2#Never wished u to be mine part-14 pg-41 *05/07*

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bakula_gandhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

Khushi needs to tell arnav the truth

Continue soon

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S.B.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

That was interesting update <3

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shradha_23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

awesome story😊

update soon

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

damn that was so heartbreaking

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aisha

@cute00ish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

Its really a good story

last update was emotional

loved it

both kids are craving for fathers love.

Unknowingly arnav had taken his responsibility of father as he protected her daughter

love arhi scene there love is extraordinary

I know khushi is away from arnav bcz of his family but what about those kids they need their father love.

I gues we r going to know how our arhi met

then shadi etc etc.

eagerly waiting for more

hope update soon

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Nadia

@harshitfever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

hi new reader

just started reading this ff

I read the previous two chapters it was really emotional

hawww. Loved arnav and kids scene unknowingly calling him father .there pain as they didn't get any fatherly love.

it was really nice scene (hope to see more in future )

then comes our beloved arhi scene

it was beutifully written with each emotions.

they all are craving for loves. Children for their fathers,wife for her husband an vice versa

then comes the revelation that why khushi left him.

there love is true love as khushi left for him and arnav can't accept any other woman in his life

hope the faceoff each other very soon

eagerly waiting to know how their love life started.

pls update it soon

people like me can't wait too long

will comment later for previous chapters

as I didn't finish reading yet.

pls bare any mistake or something inappropriate as I gave first suc a big(for me) comment in my whole IF journey

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

U know whenever this song plays, a strange feeling overcomes me n im almost in tears n smiling reminiscently...both at the same time...same happened even nw...love d update to bits,,,...could imagine their expressions all so easily...them keeping their hands unknowingly, at least on arnavs part reminded me of the scene wen she found him for the first tym when he ws kidnapped...the rellief n love coursing thru their veins...haay...my vision is blurring, arshi always has this effect on me!!!

Plz pm me next time u update😃