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-spongy-

@-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

the only thing i can say right now is MAAR DALA

and BATAMEES 😆😆 i know JDJ se kuch zyada hi influence ho gayi hun main

but this was totally mind blowing

it was wow !!!

thanks for the PM

do write more

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Shweta

@addicted_love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Wow you updated so fast !!! 😊
What a speed 😊

Coming to the update... it was so romantic and hot !! Beautiful !!!! 😊
I just Loved it a lot !!! 😊

Thnx for the PM 😊

Continue soon...

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VruShan_MaNan

@VruShan_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Now this is what I call a hot update. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Loveedd it.❤️

Swayam is such a gentlemen, he doesn't want to hurt his girl but kya kare hai toh vo bhi normal ladka, but loved the way Sharon made him realize that she equally wants him.

Hayeee Loveee ittt so much.

Now eagerly waiting for the next update.😉

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Magical_NaiRan

@Magical_NaiRan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

oh my god whats dis varshuuu😲😲😲

i m dead...

i m out of words now...

dis is justtt tooo hot to handle

swayam controlling himself

hurting himslf...loved dat part yaar seriously

and sharon expressing her love...and avoiding each other loved it yaar

tent part...tooo hott yaarrr☺️

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934800

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#65

My God
It was awesome the best like literally wow
I had butterflies in ma stimach actaullly while reading this update

I was reading it in the perfect environment one cud wish
Like right now wen am commenting
Its 9:55pm
Ma room's curtians windows lights and doors are close
Andi made sure i have this romantic environment
So that i can really enjoy maself while reading..lol

I loved it hw swayam was feeling guilty and hurt himself
And sharon comming and surrendering to himfully,,,and damn u describe everything so well, like the love making scene was so beautifully and gracefully described. It was mindblowing, like literally blew ma mind.

Awww next update is last :(
I just dnt want this nignt to be end
If u knw wot i mean

Sorry for late unres
But i actually that was intentional as i wanted to create that setting and mood for maself, as i knew its gna be dangeriously romantic

It not just lived to up to ma expectation but it was better thn that.

Do write more and pm me

Edited by Swaron.maniac - 12 years ago

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

varshi,

sorry yaar, late ho gayi---so i read both the parts together 3 and 4.

i loved the gang secene...and swaron 1st day.

kiss was marvellously written.

but the last scene was too much for me.

i loved the way swayam was guilty...loved how sharon stops him from blaming himself, saying she is equally enamoured of him.

but i did not somehow, want them to have sex right now.

brilliantly written and all varshi, but somehow i told u, its just a personal , rather conservative aattitude of mine.

but even then i love the innocence in all of it, and the true love.

i guess when u actually meet your match...and u know that he will never hurt you----then the heart wants to give him everything you have, mind body and soul.

anyway, loved your writing.

love--medha

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#67

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unres

OMG!! what a update

fantastic ..love is too good

update soon

nd ss bhi update plzz

Edited by swaronlove001 - 12 years ago

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
varshi,

sorry yaar, late ho gayi---so i read both the parts together 3 and 4.

i loved the gang secene...and swaron 1st day.

kiss was marvellously written.

but the last scene was too much for me.

i loved the way swayam was guilty...loved how sharon stops him from blaming himself, saying she is equally enamoured of him.
but i did not somehow, want them to have sex right now.

brilliantly written and all varshi, but somehow i told u, its just a personal , rather conservative aattitude of mine.
but even then i love the innocence in all of it, and the true love.

i guess when u actually meet your match...and u know that he will never hurt you----then the heart wants to give him everything you have, mind body and soul.

anyway, loved your writing.
love--medha

hi medha i actuallu dont reply to any comments but i wanted to say...ur comments make my day...😊

When ever i update an Os i wait for ur comments...ya even iam conservative in mind...even i dint want them to have sex this early...but i thought y not go with little practical approach...😊😊 im sorry if i have hurt ur feelings in any way😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

hi medha i actuallu dont reply to any comments but i wanted to say...ur comments make my day...😊

When ever i update an Os i wait for ur comments...ya even iam conservative in mind...even i dint want them to have sex this early...but i thought y not go with little practical approach...😊😊 im sorry if i have hurt ur feelings in any way😊

yeah i understand. ur feelings were quite apparent in the way you stopped going into further details about the scene after the initials.

and glad to know that u look forward to my responses, so do i;

---i cant help giving them...ur works impress me so much.