that raizada bob blast on her

to her luck it was not that bad good for her clueless soul

bua tried to divert his mind is that so but it was oil on fire moreover khushi's reshib nama was quite

unpleasant for his already sore mood that actually went well she is his n keep her with him what better

then that opportunity samer already served him in golden platter so ek teer do shikar

this is the high point of the story various directions can take story from here

looking forward what u have store for us

mind blowing job dear u r brilliant writer no doubt

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1003

So he is going to marry khushi? Yeyyy
i wonder what wl b reaction of everypne:p

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1004

Awsome update! It was all about Arnav this chapter. An emotional rollercoaster ride. Poor Arnav. I could feel his anger going up a notch one at a time! Lol

Sumer is one clever man but then again so is Arnav. Waiting to see how father son react to this decision.

Do continue soon

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1005

superb update plz update soon

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1006

Nice! Glad A finally figured out a way to make the situation work for him. Hope he handles things with K with sensitivity...

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1007

Awesome update..
sumer guessed it right..
i m happy with arnav's decission..
update soon

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1008

OMG

OMG

OMG

EEE this is my favorite part till now
Ahh now just have to wait and watch as the story begin to make khushi mine I meen arnav

Oooh i loved it

Update soon

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sincereme

@sincereme

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1009

Awesome update...

You have portrait arnav emotions beautifully...Being a child who has seen his parents fighting all their married life and undergo a lot of pain due to it, he don't believe in marriage... How can he associate happiness with marriage... Now his father using his health and operation to persuade him surely didn't go well with him... But still he control his temper... That shows his love for his father...

I love how arnav always deal with patience with khushi... Even he was in a very bad mood but he didn't lash at her for her persistence for dinner...

The smug smile that graced his face after the thought, the gleam in his eyes, was not of a lover who has found the way to keep his beloved near him. It was that of a particularly obstinate child who had accidentally figured out how to extract his favorite toy from his parents. I don't know but this line is giving me an unsettle feeling... He wants her as to be happy but not as a lover but child who wants his favorite toy... But marriage is not like that...

A little TOO easily. And the thought made him uneasy. Life had taught him that easy things demanded a higher price in long run. Is that mean khushi will has to pay for this decision??

I don't but i m little afraid...

continue soon...

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1010

chapters 21 & 22:
21 came as a real shocker.. never in my wildest dream iI had though that Sumer can come up with something like this...and I am not sure I was very thrilled with the idea at first... Arnav is already walking over a narrow rope balancing hundreds of emotions and may be getting acquainted with a lot more of them every day.. at this state pushing him with this huge issue...

ahh! to tell that I was surprised by Arnav's reaction would be an understatement...but then again that was only the calmness before the storm hit the shore...you emoted every single path that his thought went through so skillfully that it was like peeking into his mind and sensing what was happening there,,, just mind blowing..
But what was he thinking? heis gonna propose khushi's name to Sumer? he detests the institution named marriage so much! yet he is ready to relate this one person that he came to treasure with his life with marriage? i understand he is becoming insecure but shouldnt it be more rational from his side to remove this insecurity by bridging this gaps by strengthening the emotional connection between them?
i just cant wait to find out what happens next.. waiting with a baited breath...

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