Ray of sunshine - VIRMAN - SS - part 10 - Page 4

if i comment first dina teases me if last u..so im confused
unres!!

never in my dream i thought that this OS will have such a twist..anu u r indeed the best writer ever!!
though the concept is different but i was thinking of addicted while reading it mayb cuz of this major turn u have brought in the story!! MANVI IS ALIVE !!poor manvi she is being tortured!!
"Even with all his power and will, he could not change his destiny even for a day."- wish we could change our destiny accordingly but certain things are just beyond our control!!
eager to know how the story will unfold ..waiting for next!!

Originally posted by: roshreb

if i comment first dina teases me if last u..so im confused
res!!

comment for part2

Im in short of words! OMG!!! All ur stories are competing with one another..and this is another master piece of urs..and im getting hell confused which one to bug u for 😆 ur the best writer ever..this story is leaving me speechless..awesome! Update soon plz ❤️

Originally posted by: bluebolt

just read and enjoy but if u dont unres, i keep checking back again and again and I dont like it

so i will hurt u..

u know why i was late to unres the other time & it was the 1st time !!
😲 u will hurt me ..how ??😕 :-p lol

what a twist...Maanvi is alive! I am shocked, but I curious to know how this will be unfold further

OMG!! 1. why did I save this for later?? I should have read this yesterday!!! OMGGG its simply beautiful!! The father daughter bonding! <3 And the mother daughter too!! Goshhh Anu you are too good!! Diya seems like another cute!! <3 And well after reading part 3 I am 200% sure that you are definitely the BEST WRITER I've ever seen!! Like seriously! It takes real brains to think of such genius Idea's!! I mean we always see that "Manvi is no more, n she appears in some other weird way, like she is married or ran away" but this is GENIUS GENIUS!! Only you can think of such an Idea! A scientist!! Mind-blowing OS which needs to be made into an SS!! Am outta words to describe how amazing your writing is! <3

Incredible story!! It great to read new stories from u!!!! LOVED it.. It's a quite depressing story but loveeed it!!! Love the mother daughter duo <3 so cute n virat ko toh baat alag hi hai!!! Now Wannna know how they will find her!!!! Continue soon n thank u for updating back to back!!!!! It's a pleasure to read ur stories!

I just don't know what to say. As ever another fantastic piece of writing from you.