~ NO FEAR CAN LAST WHEN I M WITH U ~ AR SS

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~ NO FEAR CAN LAST WHEN I M WITH U ~ AR SS


Hiyya People...
Here goes Another SS of Mine...
This one is not complete one yet...
So I will keep posting the parts I had already post in DMG blog... :)
Hope u all will be ENJOY...

Do comment and Press LIKE :)
Love u all Muwaahhh <3
take care...


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~ NO FEAR CAN LAST WHEN I M WITH U ~ AR SS

PART 1


The place were burning... It was a big Mansion were two couple lives with their daughter's...
Some people were standing outside looking at the big place and others were trying to control the fire... How the fire got caught, no one knows...
'Mamma... Help me...
Mamma Save me... Mamma... Mamma...' Small girl was shouting for help... Asking her mother to save her from the burning place but guess no one was there to hear this little girl cry...
'Meri bacchi andar hai... please koi use bacchao...' I lady in her 30's were begging everyone who was around there watching and helping to control the fire...
A man in his last 30's was making some calls to bring the fire track to control the fire as the neighbors trying wasn't helping as the fire keep spreading more...
'Aap kuch karo na... Waha meri bacchi pata nehi kis khaalat main hai... Please aap bachao use...' the lady shake her husband while the elder daughter was holding her mother dress...
'Apne aapko sambhalo aap... Main andar jaakhe dekhta hoon...' he said...
'Mujhe meri bacchi chahiyeh... Kissi bhi keematpe...' lady keeps crying...

Soon the fire track came and someone from them went inside as they had put protect... He came with a smile girl who was 8yrs old in his arm...
Lady and Man run towards her, her one side from face and body was burn... Parents took her to the hospital as soon as they could...



- 12years later -


It was a big mansion and silent were all around as it was late at night... Mansion was beautifully design with expensive furniture...
As we look around we see a big hall with expensive couch, table and cupboards... Big LCD tv and music system with a big rack full of CD's, books and files...
On left there was a door which leads to kitchen and not far away, there kept a big glass table with 6chairs around it...
On right side, there was a door which take to the study room which was again beautifully decorated with expensive furniture...
It seems like we had enter a mansion of some KING...
Every thing was arrange nicely and kept clearly... It seems no one ever lived there...

There was a stair to lead up to the first floor and as we land in the first floor we saw a long corridor...
Side way in one wall, there were picture's of the family... Guy, lady and two daughter of them...
From the very first day born to till now... As we move a head on the corridor they kept furniture on side ways for decoration...

There were five room... Two were locked as three were open...
Lets see in the room... Curtains were closed the first room as it was maroon, as the curtains move with the wind, saw little of the room...
Two people were sleeping peacefully...

The next room it was red curtains hang on... As we see inside, it there was a big round bed in the middle of the room...
Everything was red and white... Wall colors were red as the curtains around the windows were on red...
Furniture were in red color where as the bed sheet white and comforter which the girl put over her was red in color...

Side there was a table filled with files and some were left open... Seems the girl had been working till late...
Everything else were kept nicely...

As we move to the next room we saw another girl sleeping with purple comforter hiding her...
She was hugging white pillow where as her face were hiding in her hair which was all over around her...
From the room it seems she loves collecting bears as one side of the room in a track it was kept different size of teddy bears which was in different colors...
Next to it there was a white table and chair with purple design on it...
Also the bed was white in color to match the wall and curtains were in purple color as the ceiling were white with purple design...

There was a door which lead to the balcony which was left open to the winds come inside and out...
Curtains were dancing as the winds were playing with it...
There was another door which take to another part which had a big wardrobe and next to it there was washroom, so we can changed staying there without coming to the room...
Big mirror was attach to the wardrobe door and it was full length one...

'Help...
Mamma Please help...'
Someone was calling for help... But whom...
We move out to see the girl mumbling in her sleep...
She was hugging and clicking to the pillow hiding her face deep in to it...
'MAMMA...' With jerk she wake up and sit on the bed... Sweating and shaking from head to toe...
She was breathing fast as if she had been fighting for her life...

Footsteps were heard outside from the room and three people came running to see the girl sitting on the bed...
'Baccha...' The lady move to the girl and sit next to her to be hug tight by the girl...
'Kiya huva princess...' Girl who was in black night dress ask sitting on her other side caring touching her back were as the girl were hugging her mother...
'Phirse sapna dekha na bacchi...' lady asked...
The girl who was scared hell nods her head still her eyes closed shut tight... She was hugging her as if she let go, the same thing would come running to her...

Man were standing helplessly watching his young daughter hugging to her mother...
He was really worried for her from the last 12yrs and they were now helpless as they couldn't make her forget that incident happen years ago...
The fear had occupied in her heart and mind somewhere that no one could erase it...
'Sshhh... Baccha... Kuch nehi huva...
Dekho aapki mamma hoon na... Aur aapki di bhi hai... Papa bhi hai...
Hum sab aake paas hai, aapko kabhi akela nehi chodungi baccha...'lady said...

