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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

fabulous update and a real shocker. i never expected the story to start like this.

what a jerk that swayam is!!

i wanna call him every name in the book right now although i know he will redeem himself by the time this ss ends.

that note has to be the most callous thing i've ever read.

good to know that sharon is going to stand up and fight that jack**s.

way to go girl!

plz continue this n update undesired love, its been so long since that was updated.

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serat

@serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

Hi:)
Awesome
Update superb
Plzzz
Plzzz
Continue
Update next chap soon
Plzzz

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

it was just awesome

awesome plot, nice idea, full on emotions and perfectly written

u r writing style is awesome

thanks u so much for writing

thanks for the pm

and do pm me when u update next

Edited by 8085548022 - 12 years ago

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Thanks for sending the correct link Aisha ;)
And the start seems gripping, sharon in shekhawat mansion...the title unforgettable stayover is relevant to the situation so i would like to read it further for sure.

ThumbsUp.

sowwiee for the wrong link, i feel so embarassed now when ppl tell me the same thing 😳

Thank you for the comment. :)

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: austen4ever
fabulous update and a real shocker. i never expected the story to start like this.
what a jerk that swayam is!!
i wanna call him every name in the book right now although i know he will redeem himself by the time this ss ends.
that note has to be the most callous thing i've ever read.
good to know that sharon is going to stand up and fight that jack**s.
way to go girl!
plz continue this n update undesired love, its been so long since that was updated.

well this was actually the way i has thought of the story to move forward. this was the concept only just i wanted to save this for chapter 1 and not prologue. about redeeming himself by the end, nah, i dont make my stories so predictable. by what i know bout guys, its not easy to know their story.

and there are much bigger twists coming ure way. so be ready for that

ill be updating UDL tomorrow :)

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: 8085548022
it was just awesome
awesome plot, nice idea, full on emotions and perfectly written

u r writing style is awesome

thanks u so much for writing

thanks for the pm

and do pm me when u update next

Thank you :D

did u get a pm this time?

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Omg... ye concept hai...😲

Its superb... its rocking...🤗

Dare u discontinue it... u'll regret ur decision... 😈

Hawww... swayam is such a cassinova... idiot ..😡

That letter was heartwrenching ... for the girl who loved him with all her heart & he tore it in his stupid egoistic passtimes...😭😡

Ab samajh aa gya meko ki inki kitni age hogi...😆

Poor sharon... tabhi yahan nhi aana chahti thi...😳

His mom is so sweet ... & he just fake this sweetness ... 🤢

Wish she can take her revenge & torture him badly...😉

Fir chahe ... swayam ko akal aa jaye... aur inki lovestory shuru ho jaye...🤣

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..Aishaa..

@..Aishaa..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: yogini64
Omg... ye concept hai...😲

Its superb... its rocking...🤗

Dare u discontinue it... u'll regret ur decision... 😈

Hawww... swayam is such a cassinova... idiot ..😡

That letter was heartwrenching ... for the girl who loved him with all her heart & he tore it in his stupid egoistic passtimes...😭😡

Ab samajh aa gya meko ki inki kitni age hogi...😆

Poor sharon... tabhi yahan nhi aana chahti thi...😳

His mom is so sweet ... & he just fake this sweetness ... 🤢

Wish she can take her revenge & torture him badly...😉

Fir chahe ... swayam ko akal aa jaye... aur inki lovestory shuru ho jaye...🤣

itna lamba comment palar toh mein dhany ho gayi *wiping off my tears*

yess, this is the concept. actually i really wont say this is the concept because this story is just full of twists. so yes, a very twisted story, is what you can expect.

Aisa kya kar legi? iss duniya mein koi peda hi nahin hua, jo aisha ka kuch bigad ley. aisha ka kuch bhi bigadna yaani apni khud ki zindagi bigadna 😎