No one talk for a while and the girl slowly calm down, but she was still hugging her mother...
'Aap log jaakar sojao...
Main hoon iski paas...' Lady said...
Knowing, it would be the best to let it go for the night, other two left without saying anything...
The girl were hugging her mother and soon she was again sleeping...
The lady make her sleep on the bed and care her head thinking how that incident has change everything in this girl life...
She closed her eyes sending a silent pray to the god to bring happiness in her younger daughter life...



- NEXT DAY -


Sun rays were coming from the window and the girl hide her face with pillow...
Her alarm started to ring showing it was 6 in the morning and it was her daily routine to go out for jogging every morning...
As the night past with the fear as usual making her night horrible but in the morning, she always forget about it and live another day happily with her mother, father, sister and friends..

'Errr... Itni jadi subah kaise hogayi...'the girl said as she stretch her hands out from the comforter to off the alarm which was kept on the side table next to the bed...
She pull the pillow out from her face showing her feature...
She had her eyes still closed, some hair were on her forehead and cheeks...
Her pinkish lips curved in to a beautiful smile... 'Chal beti... Utja... aaj papa ki saat office bhi jaana hai... lekin usse pehle, morning jogging...'

She came out of bed stretching her hands and then move to the washroom to change...
Soon she came out from her house locking the door behind as no one was awake yet... She knows by the time she reach home, mother and father would be awake and as usual mother would be shouting to wake my loving sister awake...
Smiling how crazy her family could be, she started her jogging as usual...
As she keeps jogging she reach to the near by park were someone was playing basketball... As usual it would be children's there but today don't know why no one was around there other then this guy...

As she look, she figure out who it must be... The well built body can always be figure out who it is who is crazy playing basketball...
'Yo Buddy, Aaj subah subah... Kiya huva...
Tina ya meena ne neend kharab kardiya kiya..' The girl move in to the court as naughty smile form on her lips as her eyes twinkling...
The guy who must be in his middle 20's turn around flashing the dimple hearing this sweet voice of his most naughtiest friend... Ah... not only friend... BEST FRIEND...
'uff beautiful, yeh subah subah kis chudail ki naam le li yaar...
Waise bhi tumhari chehre dekhke din acchi jaanne wala nehi hai...' the guy said...
'Kiya kaha tumne...' girl said as she would punch him next moment...
'Chill beautiful...
Waise tum yaha...' guy asked...
'Buddy, tumhe pata haina main daily yaha aati hoon...
Waise bhi aajse papa ki saat office jaane wali hoon... Aur kaam se pehle tohda jogging karenge toh mind fresh hojanege...' girl said taking the ball...
'Accha, yeh toh mujhe pata hi nehi ta...
So lets do one thing... How about one on one match...' Guy asked taking the ball from her...

Soon both started playing and they were not really playing, they were chasing each other around the court...
Sometimes, girl distract the guy and sometimes the guy...
As they were playing, they didn't know how the time goes... It always happen whenever they met with each other...
The girl were going to make a basket suddenly the guy came and tickle her waist which was visible as she put her hands up... She felt as current run in her spine and shocked by the sudden action she turn around...

As the guy were standing real closed to her, as soon she turn to face him, the bump to him and both lost balance...
Soon both fall on the floor rolling and stop with the guy on top of the girl...
They both look each other eyes, and was lost...For them the world got disappear around them when they look each other eyes...
'Tringgg tringgg..' the girl phone started to ring and their eye locked was break...
Guy stand giving his hand to her and she stand saying, 'See u' she went off to her house...



- BUDDY POV -


'Yeh mujhe kiya hogaya hai...
Kyun main baar baar use dekh ke aise react karta hoon...
Hum dono 5yrs se acche dost hai... Phir bhi mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai woh mujhse apni sabse badi dar ki baare khulke baat nehi karte...
Kiya woh mujhe acche dost nehi maante...
Nehi nehi...
Yeh main kiya soch raha hoon...

Main jaanta hoon main uski pehle dost hoon jo woh mere saat hokhe sab kuch bhul jate ho...
Kiya hum sirf dost hai ya usse zyada...
Sab ladkiyon mere peeche bhagte hai, aur main... Mujhe uski alawa koi aur dikhai nehi dete...
Kiya yeh sirf dosti hai ya usse zyada...

Pata nehi woh mere baare main kiya sochte hai...
Kiya woh bhi mujhe apne dost se zyada maante hai...
Aaj main bhi apne dad ki saat kaam karna shuru karne wala hoon... Aur woh bhi...
Aaj se bohot kuch badhal ne wala hai, acche ya burai ke liyeh main nehi jaante...
Bas itna jaante hai mujhe har pal usko dekhne ka mann karta hai... uski saat rehne ka mann karta hai...
Jaanta hoon hum ab pehle jaise nehi mil sakte... Aur ab humhare padai bhi khatam hogaya, ab hum apne apne family business koh sambhalenge...
Kiya aage hum pehle jaise ek dusre ke saat waqt bhita paenge... Kiya jab main chaahun main use mil sakte hai...
Mujhe nehi lagta...

Kiya mujhe apne dil ki baat use bata dena chahiyeh...
Nehi nehi... Woh mujhse pyar nehi karti toh???
Main nehi chaahte humhare dosti par koi asar kare... Lekin kiya main yeh karke sahi kar raha hoon...

Ohh god...
Please help me...
Jo ladki mujhe jeene nehi de rahi, mere neend main aakhe mujhe satati hai, woh aur koi nehi mere best friend hai...
Mujhe pata nehi main kab use pyar kar beitgaya...
Kiya woh yeh jaankhe mujhse nafrat karne lagegi maine use dost se zyada maanna...'

I felt my mobile vibrating and saw my mother calling... Answering her call, I make my way to go home which was away from her only five blocks...
I know it was only way now I can see her every day, so from today I started to come early just to meet HER...


- BUDDY POV ENDS -




- BEAUTIFUL POV -


When I felt my mobile ringing I break the eye lock which I was sharing with my buddy...
He move so I could stand up and seeing him forwarding his hand, I hold it and bidding bye I make my way to go home...

'Coming Ma...' I said answering the call and cut before my mother could say anything...
My mind were busy thinking about something else... I didn't know why, but I seen something else in his eyes which I never see before...

'Yeh kiya ho raha hai...
Main kyun soch rahi hoon uske baare main...
Lekin aaj achanak woh itni subah subah kyun waha poch gaya...
I mean I know how crazy he is about basketball but he also loves his sleep... I know when it comes to wake up early in the morning, how difficult it is for him...

Ufff... Kiya tum bhi...
Us idiot ki baare main sochke apni dimag kyun kharab kar rahe ho...
Chalo jaldi ghar chale, nehi toh ma meri khoon peejanege..'.

Soon I was standing in front of the main door which was now open and as I moved inside, I saw my father sitting in the hall hiding his face behind the newspaper...
I saw mother going in to the kitchen giving intrustion to one of the servant... and my lovely sister wasn't any where to be seen means she is still not awake yet...
I move inside not making any noise and stand behind my father who was busy reading the newspaper...
I put my hands around his neck suddenly to make him startlet and jump from his place...
'GoodMorning Papa...' I shouted as loud as I could which to my father drop the newspaper...

'ufff... Baccha, itni zor se kyun chilla rahi ho...' father said putting his hands on his ears...

I giggle seeing my fathers reaction and I know how much big nautanki he is sometimes...
He is the best papa in the world who loves me to the core and always save me from my mother who I know will be coming shouting to me as I had bring earthquake to the mansion by shouting like that...
Kissing father cheeks I make my way up to the room before my dearest mother come and scold me...
Guess, I speak too fast... As I was in middle of the stairs, I heard my mother calling my name...
'RIDDHIMA...'


- BEAUTIFUL POV ENDS -



Hey People...
Here I m starting Another OS :)
Hope U all Will Like...
take care...
Love u all


With Love
RihooHaws
Edited by RihooHaws - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow..one more new ss..luvng d concpt...prt was awesum..thnks..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats diduuu...

i'm soo hppy ki apney yahan bhi yeh story strt kar di..
its easier to read n commnt here...
muahh..
love uu...
❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gudduluvs

Wow..one more new ss..luvng d concpt...prt was awesum..thnks..




Hey dear...
thanks for the comment :D
awww... u love the concept...
its really a nice compliment :D
thanksss againnn...
and u r most welcome...
Hope u will love the further parts :)
keep enjoyinggg :D Muwaahhh <3 :) take care :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Aaayu...
Hehehe thanks AGAIN ;)
Muwaahhh
love u :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Dear...
Hope u will like further parts tooo :)
take care :D

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Originally posted by: --Orchids--

congrats diduuu...

i'm soo hppy ki apney yahan bhi yeh story strt kar di..
its easier to read n commnt here...
muahh..
love uu...
❤️



Hehehe Muwah muwah muwahhh :D
hui hui.. me happy to see my sugarpie happy...
I know koi ho na ho... tu jarur khush hojaenge ;) khush raho meri sugarpie :D
Muwaahhh. love u tooo loadsss :D
take care :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OSUM appi.. ❤️
really ❤️ it
Continue super soon
mwahh lov u sooo much 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear,
it's soo good to have found you here. I've read your stories on AR on fb, they were all so good. this story is also really nice, I would love to read the further parts. please add me to your pm list.
love.

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